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Reviews for Ultimate Betrayal

By : KaiDragon
  • From SeulWolfe on November 29, 2008
    It's taken me all day.. to read this.. with all the interruptions.. but damn.. I like this.. and glad that Severus isn't with Narcissa... That Sirius and Remus really were on Harry's side..

    I could go on..Just can't wait to read the next installment..
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  • From bumblebee on November 27, 2008
    Danger is coming. You better not have Aiden kidnap.

    When will Sirius and Remus know about Harry?

    Update soon please!
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  • From Vitki on November 26, 2008
    Hehe, good luck Moldyworts! I looooove this story, good writing, good plot, hot boys...what else is needed? Please update soon, and I totally get the winter rant! Ew...winter, snow, shoveling, cold...wah!
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  • From Leentjef on November 25, 2008
    very good chapter keep going and post soon
    bye bye
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  • From YanaYugi on November 25, 2008
    run harry run
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  • From alma on November 24, 2008
    good chapter.
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  • From on November 24, 2008
    I just hope that you are warm and okay.

    Another great chapter and I just hope that Voldie knows that he will die a painful death.
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  • From on November 24, 2008
    i love it.
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  • From Sapphirequill on November 21, 2008
    Wow!!!!
    What a great story so far!

    please email me when you update at no1wag@hotmail.com.

    I can't wait to read more.
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  • From on November 14, 2008
    Another great chapter!, the plot thickens!
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  • From bumblebee on November 14, 2008
    Uh oh, I sense trouble.
    I really do hope Harry/Aiden will tell Sirius and Remus his secrets, since his cover will be out soon anyway.

    Update soon!!
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  • From Leentjef on November 13, 2008
    very very good chapter kep going and post soon
    bye bye
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  • From Darkless on November 13, 2008
    As if Harry/Aiden wasn't stressed enough, now Narcissa had to throw a hissy-fit and hie back to Britian. Harry's cover is about to be blown...the proverbial 'shit' is about to hit the fan! Keep those calming potions handy, Sev.
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  • From on November 13, 2008
    i love it
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  • From Jan on November 13, 2008
    Oh, I wanted Voldy to kill that elf cunt, but that last paragraph sounded better, have Wyatt kill her in the most painful way as possible *rubs hands together, while an evil malicious gleam appears both into my eyes, and onto my grin*

    Please update chapter 51 soon ^_^

    Jan


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