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Reviews for Ultimate Betrayal

By : KaiDragon
  • From on October 25, 2008
    I knew it!

    This was another great chapter!
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  • From bumblebee on October 25, 2008
    I knew it! He's pregnant! *giggles*

    When will Aiden know about Sirius and Remus???
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  • From Ladyroo88 on October 25, 2008
    I knew it!!! OOooo! the twins are going to have a hard time!!!
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  • From alma on October 25, 2008
    Good chapter.
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  • From alma on October 25, 2008
    Yay!! Minerva is good!!!!
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  • From julesquires on October 25, 2008
    Haha! Thought that would be coming up soon. An innocent Minerva, troublesome twins and a horrible Dumbledore. Can't wait to see what happens next. When will Augusta arrive? What will happen to Neville? Thanks for the update, see you again soon!
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  • From on October 25, 2008
    YES, THIS IS WHAT A STORY IS SUPPOSE TO BE A GREAT RIDE!

    IT CHILLED ME WHEN MINNIE SAID WHAT SHE SAID!

    ANOTHER GREAT CHAPTER AND I CAN NOT WAIT FOR THE REST!
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  • From cherrybifem on October 25, 2008
    The triwizard tournament took place in Fourth Year not Third like you state in your story. Just thought to let you know. It is a small thing but it is there. Otherwise, I love this story. I have been checking daily for updates and get so happy when a new one is posted. Keep up the good work.
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  • From Ladyroo88 on October 24, 2008
    Ooooo! I know! I know!! Pick me! Pick me! *waving a hand in the air trying to get the author attention*
    Aiden is Pregnant!!! I can't wait for the reunion of Remus and Sirius and Aiden!!! or neville and his gran!! oh and how all the britain people find out about aiden!!! More please! I can't wait!!! *Big puppy dog eyes*
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  • From angelkitty on October 24, 2008
    i still say that he is preggers i cant wait to read more and find out if i am right or not.....
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  • From Leentjef on October 24, 2008
    very good chapter
    keep going and post soon
    bye bye
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  • From RoseKelly on October 23, 2008
    I love Minerva. Love the story. Hope for more soon.
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  • From llyoung on October 23, 2008
    Thanks for making Remus and Sirius innocent.
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  • From Slytherdor on October 23, 2008
    OMG! I feel so bad for Siri and Remus.
    I wonder what is gonna happen when they find out exactly what they did to Harry!
    Of Course they have it coming.

    Can't wait to see what happens with McGonagall.
    BTW, you misspelled GUARDS. You seem to have switched the a and u around.
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  • From on October 23, 2008
    I hope I get this right, Harry is pregnant!

    Another great chapter!
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