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Reviews for Life in an Alien Land 1: In the Land of My Enemy

By : tambrathegreat
  • From ANON - Sereneth on July 16, 2008
    You have a real talent for writing my dear :)
    Can't wait for the next chapter.
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  • From Malfoysplaymate on July 16, 2008
    I love your story!! It's really very good. I can't wait for the next bit!
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  • From TempestLore on July 16, 2008
    You are doing great! I'm really enjoying this story! It's a nice break from writing my Broomstick's stories...Love it, keep it up!
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  • From ANON - mm4ever on July 16, 2008
    Awwwwwwwww I really like draco in this story....once you get past the madness he is really sweet!!!! And really you cant blame him for the madness either!!! I hope that Draco isnt forced to marry or if he is he marries hermione cuz if married somebody else that would be bad for hermion!!!! Cant wait for more!!!!
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  • From Jilliane on July 16, 2008
    (Chapter 4)

    Excellent chapter, and yes, you've satisfied at least a bit of my questioning nature. However, this chapter raises the whole new question as to how Tonks is alive. Is Tonks aware she's been married off to Lucius? Also, I'm dying of curiosity.....Ginny only skimmed over her relationship with Severus, and methinks there's more to it than she's letting on....

    I feel for Lucius! His kindness towards Hermione and his love for his son, the loss of the wife he actually did love........there's an honour to him in this, and a sense of tragedy (tragic honour?) that makes me feel for him. I feel for Draco also, more a sense of pity for him and his madness, although it looks as if he is maybe beginning to conquer it. Perhaps Hermione's love, and here's hoping that love is real and not borne of pity, will help him be whole again. She's going to have his baby now, hopefully that will give him a reason to live, some strength, a sense of purpose. I'm glad he's come to love little Delphine. I can't help but wonder if, even though Lucius has claimed her as his child, it won't be Draco who ends up being a father to her? And of course there's Draco's words to Hermione, that Voldemort wants them all to marry. Will he be forced into a marriage to someone other than Hermione? Will that drive him further into madness? Will Hermione then be taken and made to be a breeder for someone else, married off to someone else, or will she remain a Malfoy breeder?

    You're probably going to tear your hair out when you see this whole new spate of questions, but look at it this way.....I wouldn't ask if I weren't so totally into this story! You keep me guessing and wondering and wanting to know, which keeps me coming back for more, and that, Tambra dear, is a sign of a great writer.

    I love this story and I can't wait for another update!
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  • From ANON - BookLady on July 16, 2008
    Wow! This is an amazing fic! I really am enjoying the unexpected twists each chapter has brought. Looking forward to future chapters, please continue soon!
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  • From jddammann on July 16, 2008
    I think you are doing a great job! I love the plot and sub-plots. I hope Draco regains some of his sanity as the story goes on, I like that Lucius is kind to Hermione and hope they continue to have a special relationship, and of course Ron needs to be dealt with although Hermione did nicely in this chapter. :-) The sex scenes are going well too. The more you write them the more comfortable you will probably be, and of course we all love detailed sex scenes. I am looking forward to the next chapter so keep up the good work!

    Morgana
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  • From ANON - mhaj78 on July 16, 2008
    oh my holy gosh...this is an EXCELLENT response to this challenge...holy crap. you're doing an AMAZING job...please, i beg you, keep up the good work! this is completely intense and i love it!
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  • From sherrithewriter on July 16, 2008
    I don't think she would have any feelings for Ron, other than anger, but I don't know how she could love Draco as a woman loves a man, it would almost have to be as mother loves a child because he acts like a child so much. Lucius acts much more like a lover. I think Draco is going to have to have some more lucid moments for their relationship to survive. Good story -- thanks for updating.
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  • From ANON - mm4ever on July 15, 2008
    This is a very interesting story and i cant wait to see where you take this so please update!!!! Im liking it so far!!!
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  • From ANON - luna love on July 15, 2008
    I love the story! I hate Ron, not just for betraying Hermione, but also for judging her now. I like Lucius and slightly mad Draco. The Snape/Ginny sparks are great too.

    And Hermione is wonderful, dealing with a terrible situation after Ron's betrayal, and coming to love Draco, even if it isn't an easy love. The erotica is well written too; I loved the bit before Ron stormed in and got spit on (go Hermione!).

    Can't wait for more.
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  • From bananasforyou on July 15, 2008
    i really liked it, guaranteed it was a lil weird but i liked it lots.
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  • From ANON - Tam on July 15, 2008
    I think you've done a great job for your first time writing erotic stories. I've been reading this website for years, and would have never thought this was your first story that included sex.

    Love your story! Keep going!
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  • From ANON - Snowe on July 15, 2008
    I also like the way that the sex scenes further the plot and illuminate the characters, instead of just being mindless smut (not that I dislike PWP's).
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  • From ANON - Snowe on July 15, 2008
    I think you've done an amazing job with this challenge! Lucius is just as I imagine him, and Draco's madness is described so well. I like the way that Hermione is trying to make the best of this horrible situation.
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