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Reviews for A Ritual of Courtship

By : Rumpelyssa
  • From ANON - Anon on May 24, 2013
    I love your plot, but I wouldn't have skipped through the chapters so fast if you used other pronouns besides "she". Good story, though c:
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  • From BeautifulLiar13 on July 22, 2010
    love it and this paring is amazing there isn't that many good ones on FF :)
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  • From ElementalDemonessSorceress on November 11, 2008
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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  • From ElementalDemonessSorceress on May 10, 2008
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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  • From ANON - Vera-Sabe on March 26, 2008
    Hermione Malfoy,

    Hey there! I just got into the Hermione/Rodolphus pairing. I must confess I've always wanted to read fics about this pairing, but I never got the courage to until now.

    Besides ex-Death Eaters Lucius, Draco, and Regulus (I'm not too fond of Hermione/Severus pairings, no offense; I just never got into it)and the Dark Lord himself, Tom Riddle a.k.a. Voldemort, I could definitely see Hermione with Rodolphus.

    I don't think I could stomach McNair, Avery, Dolohov, or some other cannon Death Eater, though. It would be way too dark for me, in my opinion. Well, sorry for going off on tangent here!

    So to continue with the actual review: I absolutely love the story you have here, girl. It's really and very interesting, wonderful, brilliant, funny, hilarious, lovely, and fantastic.

    I just wish you will update! You haven't updated since last year. I think you should definitely continue this story because you need to see this through to the end; not just for your readers and reviewers, but for yourself most of all!

    I would really love to see what will to happen to Hermione and Rodolphus and how their relationship will start to un-fold further. I really love the way you're portraying Hermione and Rodolphus actually. Rodolphus is not mentioned all that much in the books, which is quite a pity.

    For one, I would love to see what his character is truly like besides the obvious one of him following, being loyal to, and consorting with Voldemort. I'm not one to give criticism to an author on a character I, and many other Harry Potter fans, hardly know and that is hardly mentioned in the books.

    Henceforth all us Harry Potter fans actually DON'T know what Rodolphus is truly like, so why criticize you for the way you're portraying him anyway? It doesn't make any sense to do that, in my opinion. Therefore, I believe your portrayal of Rudi is just brilliant, awesome, and marvelous. (I love the nickname you gave him, by the way). *winks*

    I also really love the way you're portraying Severus, Ginny, and their son, Jolyon. I don't think Severus is out of character at all; and even if he is, who cares? I'm glad that he's happy, that he has Ginny and Jolyon, and that he's playing matchmaker for Hermione and Rodolphus. Snape deserves happiness in his life after all J.K. put him through and did to him in the books! Besides, it IS very Slytherin of him to act like this; it's very cunning, sly, and sneaky of him. ~_^

    Ginny is just fantastic. I always love it when she plays matchmaker for Hermione. I think it's very like Ginny to do that and she really cares for Hermione a lot; therefore, I love the way you wrote her. As for Joylon, he's just so cute, adorable, and so mischievous! I like how he likes Hermione and wants to marry her when he grows up. *chuckles* That was very funny and cute to read; hehehehe.

    Childhood crushes, indeed, lol. They're quite inevitable and endearing in a way. I've had my share of them as well, lol.

    Lastly, Hermione is just absolutely magnificent as well. The way you're writing her is very spot-on and I love it, so keep it up. ~_^ I read your profile and she's my favorite character and heroine as well! I'm so glad you love her, too. ^_^

    By the way, I love Jane Austen and her books. That's why I'm glad you're incorporating her style of writing into your writing; it's great and intriguing, in my opinion. ~_^

    Well, this review is long enough as it is, so I better finish. However, I really did mean everything I wrote in this little review. Also, I'm a very elaborate person, henceforth I tend to write very long reviews. *chuckles* ~_^

    Again I really do hope you'll update this story sometime soon. I would love to see what will happen in the next chapter and what will happen overall. I'll sit here and wait eagerly yet patiently until you DO decide to update. ~_^ You go, girl. Rock on! ^_^

    With very warm and high regards,

    Vera-Sabe
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  • From ElementalDemonessSorceress on November 06, 2007
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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  • From ElementalDemonessSorceress on August 28, 2007
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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  • From ANON - theladyseraphina on May 03, 2007
    This looks rather interesting.
    I have never seen this pairing before and its a compelling start to a story.

    More?
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  • From Sampdoria on March 09, 2007
    Please update soon, I really like your story!!!
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  • From LaBibliographe on March 04, 2007
    Chapter 2: First to answer a bit of your reply (and thank you for that), it's interesting about the slight difference in the term drawer vs. draw. If I heard someone in England say it, I'd likely never hear the difference, just assuming they were saying the same word I use. I, of course, use the term "Mom" instead of "Mum" but I'd try to use the English term in my Potter stories (if I remembered) because that word is VERY geographically targeted. But I might stay away from it altogether and just use "Mother". To set your mind at rest, I don't think I've ever heard anyone in my life use the word "prideful". It may be a word used in novels but not anywhere I live. We use "proud" too. (I am not a proponent of the word "prideful" either.)

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    So - It seems everyone has an interest in Rudi and Hermione's evening. Mrs. Johnson, then Ginny, and even Snape arriving before Rudi can even get out of bed. Wow! Matchmakers to the right of us... Matchmakers to the left of us...

    Jolyon wasn't very nice to Hagrid and his attitude toward the half-giant showed bad manners, but I can't believe Snape is weak when it comes to Jolyon. I can't imagine
    Ginny would stand for that behavior either. Jolyon needs some down time. Perhaps some nice hang time in a pair of dungeon manacles. I hope he doesn't disrupt the dinner. So far he appears to be an unappealing brat. Does he have a good side beyond his good taste in women?

    At least Rudi and Hermione are plotting about the dinner. That means they've got something in common bringing them together.

    Thanks for the update. What's for dinner? 8-)
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  • From ANON - auntbecky on February 28, 2007
    Another good chapter as always. You've got me wondering though. In most of your stories that I've read Rudi seems to be in his 50's or 60's. Is that cannon or are you like me and the the thought of a sexy older man just makes you tingle?
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  • From sentineljandb2 on February 27, 2007
    I think Ginny and Severus will get a surprise if their two gests want to get back at them for the matchmaking. Considering Hermione is very intelligent and Rudi is a Slithering that plan should be interesting.

    Probably they will act like they can
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  • From Sampdoria on February 27, 2007
    Thank you for another great chapter, I do belive I can come to love this story very much:-)))
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  • From angelnomiko on February 27, 2007
    aww that is sweet puppy love ... hmmm will their plan work ... pleasex30 update soon i would love to read more .. later for now

    angel
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  • From Sampdoria on February 25, 2007
    I didn't think it possible when I read the first Rudolpho/Hermoine story that I would like that pairing. I was wrong, absolutely wrong, I enjoy it very much and I will look forward to see more of your story, it had a great first chapter and I'll look forward for more!!!
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