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Reviews for Ultimate Betrayal

By : KaiDragon
  • From alma on September 27, 2008
    good chapter.
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  • From LadyVaughan on September 27, 2008
    I lOVE YOUR STORY! I usaully don't review unless I really love the story, The PLOT or what I've been makeing of it is well figure out and I don't see any spell mistake's but maybe one or two. I do have a question dough, I belive Wyatt will be fine with his past but what about Wyatt's family, I mean family is importnant to a person and as close as Wyatt is to his family wouldn't they have a say about it, I mean your haveing Harry worried about Wyatt but what about his family? You said they had met him and like him, can you do a flashback to the meeting? Maybe that way my question is anwer as am sure am not explaing the question how it sound in my head! lol! Now your writeing is wonderful and the plot is good, I don't think I have seen a crossover like this one, The only thing I can tell you to do when your writeing is to not let the reader's take over, yes our point of view allow's you to see all angle's but remember it's your story and you should be happy about the plot and the pairing's and while you might make a few changes for a reader make it the ones you would have make anyway and that it goes along with your plot, even my flashback if you don't have it in the plot and it doesn't fit don't put it in, I don't mind, Sorry for the rant it's just I get to reading a really good story and the plot line is soooo good but then The Writer start's going what everyone want him/her to do and It lose's the plot you know? and way I love your story and if you have any poll's I will vote my idea's then. PLEASE, PLEASE PRETTY PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!
    Keep up the wonderful writeing!
    ~LadyVaughan
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  • From bumblebee on September 27, 2008
    ooohh! Finally Harry's going to tell Wyatt about his past.

    Are you going to pair Draco up with someone?

    Update soon!
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  • From angelkitty on September 27, 2008
    i have the feeling that when harry tells wyatt what happen that wyatt is going to be PISSSED and harry may have a hard time keeping him calm. cant wait to read more
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  • From lazycrazykitten on September 27, 2008
    Awe....Wyatt and Harry are sooo cute!
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  • From angelkitty on September 27, 2008
    whoa that was great i really did enjoy it
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  • From on September 27, 2008
    Another great chapter - wonderfully written as always, and darn addicting.
    Cant get enough...and cant wait to read more.
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  • From windlg84 on September 26, 2008
    oh boy
    hmmm
    well whats next
    update soon
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  • From Ladyroo88 on September 26, 2008
    OH my goddness!!! that rocked!!! I can't wait for more!!!! Lord Kage is the bomb!!!
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  • From RoseKelly on September 26, 2008
    I loved the new chapter. I can't wait for more.
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  • From Jan on September 26, 2008
    Oh, I hope Voldy doesn't find out that it's Lucius and Severus that are his spies!!! If so, I at least hope that they get to get away before the bastard kills them!

    Please update chapter 10 soon ^_^

    Jan

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  • From windlg84 on September 26, 2008
    update soon

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  • From on September 26, 2008
    WELL, I CAN NOT WAIT FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER AND WHAT IS TO HAPPEN NEXT.
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  • From on September 26, 2008
    I love it
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  • From ANON - Anon on September 26, 2008
    hope to see more soooooooooon!!! ^_^
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