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Reviews for Un Désire Dangereux *COMPLETE*

By : FemmeBono
  • From Marbil on July 26, 2008
    This was even hotter than the first one. I will have to make sure my husband takes his Viagra tonight so I can find my own release after reading that.
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  • From Marbil on July 26, 2008
    Mon Dieu! Oh the irony of it all, Bella curses her to fullfill her own perverse and dark desires and Snape reaps the benefit of it all. Poor, poor Bella and Rodolphus, no menage a'tois for them. heck I'd much rather read Snape smut, Beela and Rodolphus do nothing for me.

    Judging by what she smelled when she came across the Amortentia potion she's already on her way to being in love with Severus Snape. That last chapter was quite hot, so I'm looking forward to lots more smut to come.
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 26, 2008
    Oh my!!! (waves hand in front of her face). I believe Vivienne isn't the only one who needs taking care of now!! LOL It's good to see though, that she doesn't take him at his word and tried to find out for herself how well the curse worked. I like a woman with a mind of her own. :) Poor Bellatrix really did stuff things up for herself, didn't she? LOL And I love your hint that perhaps Draco may become involved. Oh those naughty Slythern boys! I definitely love the direction in which your story is going. ;) Of course, you don't have to answer my musings though, I don't want to spoil anything in the story for anyone, I'm just thinking out loud. Thanks for the welcome back. :) I'm glad you're enjoying writing fanfics. What else do you/ have you written?
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  • From FemmeBono on July 26, 2008
    Re: Dreamweaver

    Tsk, poor Bella, it did backfire. I'm glad that helped though. There are some finer points of this that will come to the fore--given that, it will be interesting to see how she handles Draco. At the least it will be illuminating how well she does in the vicinity of a new Death Eater who just so happens to be a typical teenage boy. As for her age, I would place her in her late 20s. She is well out of her teenage years and enough into her prime that she has become a successful enough Auror to warrant being enlisted to help out the British Ministry in their fight against Voldemort.

    "Myself, I've just come back from a big break but I've always liked it here so I hope you do too. :)" Well, welcome back. For my first foray into fanfics, I'm loving it so far. It's not my first stint at writing, but I'm loving the reactions I'm getting so far.
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 26, 2008
    Gah!! But of coure Bellatrix would be bi and want Vivienne for herself. How did I miss that??? LOL Explained my wonderings very well, thank you very much. :) Oooo and wasn't she mad when she found out Snape wasn't going to share? LOL Now that Vivienne's been transferred to Hogwarts, I wonder if any student deatheaters in training are likely to influence this curse or perhaps it's only fully fledged deatheaters that the curse works on - I did get the impression that she is still quite young even if she is well out of her teenage years. Myself, I've just come back from a big break but I've always liked it here so I hope you do too. :) Thanks for explaining a little about the curse and now - I'm ready for the next chapter. LOL :)


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  • From FemmeBono on July 26, 2008
    "Good to know I'm not the only person who answers reviewers in the review section. :)"

    Yeah, I'm new to the site--and fanfics, really--but it seems not many actually do discuss the stories on the forums so here seems to be the best place to reply. At least I know the readers will get them.

    I like the bent of this curse mainly because the victim winds up not so much a slave to their desires, but living in fear of them. Most stories that deal with a curse of this nature simply wind up having the victim rut almost incessantly to the point that it seems more like a farce. In them, the curse tends to control *who* they desire, and I figure why have a curse that does that when the Imperius is just as effective. In this case, she can exercise her will but could die if she tries to, and who she wants is entirely up to her. That's important. There are some subtle differences here that should make a world of difference. If that doesn't make sense now, hopefully it will.

    And you will find out why Bella curses witches too...that's coming up in the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 26, 2008
    Good to know I'm not the only person who answers reviewers in the review section. :)

    I knew this story was going to be worth the read and you so didn't disappoint me. Love the idea for the workings of the curse and the course it takes. Frankly I'm a bit shocked that Bellatrix would do such a thing and am enjoying trying to work out why she would do it. Jealousy, revenge, a cunning ploy to strike out at witches AND wizards around her???? I'm intrigued. Loving this!!
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  • From FemmeBono on July 24, 2008
    "I do thik that I would enjoy being a victim of that curse if he were the one to help ease it's effects. I really did enjoy that lemon." Aye caramba! No kidding. He has barely sampled our little French
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  • From Marbil on July 24, 2008
    I do thik that I would enjoy being a victim of that curse if he were the one to help ease it's effects. I really did enjoy that lemon.

    The story I referred to is 'A Rock and a Hard Place' by Ink Stained Wretch, it's one of my favorite stories and I'm sure you will love it.
    http://hp.adultfanfiction.net/story.php?no=600016237

    Did you get the picture of Snape in a Hawiian shirt I sent?
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  • From FemmeBono on July 24, 2008
    re: Dreamweaver
    Glad you like it thus far; naturally there will be many lemons, as he does deliver! ;) Her reaction to him is important, too.

    re: Trickie
    Tr
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  • From Marbil on July 24, 2008
    This sounds like a version of the
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  • From Marbil on July 24, 2008
    The only one I figured out on my own was the 'cold fish'. Regardless of what her conscious mind thinks of him, her body thinks differently, he already has her hormones all riled up.
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 24, 2008
    What a great start to what appears to be a very interesting story. Very intriguing that the faux mark kicked in the moment she started thinking of Sev in a sexual manner (not that I could blame her for that one). LOL I look forward to more.
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