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Reviews for Ultimate Betrayal

By : KaiDragon
  • From LadyFoxFire on September 30, 2008
    Chris H./ Neville L. or Chris H./ OC can be male or female

    Draco M./ OC can be male or female

    Never expect an attack on the Charmed Ones. Hmmm wonder who plotted that up? Dumbledore or someone else. We haven't heard from Ron or Hermione in a bit

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  • From Ladyroo88 on September 30, 2008
    I think Chris H./Draco M. would be hot! Neville with Luna? Britian wizards are idiots!!! I can't wait for more!!!
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  • From Sakya on September 30, 2008
    Chris/Neville? Chris and Neville, are you serious? Wow, never saw that one coming... and I still don
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  • From Ladyroo88 on September 30, 2008
    I love it!! You rock!!! More please!!
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  • From lazycrazykitten on September 30, 2008
    Dark Lords? I wonder if Harry picked up on that...
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  • From alma on September 29, 2008
    Good chapter.
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  • From alma on September 29, 2008
    Good chapter.
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  • From RoseKelly on September 29, 2008
    GOOD chapters.
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  • From Jan on September 29, 2008
    Can Dumbledore be more of an idiot? I can't wait to see what's going to happen next! Will Harry be forced to reunite with his godfather and pet wolf?

    Please update chapter 15 soon ^_^

    Jan
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  • From danawarner on September 29, 2008
    Lemme guess. Albus is killing his brain cells thru lemon drops, because he's gone NUCKING FUTS!!!
    He's going to get everyone killed (not that Albus doesn't deserve a swift kick in the jewels for what he did to Harry).

    He's supposed to be so smart. Doesn't he KNOW about the 'twice blessed' child & who birthed him?
    And the bastard claims to know everything about magic. Idiot.
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  • From Snakelette on September 29, 2008
    Oh my, Dumbledore is going to get himself into a whole lot of trouble! Serves him right if it get's him killed *evil grin* Glad that Wyatt knows the truth about Harry/Aidens identity. Can't wait to what happens when those four arrive in America. Keep it up! :)
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  • From lazycrazykitten on September 29, 2008
    *Grumbles* Damn that old man. Oh yes, lets just go off and kidnap the legendary Charmed ones. Even if he managed to succeed, he'd have to find a way to actually get them to fight while they are over in England. They could always just sit down and watch the show, never taking a part in it.
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  • From Ladyroo88 on September 29, 2008
    YAY! you updated!!!! I can't wait for more!!!
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  • From angelkitty on September 29, 2008
    i think that all those sweets have rotted his brain or something. this is getting very intresting. cant wait to read more
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  • From angelkitty on September 29, 2008
    oh man wyatt had better watch what he says to harry. if he says the wrong thing then harry will close up like a clam and run man this is getting so good i cant wait to read more
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