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Reviews for The Phoenix Rises

By : greenwizard11
  • From ANON - pink_lemonade on March 29, 2009
    DIE CHO! DIIIEEE!!! why can't you kill her?! if she was dead then Harry would be easy picking for dray!!!! *pant* *pant* *Pant* *Breath in deeply* *exhale*
    okey , ranting over time for the reiview ^_^
    it's me agian ,
    nice update and i'm sssoooo excited for lucius and james' child not to mention severus' will the 2 boys (hoping that severus' kid is also a boy). *giggle* sevy and siri sitting in a tree, k-i-s-s-i-n-g!!! nice pairing, can't wait for it to develop. i can't wait seeing sevy and siri's kid i could just gobble sevy's kid up, i hope the kids gets pampered and cuddled the way severus wasn't.
    I already know lucius' kid would be spoiled rotten, dray's a proof of that hehehe keep it up. good luck and take care
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  • From BrianLovesJustin on March 26, 2009
    You poisoned Umbridge *thank you, thank you* I realise you couldn't make it fatal but *big hug*. There's hope for Draco yet then, Cho was never the right one for Harry anyways. I am so intrigued now who you have lined up for Severus and him being pregnant *chuckles*.
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  • From ANON - pink_lemonade on March 26, 2009
    yey!!! another update! whoo ho!!
    the old cow got poisoned! whoop whoop! but i agree with the teachers should've killed her instread. hehe
    sooo things are progressing quite nicely with dray and harry and yup cho doesn't deserve harry even in the book it was as if she was using harry bec. she missed cedric... the bitch. i can't wait what you come up with to get harry finally realize his feeling for dray.
    annnnnddd Sevyyy? preggyyy?!!! OMG! YES!!! Y-E-S!!!! i love that idea to the maxxx! at long last, sevy is going to get cared for and love, everyone knows he deserves it and it's really good he lied about the antidote hehehe and i'm also guessing james will be doing some pay back for severus since after all it was severus that brought the him and lucius together right? ohhhh!!! i can't wait! sevy and a child?! *major squeal!* so i'm guessing siri's the other daddy? it's still a little vague but who ever you pair severus up with better treat him right or i might just AK that person! tee hee (*bows* sorry severus fan here)
    james it just plain wicked!!!
    MOre please ^_^
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  • From ANON - MewMew2 on March 25, 2009
    Interesting, very interesting. Although I must say, the vision of a Pregnant Snape is more than a tad disturbing. Thank you for taking the time to post once more.
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  • From ANON - pink_lemonade on March 23, 2009
    wow!!! thanks for the update, it's looking up nicely.
    it's so nice of james to act like a father to harry and i kinda understand that even though youre related but don't spend that much time together. it's as if you guys are perfect strangers but knowing james i'm sure he'll takcle that problem head on ^_^
    It's also good that he's being nice to severus, there's something in psychology that if a thing reminds you of something you fear or hate even if you don't necessarily hate or fear that associated thing you start to hate or fear it as well ^_^ so yeah i understand severus' stand point. and it's great that you can finally pair him with somebody, he needs all the lovin and care'n he can get since he's antagonized by almost everybody in the story hehehe ^^
    keep up the good work and take care ^_^
    I'll be waiting for the next update ^_^
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  • From BrianLovesJustin on March 23, 2009
    oh that is so sneaky leaving us with *I think I know who Severus is going to end up with*, LOL. So Harry has Draco on his mind *shifty*. I really do like this AU story, and James trying to help Ron was a nice touch, but I'm intrigued about the Divination teacher now, hope we get to learn more, or is that in the previous story? *feels ashamed* I still haven't managed to read it yet. Could you perhaps have Umbridge poisoned a little in the next chapter *begs nicely*.
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  • From ANON - MewMew2 on March 22, 2009
    Thanks so much for the update! As for pairings Draco x Harry is my favorite next to Sirius x Remus (this paring is a VERY close 2nd. It just seems so damn natural). Please continue to update as soon as you can. Excellent job!
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  • From ANON - pink_lemonade on March 19, 2009
    hi,
    i've just read this story and i think your a wonderful writer ^_^ i do hope you update more i'm at the edge of my seat right now hehehe.
    about the sev thing, i really don't know who to pair him up you're very good at pairing so i'll just wait what you come up with and i'm sure it'll be great ^_^ and the thing is he's one of my favorite characters in the book even in book one. he sacrificed so much and yet always seen as a bad person and was never given what he rightfully deserved and even died in the end T_T, and i really think he should be rewarded that's why i like it when things work out the better for him in fics.
    but it's really nice that it was because of him that james and lucius got together and now it was even him that caused draco to realize his feelings for harry. tee hee he's like the secret love match maker ^_^. and i really can't wait what you do to that over controlling bitch! i really hate her. wonder what james'll do hehehehe
    keep up the good work and i'll be waiting for your next update ^_^ take care always
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  • From ANON - k4y3 on March 13, 2009
    hi, i absolutly love your story. while sure its not the most plausible story its still fun and creative and i really like it. it does kinda seem though that james isn't exactly the most attentative father though. i would think that after 12 years he would be gushing over his son, not busy fucking(although im not complaining about the fucking. thats rather good too). just the opinion of a fan, you dont have to take it to heart, i mean...it is your story and all. but also you you mind putting me on the email update list thingy? myt email's Tally_otak@yahoo.com thankies!!
    -k4y3
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  • From Jan on March 12, 2009
    OMG! That is so WRONG!!!

    Poor Draco indeed, hopefully, maybe Harry will have a dream about everything that happen last night...?

    Please update soon ^_^

    Jan
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  • From BrianLovesJustin on March 11, 2009
    yeah poor Draco, hope you're gonna do something about that *raises eyebrow* OMG the shower scene *loved* and Umbridge that nosey old cow, honestly I wish James would just off her. Now who could you pair Snape off with, I assume that Sirius and Remus are sort of paired (?) but could they do with another? or if Remus & Sirius aren't a pair (just can't remember) perhaps Remus and Snape then...you decide, LOL. I would love for you to put me on the mailing list for updates, email is sarah-1970.smith@hotmail.co.uk
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  • From DestinyDragon on March 08, 2009
    Awesome story!!!
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  • From ANON - MewMew2 on March 08, 2009
    Thank you for the update, I eagerly await the next one. I must know, what happens with the guest once the children retire to their rooms?
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  • From tiggator on March 07, 2009
    Aww, poor Draco. That's definitely not the reaction one wants. :)

    I just read your entire story and have to say it's very clever! I love how you are keeping a lot of the same scenes from the books in here. I also love the relationship between James and Lucius. Keep up the great work! Can't wait to read more. :)
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  • From BrianLovesJustin on March 06, 2009
    You gave us 2 chapters again *kisses*, ok not much to say, but aah at the end of Chp 31 where Draco confesses he liked Harry too and Harry goes and passes out, typical, and I never liked Cho, so hopefully he will wake up soon. All I can say about James is I LOVE HIM! no wonder Lucius does too.
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