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Reviews for Ultimate Betrayal

By : KaiDragon
  • From danawarner on October 14, 2008
    Nice ceremony.
    Albus & Voldie are SOOOOO screwed.
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  • From alma on October 14, 2008
    good chapter.
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  • From Ladyroo88 on October 14, 2008
    I love it!!! Wyatt and Aiden married by the Mother of Magic!! Goodness niether can do anything same can they? PLEASE update soon!!!
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  • From kyuubifreak on October 14, 2008
    love this chapter!! i am looking forward to what will happen to Kai and Chris
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  • From dracoharry4life on October 14, 2008
    The wedding night! And their going to take care of the rumor thing tomorrow. That's if they make it out of bed.
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  • From Slytherdor on October 14, 2008
    Damn it!!
    You are a big blue meany!!!

    Btw, nice bonding! I like that Sev helped.
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  • From lazycrazykitten on October 14, 2008
    Yay, they're married!
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  • From dracoharry4life on October 14, 2008
    Poor Harry. All this mess was Chris and Kai's fault. But, other then questioned, they walked away clean. Yet Harry is the one held reponsible. If a consort is held accountable for their actions, is not a prince also?
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  • From on October 13, 2008
    YES!
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  • From Leentjef on October 13, 2008
    new reader

    this is a very very good storie, i really like it
    i find leo a wimp, i think that the son and father issus must be adressed especially the insident with kris that you told us about.
    also convince remus to let his wolf out let an other were wolf convince him and let serius change, i don't like him. he is so not the godfather i had in my mind for harry.
    i like you wrinting style and i hope you will post soon an other chapter
    keep going and post
    bye bye
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  • From Jan on October 13, 2008
    Yay, wedding, wedding!!!

    Please update chapter 32 soon ^_^

    Jan
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  • From kyuubifreak on October 12, 2008
    i am happy that they solve their problem, will we see more of chris and draco?
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  • From bumblebee on October 12, 2008
    Goodie they made up!

    Immortality? You gotta explain soon.
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  • From Jan on October 12, 2008
    That's not fair, it was not Aiden's fault that he ended up taking such a drastic measures, if anything it was Kai's for starting the rumors, and Chris for talking with him, when it should of been Wyatt's duty to do so!

    Please update chapter 31 soon ^_^

    Jan
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  • From julesquires on October 12, 2008
    Ah now that's better. I can feel the complete and utter relief of all those in Avalon now. Glad things are working out. Can't wait to see the wedding. What did Zion do with the sword? When will we see him again? I can't wait for the next update. Thank you for updating today!
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