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Reviews for Ultimate Betrayal

By : KaiDragon
  • From Arishaa on October 01, 2008
    Great story! Love it! All the royal stuff is so cool... anyway, my vote is for Chris/Neville. Neville has put up with so much, it'd be great if he could catch a break! And this would make him and Harry brothers, which I suppose I could see Draco being but not really - just for me it would be better if it was Neville. Anyway, look forward to more, thanks lots!
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  • From LadyFoxFire on October 01, 2008
    You really do ahve to pity Neville. He's stuck in his cell with the idiots and the Twins. Why in hell would the Twins follow Dumbljerk? I thought they would be smart than that.
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  • From Wingedmerkat on October 01, 2008
    I love this story! It is so good!! Want more! Oh and I also think Chris/Draco would be real hot! Zion/Twins too!
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  • From dracoharry4life on October 01, 2008
    Draco definitely likes Chris and Chris has noticed Draco..even in the caos.
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  • From Ladyroo88 on October 01, 2008
    WOW!! That's so awesome!! Chris/draco and I guess I wouldn't mind Neville/Zion but you did mention that neville had a girlfriend!
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  • From MrGalion on October 01, 2008
    holy god nice update speed.

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  • From lazycrazykitten on October 01, 2008
    Chis/Neville & Draco/Zion.
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  • From MrGalion on October 01, 2008
    Keep up the good writing

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  • From bumblebee on October 01, 2008
    I don't know how many times i can vote, but here goes

    Chris/Neville, Draco/Zion please

    wonder what happens when storm gets hungry
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  • From Jan on September 30, 2008
    Oh, can I change my vote?...
    I thing Draco would be better off with Zion and Chris with Neville!

    If it's to late... then C/D and Z/N... or Z/Weasley Twins ^_^

    Please update chapter 20 soon ^_^

    Jan

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  • From angelkitty on September 30, 2008
    awesome ending and what happens when storm is hungry, cant wait to read more
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  • From volume on September 30, 2008
    awesome!!!!!

    chris/draco/zion please
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  • From lazycrazykitten on September 30, 2008
    Wonderful chapter, as always.
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  • From LadyVaughan on September 30, 2008
    Your welcome. It does sound right to me. Once again you have me on the edge of my seat waiting to see what happen next. Are you going to wait for Wyatt to Rise the War Flag til him and Harry wed? (I keep useing harry because am use to writeing it!:))I love your story, I check at least once or twice a day to see if you have updated. my vote is as follow's:
    Draco/Zion(Kindred Lord)
    Chirs/female

    Are you going to have Leo in the story anymore? I mean him and Piper are still Married right?
    Please,PLease,Pretty Please update soon! :)

    ~LadyVaughan

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  • From Flare on September 30, 2008
    i know this is not up but i think neville/chris/draco...od if that's not a vote chris.neville. Draco/oc

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