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Reviews for Ultimate Betrayal

By : KaiDragon
  • From Sakya on October 18, 2008
    Hi, I love your fic and check everyday for updates. I can hardly wait for the questioning of Hermione and Dumbledore (his more than hers, actually).

    Oh, just one little detail.You wrote one word but I think you meant another.


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  • From Ladyroo88 on October 18, 2008
    Yay!! i love it!! More please!!!
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  • From julesquires on October 18, 2008
    Aww! Poor NEville! As usual, wonderfully written. Do you know though, I kept reeding bone (as in skeleton bone) and it took me a few moments to fully understand (but then it is early morning for me). I look forward to the next update, I can't wait to see what happens to Neville. Will Fred, George and NEvillie find out about HArry? Will Kinglsey be found innocent? What's gonna happen to Remus and Sirius? I can't wait. I'll check this again when I get home from work.
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  • From on October 17, 2008
    ....another chapter....
    Im so excited.
    and once again....I cant get enough, and will require more for my addiction.
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  • From on October 17, 2008
    Chris still not minding his own business.

    Another great chapter!
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  • From alma on October 17, 2008
    good chapter.
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  • From Leentjef on October 17, 2008
    very very good chapters
    but i find leo a coward and he has to make it up to his wife
    and kris and wayt have to talk, chris doesn't want aiden but someone who is as close with him than aiden and wayt
    please keep wrinting and post sooooooooooooooooooooooooon
    bye bye
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  • From Ladyroo88 on October 17, 2008
    Chris is stupid!!! Poor wyatt!! I can't wait for more!!
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  • From bumblebee on October 17, 2008
    Wyatt should keep his temper down abit, hehe.

    When is Zion gonna meet his mate? It's Neville isn't it? Or is it someone else?
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  • From ChaosgoddessKali on October 17, 2008
    oy yay you brought back Tamara, I missed her so. i hope that Chris pulls his head out of his ass soon because it sounds like his brother is ready to kill him. What about the prisoners will they finally be questioned? I hope Storm makes an ice sculptor out of ron and hermoine though they wouldnt make very pretty ones lol. I am loving your story and I cannot wait till your next ^__^
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  • From dracoharry4life on October 17, 2008
    Wyatt is really going to have to put Chris in his place. Chris isn't to smart.
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  • From lazycrazykitten on October 17, 2008
    Great chapter!
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  • From alma on October 16, 2008
    Wow, intense!!! So Chris wanted Aiden for himself.
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  • From Ladyroo88 on October 16, 2008
    OOO! This is sooo good! Drama drama!!! Chris is going to get himself beat up...BAD! I can't wait for more!!
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  • From ANON - Anon on October 16, 2008
    oooooooooooo....sum1's angwy >_> CANT WAIT FOR THE NEXT ONES XD
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