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Reviews for The Phoenix Rises

By : greenwizard11
  • From Jan on October 31, 2008
    Gods, I feel so bad for poor Severus!

    Please update chapter 21 soon ^_^

    Jan

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  • From ladyedgecombe on October 30, 2008
    If Severus likes James so much why does he keep tormenting Harry? I am so into this story, I appreciate the update. Hope to see more soon.
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  • From ANON - Bunny on October 26, 2008
    I love this story. But the more i read this story the more i am starting i hate james >.< He says he loves his son, but then why is he always slighting him? Is makes he feel so sorry for Harry, he finally gets a father, and his father treats him like that? Anyhow, i do love this story, i hope Draco and Harry get together soon ^.~
    Please update soon!!!!!!! ^.^
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  • From BrianLovesJustin on October 24, 2008
    OK I've just read all 19 chapters so far and my only question is where are the rest of them, LOL.

    This is a very good alternative to the story line and I liked the bit where Hermione brought up the fact that only Merlin could change into different animals, if this is leading where I think it could be leading to then that's gonna be one very almight twist.

    Keep up the chapters I really did enjoy it
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  • From ladyedgecombe on October 24, 2008
    I think I would be emotionally stunted too if I spent years in hidding. Glad he was there for Harry though.
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  • From ANON - Jena on October 23, 2008
    Wonder how Lucius feels about that.
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  • From Jan on October 23, 2008
    From previous (The Prophecy of the Phoenix) parts of this story, I thought it was mention that James was mated/married to Lily, but also had as mates Sirius, Severus, and Lucius? Am I correct or am I thinking of a different story? If so it seems in this sequel that he's only truly been mated to Lily and Lucius.

    Please update chapter 20 soon ^_^

    Jan
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  • From wolfcathope on October 23, 2008
    I really like this story but it seems to be mostly James we are dealing with where is the sneaky, stubborn,extra harry, always in trouble there is another one.
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  • From ladyedgecombe on October 23, 2008
    It's so good to see James spending time with Harry. So who is Draco going to the ball with? He seems a little down. Don't keep us in suspence, we want to know who gets paired with whom.
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  • From dominique1 on October 22, 2008
    it still say harry should be with sev or sir
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  • From Jan on October 22, 2008
    LOL! Poor Sev... will there ever be anything between him and James? or Sirius and James for that matter? or is it going to stay strictly James and Lucius?

    Please update chapter 19 soon ^_^

    Jan

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  • From ANON - Salamander Red on October 22, 2008
    My only note is that I hope James gets a shot of maturity soon. Its not like he's been in a coma for 12 years or has selective amnesia.. it doesn't make sense for him to be doing such a piss poor job at being a father.. Even if you don't alter the events of the book much, James is coming across as annoying and insincere. More interested in maintaining his anonymity and banging Lucius (though I'm always a fan of good smut scenes) than making up for effectively abandoning the son he supposedly loves. I'd wonder if Harry was Lucius' and his child might he have shown more regard? Inserting James into the picture makes for an interesting twist, but I don't see any deep impact his being alive has on Harry- he might as well be dead, with Sirius and Remus filling in the superficial father-figure moments
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  • From ladyedgecombe on October 13, 2008
    I just love this story and I can so relate on the RL butting into fanfiction fun. Hope things are going better and to see an update soon. Thanks.
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  • From cocoke5 on October 13, 2008
    i see you story and a first i did not read but now that i have read it and love the plot and the way yu have to the story going i fell in love with the story and can not wait for more of the story and see wht happen next to the story . i love the way yu have jamis and louis in love . will the sons be next or will u have harry and sev. i can not wait to see. up date soon love the story
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  • From ANON - k on October 13, 2008
    Poor James. Where is Draco?
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