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Reviews for A Fated Marriage

By : onetinykiss
  • From margaritama on January 31, 2009
    I just discovered this story and just love it. I like how you didn't make Viktor to be bumbling idiot because he's not. I like how you didn't make them fall all over each other and that there was a sense of uncomfortableness (is that a word?) because that's real.

    "She was so fragile looking that he was starting to wonder if she would even make though the honeymoon in one piece." This was the funniest line! I love that you've given Viktor a slight edge that includes a touch of arrogane, smugness, alpha-maleness, possessiveness mixed with compassion. VERY SEXY!
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  • From smmz79 on January 19, 2009
    nice chap i love the sexual tension that is developing..... can not wait to read the next
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  • From ginnylovesharry07 on January 02, 2009
    really good chapter, I love the older brother protectiveness. can't wait for more. OH it would be nice if she was still able to go back to hogwarts. I will wait and see.
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  • From smmz79 on January 02, 2009
    nice chap.. i wonder what is wrong with ron i bet he is in love with hermione and is having trouble accepting her future marriage to viktor.... ok so i guess i am going to have to reread the beginning chaps to see if i can guess what you are hinting at... great job with this chap
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  • From jlclark on January 02, 2009
    I am so glad to see you have just posted another update. This chapter was nice and obviously opens up a plot angle with Ron, which I am excellent to read about. I realize it is important to begin developing the relationship between Viktor and the Weasley
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  • From theorgskittles on December 26, 2008
    cant wait to read more of this story it is very good so far
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  • From ginnylovesharry07 on December 17, 2008
    sneaky little author, i just happen to check here to see if you posted it here. YEAHHHHHHHHHH! I don't have to wait now. Onto more reading. I have left a reveiew on FF.net

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  • From jlclark on December 17, 2008
    Great chapter! I so happy to see Viktor already has a place for them to start living together right now instead of waiting until the wedding. You should absolutely feel special about having the most views and rating because this is a really good story. I have been checking it at least twice a day since your last update because I am on pins and needles waiting to see what happens next. Again great job, I will be patiently awaiting your next entire!
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  • From smmz79 on December 17, 2008
    ok great chap.... them living together before the wedding will be good for them to get to know each other better.... and lead them into some interesting situations i am sure ok so i can not wait to see what dinner will be like... great chap
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  • From AriaDragoncrest on December 17, 2008
    Excellent so far!
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  • From jlclark on December 06, 2008
    Excellent! I love HG/VK stories and there are just not enough of them. I am also pleased to see that you have updated this within the last week; it gives me hope for the future that this will not be abandon as so many seemingly good stories are. The story is really great so far, very original and well written, and I am really looking forward to what you do next. Keep up the great work :)
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  • From chickaboo on December 02, 2008
    Tsk tsk. You know, I bet Hermione could totally whoop his butt in a duel. Yep. Great update, I can't wait for more!!
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  • From AriaDragoncrest on December 01, 2008
    Excellent
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  • From smmz79 on December 01, 2008
    woo well i was waiting for that to happen... way to go viktors dad.. i think it meant more when he stuck up for hermione bc of course viktor would... so the first actual kiss hmmm and i wonder what her surprise is...
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  • From AriaDragoncrest on November 19, 2008
    Excellent beginning.
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