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Reviews for Ultimate Betrayal

By : KaiDragon
  • From on October 16, 2008
    I so love this fic.
    The things Storm says...kills me.

    As always...cant wait to read more.
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  • From atheenalupin on October 15, 2008
    wonderful story i cant wait for the next chapter!
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  • From Jan on October 15, 2008
    Why is it, that everyone else seem happy with their (Wyatt & Aiden's) consummations results, however the Halliwell's seem very unhappy? And what's up with Chris, wanting to talk to everyone when it's non of his business?!

    Oh, I can't wait for morning to come! *chuckles* Please update chapter 34 soon ^_^

    Jan
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  • From alma on October 15, 2008
    Awesome chapter, I loved it.
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  • From Leentjef on October 15, 2008
    this is very very good chapter
    keep going and post soon
    bye bye
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  • From on October 15, 2008
    That was so beautiful and sweet and it was another great chapters!
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  • From ChaosgoddessKali on October 15, 2008
    I am loving the story and thank you for bringing back the good Harry hehe, I was wondering though about Snape in one chapter you bring up a vampire named Tamara and how she plans to pursue him but then just stop and I was so wanting to know what was going to happen there
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  • From GeminiSoul on October 15, 2008
    This story is getting better all the time. I can't wait to see what the two together
    will do to old Moldypants and heck even to tame Dumpypants. I also like to see Ron and
    Hermione get the bleeeeep knocked out of them for betraying Harry. As for Remus and Sirius.
    Screw'em..they deserve whatever they get. Neville and Kingsley need to be released as I know
    they are innocent. Minerva and the rest can rot in MHO. I can't wait to see what the next
    Chapter brings.
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  • From Yaoifangirl2007 on October 15, 2008
    I really like this story! I like the plot and the writing, so update soon.
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  • From YanaYugi on October 15, 2008
    Chris don't be such a baby
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  • From julesquires on October 15, 2008
    Wow. I'm just...I'm gonna go re-read it! It was so nice to see their wedding and the shock when everyone found out they were immortal! I can't wait to see what happens to Dumbledore. When does Neville come back into it? And as for that last chapter well...I love wedding scenes. Magic turned up in person to it too, pardon the pun. I can't wait to see what you have in store for us next!
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  • From lazycrazykitten on October 15, 2008
    Yeah Chris, just go talk to your brother when you know he has to consummate his marriage.
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  • From on October 14, 2008
    I'm so excited they did it..... hooray.
    Darn-tooten-good chapter.
    And like always...I so cant wait to read more.
    Chris needs to wake up...Draco is so hot for him.
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  • From Ladyroo88 on October 14, 2008
    *pants* that was hot!! Chris is WAY too nosy!!!! I love it!! Please update soon!!
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  • From bumblebee on October 14, 2008
    So wanting to know how they became immortal

    Update soon please!
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