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Reviews for Assimilation

By : ccino49
  • From KCGreen on June 02, 2007
    Hi CC,
    Had to give this story a try since you were on holiday. This chapter (14) is wonderful! I love the girls together, just being girls. Well done.
    KC
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  • From on May 20, 2007
    I absoulutley love this story!.....wait....I love all your stories! you are a really talented writer and i love reading you material. Its always a promise.
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  • From Alabaster on May 11, 2007
    after nearly a week of reading when I should have been sleeping, reading until I should have already left for work, and reading once on my day off... I have finally finished this emotional rollercoaster. How COULD YOU? lol. YOu took her away from him, only to bring her back with a five year old?!? Come on!

    oh sorry, I really loved the story it was eloquent and just amazing, I wanted nothing more than them to live happily ever after, there are so many tidbits that could be written now. Have you any interest in doing that? I love no one comes when you cry so I had to read this, now I'll have to check and see if maybe there is any new chaps to the other story :D

    I want to know what would have happened if she killed him. I need an AU with that info! :D Please god give me what i need! lol...

    I loved it honestly, you write so well, especially when you create such intricate new characters, nothing nearly as boring as a normal mary sue, where the character is as flat as a sheet of paper, and just kerplunked into sixth year with draco as her love interest, and harry as the man fighting for her affections.. YOur story had an excellent plot, and it was... I can not say enough how great it was. :D

    ps- write another epilogue lol.
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  • From misslala on April 05, 2007
    On the whole: I laughed, I cried...WOW what an incredibly powerful story!@ The ending...so sad that they were a part for so long. I am still crying, LOL What a pitiful sight. I think wow is about the only intellegent thing I can say. Gods I hope that "No One Comes When You Cry" turns out happier. How could they have left so much to poor Nina...ARGH. hahaha WHat a wonderful story dear, thank you much for sharing and honestly I hoped for a long time that a child would be in the picture. She lost her powers but her son, their son carried them on...Thank you so much for sharing this story!!!!! I loved it!
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  • From misslala on April 03, 2007
    I just finished chapter 5 and I must say I think you have a wonderful knack for OFC's :) I love Jane jfust like Sky - so vulnerable and yet so pure. hehehe I will finish this soon and of course drop you a review everytime I am torn from a chapter for work or whatever, LOL You are too damn good not to get kudos for your work :)
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  • From ccino49 on March 12, 2007
    Hi Jen618 and Shaheena. Only managed to get a beta for later chapters. Glad your reading and enjoying though.
    I tend to write how I speak and speak as I think, just concentrating on what I need to say rather then how it should be said. But thats me. lol. Please keep reviewing. It's always apreciated.
    ccino
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  • From Jen618 on March 11, 2007
    Hi ccino,
    I'm reading now! I can see you're finished but wanted to say hi and drop a line. It is an interesting story, but it would be better with a beta.
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  • From shotah76 on March 07, 2007
    Still a great story! Please please please find a proofreader--your plot is too good to get hung up on grammatical errors!
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  • From skydancer on March 02, 2007
    I am almost at a loss for words......
    this was an amazing journey that you led us on, and all the characters were so alive and full of energy ( okay,I'm miffed at the 'golden trio's" grumps, but then Gryff's never will get along with Slitherins....)the ending was almost anti-climatic, but done wonderfully and elequently. I was in tears when Nina was fading away in the (almost) Loved the Epi....big suprise after all the shagging a baby!!! lol....

    I hope that more people read the 'Main Canon Charater" + "OC" sections more often, they are a fresh and delightful escape from muggle day to day.

    all the best!

    Sky
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  • From shotah76 on February 28, 2007
    So far, good plot. Could use some editing for grammar and spelling.
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  • From on February 24, 2007
    I liked everything about the story but the ending. Frankly, any 'gods' who would punish someone for not being willing to kill an unarmed, helpless person who has no ability to protect themselves....... should be destroyed.

    They are simply idiots, and should be ABHORRED, because they are as bad as Voldemort ever was.
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  • From Happyappy on February 20, 2007
    I can't beleive it is over! You certainly had an ending I didn't expect. I knew she couldn't kill him. Severus certainly had no problem. It was so sad that no one remembered her! She certainly did well for herself and her son. I was really afraid at the end knowing Severus that he wouldn't go with her. It was very sad that she lost her magic too. I was so glad at the end that Severus was allowed to remember her. Excellent song choice! That song was the perfect one. I, the "question princess" (I don't think I have ever been called a princess before) still have questions, but alas, since it is over, I will refrain from asking them. OK, just one. You will let me know when you post your next story, won't you? Pretty please. Great job on this story. I will miss little Nina and her Severus!

    Lets see if the third time is the charm, I keep loosing my internet connection before I can get this posted.

    Sansa
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  • From Emmylovedraco on February 20, 2007
    Noooo! it can't be over not yet please keep going dont end it not now, Pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeee,'
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  • From Hellfire88 on February 20, 2007
    Absolutely fantastic story. I've been in love with this story since the first chapter. You have such a talent for detail and amazing plots. You seem to remember the little things that were mentioned in the beginning and form into even greater things later in the story. I love this story and I hope that you continue to write stories as great as this one. I'm begging PLEASE WRITE A SEQUAL!!!!!!!
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  • From SnapesBabe on February 20, 2007
    I'm crying now! I loved it. I loved how they got together at the end. I'm glad i went looking for harry potter fan fic that night! Because i really loved this story. I haven't read any others.
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