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Reviews for A Fated Marriage

By : onetinykiss
  • From smmz79 on January 04, 2010
    this story is progressing nicely so far... so whats up rons butt he just needs to get over it, its not like hermione planned this although it is a very nice pairing... i wonder who is making the death threats and who was it that was watching them... hmmmm
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  • From Chaosmage77 on January 02, 2010
    After this chapter i see Karmen developing a crush on Hermione. Never the less i certaintly don't want them to hook up. Perhaps a conflict between Viktor and Him making Viktor prove how much more he loves Hermione than Karmen. I don't know. Thats just my thoughts. Keep up the good work and i hope to see more chapters soon.
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  • From Kayllainde on December 09, 2009
    I love this story :) Victor is amazing in the way you have portrayed him and the story is well written :)
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  • From boicrazygirl15 on September 23, 2009
    Oh! i loved it :] I think it was a lovely new chapter to this story.
    I can not wait for the next chapters :]

    keep up the good work :]:]
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  • From PhantomPhan on August 07, 2009
    Teehee~! I wonder how Opening Week is going to go...I guess I won't know unless you UPDATE! Pretty please? With Viktor on top? *giggle* Anyway, do you have an update list? If so, please put me on it. my email is: ravenclawspride9@aim.com
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  • From Chaosmage77 on July 13, 2009
    LOL maternity cloths! Thats great! Haha i love this fic and i can't wait until the next chapter. Post again soon.
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  • From smmz79 on July 07, 2009
    yeah i loved this chap although viktor was not there much we still got to read about the families and how they are getting along.... i can not wait to see how hermione reacts at the first practice and esp. around the other wives... ok so i can not wait for the next chap i am looking forward to reading about them together
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  • From pstibbons on June 21, 2009
    Best lines:

    “Please never say that in public or you may have a mob chase you with torches and pitchforks.” Dorian laughed, “But off record…” He leaned in closer, “I think it’s a dumb game. If it not for the handsome hunks flying around on the brooms I would never waste a second though on the sport.”

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    Nice to see an agent with brains. Still, he hasn't considered all possibilities, which Hermione can rectify. what Hermione can do is hire a bunch of discreet detectives to get blackmail material on each of the other WAGs there. And then when any of them strike, she can take them backstage, and politely threaten them. And she might want to get involved in the public duelling circuit, like Jessica Bratich, the karate champion who's the wife of Australian cricketer Mitchell Johnson. And the agent can work with the angle that this is good for Krum because 'he must be a real man to keep such a fighter satisfied' and all that. Just because it's not been done before in the staid wizarding world doesn't mean it can't be done. It's a lot harder to fight WAGs and journalists than DEs since you are allowed to publicly hex the latter. Hermione doesn't need to be trashed the way Patti Scialfa (Bruce Springsteen's wife and bandmate) was.
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  • From LCGrabski on June 16, 2009
    When I read "Girls were complicated and if you didn
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  • From theorgskittles on May 14, 2009
    cant wait to read more of this i always liked this pairing it is my fav other then her and blaise.
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  • From mizzapples on May 05, 2009
    I liked your story and am eagerly awaiting your next chapter....i especially found that last chapter amusing

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  • From jadedtalisman on March 29, 2009
    I love a good Viktor/Hermione story and this is living up to that potential! Keep up the good work. I hope that the manager is just testing her, because at this point I'd cheer her on if she scratched his eyes out. Can't wait for the next chapter. -JT
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  • From margaritama on March 09, 2009
    First off I'm so sorry that you got a nasty review. Sometimes trolls turn up on AFF.net. This happened to another Dramione writer friend of mine here on AFF.net and she reported the person as it was out of line and uncalled for. I encourage you to do the same.

    This story is very sweet, fun and entertaining. I think you're doing a wonderful job of developing the story, keeping your characters interesting while also developing them emotionally and psychologically plus you're giving us your insight on a character that JRK only scraped the surface of: Viktor. Keep it up and give us updates when you can in between your very busy life schedule. I'll keep coming back to check every so often.

    That said, I want to KICK DORIAN'S ASS! WTF? I hope Hermione gives him the old one-two and Viktor better get his ass in gear as well. That's his woman! How dare he allow anyone to speak to her that way - she's not some girlfriend or arm candy - that's Hermione Granger for goodness sakes! I don't care how much he trusts Dorian, he had better man up! Would serve him right if Hermione didn't speak to him at all.

    Looking forward to the next chappie.
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  • From chickaboo on March 09, 2009
    Um. Hi. I was just wondering if you would be offended if I totally bitch slapped Dorian? Please? I think it could help. lol Great update, I can't wait for more! And about that email...forget about it. There will ALWAYS be someone with too much time on their hands just looking to cause trouble. I'm glad you chose to persevere rather than abandon your story. I would have been quite sad if you had. Anyway, yeah. Just my two cents. =D
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  • From jlclark on February 08, 2009
    Please Please update soon!!
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