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Reviews for Life in an Alien Land 1: In the Land of My Enemy

By : tambrathegreat
  • From TempestLore on July 24, 2008
    I love this story, keep going!
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  • From smmz79 on July 24, 2008
    wow what an interesting first chap... i can not believe ron turned her over how horrible... well at least the malfoys are not real bad i mean it could be worse... great job
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  • From Jilliane on July 24, 2008
    (Chapter 6)


    Wow. Poor....everybody, although I would have to say, in the face of everything everyone has been through, Hermione seems to have gotten off the easiest. Despite being sold off by Ron and then forced to be a breeder for Lucius and Draco, they've been kind to her and tried to make the best of the situation by taking care of her.

    Tonks' mention of climbing out of a mass grave at Hogwarts gave me the shivers. I can't imagine the horror that must have been. I'm glad that she and Lucius can take the first steps to forging something new and find a spot of happiness in the hopeless situation they are in.

    And at last we know what has gone on between Severus and Ginny and drawn them together. So they, along with Fred, whom we've learned is alive, are werewolves. What about Ron and Molly then? And Severus putting his wand to his head upon learning that Ginny had shared their secrets. I somehow can't see Severus killing himself at this stage of the game, not in front of Ginny, and not simply because he's angry. embarassed and ashamed. He's been in that position too many times before, so what was he going to do?

    And then we have Hermione and her sudden burst of magic. I'm afraid of what this means. Does it mean Draco has succeeded in his plan? Will the child Hermione is carrying grow up without it's father? Is Voldemort dead? Is Delphine now safe? Are Hermione, Tonks, and the other women now free of their enslavement bands?

    (I'm so tempted to say, "Find out the answers to all this and more in the next chapter!" but I won't!)

    Please update soon! This enquiring mind wants to know!

    (Btw, I like this chapter better than the FFN one.)



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  • From ANON - Yvonne on July 24, 2008
    I just finished reading through the 6 chapters that are up and I have t say that this story is awesome. it's a combination of like 4-5 storylines and you've woven them together just superbly. I'll be looking out for future updates.
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  • From butterfly22503 on July 24, 2008
    This is amazing. I can't wait to read more, I hope you update soon!
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  • From chocolatedoodles on July 24, 2008
    I absolutely love your story. It's so intense and multi-layered with the characters. But please tell me there'll be a happy ending? :D
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  • From sherrithewriter on July 19, 2008
    Interesting turn of events, although I am not quite sure how Greyback is turning the girls. Is he biting them so that they mature more quickly? Thanks for sending update notices.
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  • From ANON - Myene on July 18, 2008
    Very well done so far. For some oen who is new at writing smut, you do it in a very good mannor. You also do Draco's madness well. Its a sort of more twisted (and for good reason) version of Pany's from your other serries.
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  • From ANON - Myene on July 18, 2008
    What happend to Fred? He was alive in the start, then you just sort of droped him
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  • From ANON - Myene on July 18, 2008
    OOooo...what a powerful last line.
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  • From margotlefaye on July 17, 2008
    This is a very twisted, dark, and disturbing fic. Just the kind of fic I like. I really feel for all the characters, here. Well, Ron, not so much. But, just about everyone else has been devastated by the war and is doing the best he or she can to survive. I like that they are going to try to destroy Voldemort, and can only hope it happens before he gets his hands on poor little Dephine. Of course, I particularly feel for Draco. You've really made him an incredibly tragic figure, both repulsive and sympathetic. Not an easy feat to pull off. Good job.
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  • From Gryffindorclutz on July 17, 2008
    I cannot believe how well you are creating a plot out of what I would have listed as PWP. Please keep it up!
    Cheers!
    G.C.
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  • From Jilliane on July 17, 2008
    (Chapter 5)

    This story just gets better and better with each new chapter. I love your Lucius--introspective and with a conscience is so refreshing, and yet he's still Lucius, evidenced in the very Slytherin way his advises Draco on how they will gather the other women to the Manor. His guilt and shame over the rape of Tonks and the taking of Hermione, his love for Narcissa and feelings of having betrayed her memory are heartbreaking and so well written. The way you've written Lucius and Draco is what makes this story so compelling and enthralling. Delving into their psyche's and exposing their true feelings while still keeping them in character is no mean feat, but your excellent writing makes them having these hidden feelings entirely believable. I realise this story is in response to a challenge, but you've gone above and beyond the challenge itself and woven a truly awesome story. You've taken a plot we've all seen before, the enslavement, given it a completely new twist and made it completely your own, keeping the storyline fresh and full of surprises with dark and intriguing new twists. Now Voldemort is magically aging the children produced by his enslavement plan, impregnating them with his own spawn, and Delphine is next. The angst factor (and I do love the angst!) is suddenly upped tenfold. I LOVE this story!!!

    Fabulous update and I'm dying for the next!!


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  • From Malfoysplaymate on July 17, 2008
    Yay!! Update! Oh i do hope you come back soon.
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  • From starrynite45 on July 17, 2008
    actually i really don't read this kind of story but this one made me did read...it's not only some sick Draco thing but you're gonna prove that there's more than smutty and violence scenes here...i wonder what's going on with Voldie (okay, i think i like his nickname lol)
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