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  • From on October 23, 2008
    i love it. please let minerva be under spells too.
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  • From bumblebee on October 23, 2008
    Sirius and Remus are innocents!! I could kiss you! In fact i will do that right now! MUUAAHHHH!!!! *giggles* I do hope Aiden will forgive them though. Hmm..wonder if Aiden will tell them that he's Harry..and their reactions
    Ooohhhh is that what i think Aiden might be? pregnant?
    And i'll take it as you promising me to torture Hermione slowly painfully badly, hehe. It'll be so much fun *evil laughs*
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  • From angelkitty on October 23, 2008
    smiling "the magic shift and the smug feeling wyatt gets from magic is that harry is preggers...personally i cant wait to see what they do bumbledork, i think that they should take away his magic put him in a cell and let him watch clips of their day. how severus is now free and finding happyness, how the twins are going to go free, how nev is mated to a vamp, how dogfather and wolf are free of him and now he cant tell them what to do.... cant wait to read more
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  • From LadyVaughan on October 23, 2008
    I love it, now that jujst make my day, learning sirius and remus is not in there right mind when they turn from harry. it the chatper i like most so far! Now am guessing Harry is Pregnant right? that's why his magic is going crazy and why the mother of magic is so smug right? question is it only going to be one or twins or more? can't wait for the next chapter, I love this story! PLEASE,PLEASE,PRETTY PLEASE UPDATE SOON!
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  • From leeannpitbull on October 23, 2008
    My guess as to Aidan's shift in magic is that he is pregnant. Great chapter! I love this story!
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  • From Ladyroo88 on October 23, 2008
    I love it!! can't wait for more!!!!
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  • From alma on October 23, 2008
    Good chapter, I'm sooooo happy that Aiden will still have his goodfathers.
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  • From LadyFoxFire on October 23, 2008
    Thank you for sparing my puppies. I'm assuming the spells are still on them since they're not acting like I would picture Sirius acting when he realized he did nothing to help Harry.

    Will we find out the same thing fro McGongall? Or maybe Snape is Her baby?
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  • From julesquires on October 23, 2008
    Thanks again, for both the update and for the answers to my questions. I'm not sure whether to be disappointed or not that Remus nd Sirius are innocent now...I'm feeling rather vindictive and malicious this morning. Kind of wish they had done something horrible but Aiden will be happy to have them back and that in turn will probably help lighten the mood...if he can forgive them that is. Minerva is Dumbledore's wife...this will make for an interesting interrogation. And there was a bit more TLC between Wyatt and Harry so I'm satisfied for now. Can't wait for Neville to come back into it. Poor Draco, no sex, but at least things aren't ruined between him and Chris. Will Severus and Tamara complete the bond...or whatever it is Vampires do with their mates? Narcissa will pitch a fit I bet, I hope Severus doesn't end up with her - Tamara is a much better choice. Anyway, thanks for the update and I'm off to London so I'll check in again soon!
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  • From Carmeleyes23 on October 22, 2008
    GET HER!!!! war huh good God yall, what is it good for
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  • From Leentjef on October 21, 2008
    post soon
    bye bye
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  • From on October 21, 2008
    another great chapter!
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  • From danawarner on October 21, 2008
    Granger is such an arrogent bitch.
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  • From bumblebee on October 21, 2008
    I do hope Hermione will get tortured really badly!
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  • From alma on October 21, 2008
    good chapter.
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