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Reviews for Ultimate Betrayal

By : KaiDragon
  • From Animegrl750 on June 30, 2009
    I love this story! Please write more!
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  • From lilyrose242 on May 08, 2009
    hi i was wondering if you were going to continue this fic? i love it!
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  • From RedCerberus on April 26, 2009
    Please write more to this story thanks.
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  • From OHMYRA on April 11, 2009
    Noooooooooooo don't stop there it's a great story a little cliche'd but good anyway X3
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  • From happyalien on April 10, 2009
    Not meaning to be offensive but at times your characters are kinda off, by off I mean that Harry goes from such extremes to such extremes, I suppose his character/personality just bothers me .
    Asides from that though I've enjoyed reading this so far and want to make a plea for more Chris/Draco both in and out of this story :P AlsoI would appreciate it if you informed me when you next update Please and Thankyou!
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  • From autumnannette19 on March 29, 2009
    Whats next, whats next? Can you email me when you put up another chapter, please?
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  • From vinsmouse on February 21, 2009
    I love this story, but I miss it. :( Please update soon.
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  • From TouchoftheWind on February 01, 2009
    This is an awesome story! I love it!
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  • From danawarner on January 19, 2009
    Are you updating anytime soon?
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  • From DHH on January 15, 2009
    Wow, this story is the best HP/Charmed crossover but at the same time, it's the weakest due to Harry and Wyatt being too nice and kind toward enemies..I mean, c'mon, it's just so weak!!

    I would examine Wyatt or Harry destroying dumboer, ron, heormei magical core and turning them into non-magical persons or something or do something against them, not all weak and stuff..

    Sincerely,
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  • From DHH on January 14, 2009
    Now Harry thought of sending them elsewhere to live?? I mean, I thought it was stupid of Harry to NOT send them to somewhere else to live, seeing that he has so many other properties..It just seems pointless overall..

    Sincerely,
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  • From DHH on January 14, 2009
    Ok, WTF is it about Harry giving money to mloly and arthur?? I mean, in the beginning, you said that the family was smug about him being thrown into Azkaban and now he's giving them money?? That's just plain made no sense and stupd!!

    Plus Sirus and Remus..


    Those are the only two factors that I found wrong with your story so far..Just plan stupid..

    Otherwise, so far it's good..

    Sincerely,
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  • From Jan on December 12, 2008
    Oh, the plot is thickening... I can't wait to see what's going to happen once they get to America...
    Though I got to admit that I wasn't to pleased with the reaction that the Royal family took upon Aiden and Wyatt...

    Please update chapter 52 soon ^_^

    Jan
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  • From Weirkat on December 08, 2008
    First off I
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  • From Elfwyn on December 02, 2008
    Well there are good parts and so so parts in this fic. All around it is intriguing and well worth reading adventure story. Two things distract from the over all tale. One is the misuse, missing word, or incorrectly worded sentences that appear in every chapter, making one struggle to figure out what was trying to be said. Better editing or a beta would fix this.

    The second, is Wyatt. While I admit to never watching Charms after Chris arrived, I find Wyatt to be an arrogant husband who does not appear to know what the word EQUAL means although he took vows to those very words. He treats his HUSBAND as if he were another subject and not his EQUAL. If you did not want Harry to be an equal you shouldn't have said so in the story. I think a bolt in the ass after the scene with the wizard and the letter would have served Wyatt right and instead Harry caves like a wimp. Bedroom submission is one thing, the rest of your life is another. Wyatt tends to treat Harry like a beloved slave to be ordered around. His doll. A consort is more than an arm ornament and a mind spy.
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