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From ANON - soniab on March 10, 2009
I adore Remus and even play him at HP cons, he is my man, but I also loved this chapter. It was chock full of angst and drama. I can't wait for the birth and do so wonder whether you shall show us all the Order meeting that followed, but I guess that is inconsquential.

I wonder where Hermione shall have the baby? Whether it be at Bella's house, or in the slave room? I guess it is anyones guess at this stage in time. I just can't see Hermione getting out of this ok, seriously if I had to go through something like this I doubt whether I would be sane when all was said and done.

Lovely, just lovely.

Love Sonia :)
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From Visitkarte on March 10, 2009
PS: But of course there is a way to review the terms of the wow and let someone know. The solution for both is called Pensive.
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From Visitkarte on March 10, 2009
Well, Stockholm-Syndrome is similar to any other illness. It seldom represents itself in the pure, undiluted typical way. If an abduct has more than one abductor, and one of them is treating her 'kindly' while the others only torture her, she will get attached only to the 'kind' abductor. And, in a way, even Remus is a kind of 'abductor' to her, for all means and purposes.

And 'your' Sirius has gone completely mad in Azkaban. And Kreacher is working overtime in HIS madness. Long parts of this chapter I skipped over, they were just too sick to be bearable. I know it's an effect you wanted to achieve, but still... I hope you won't make this last as long as Fritzl tortured his poor daughter. If you intend to make this torture much longer, I'm going to keep on skipping most of the chapters.

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From ANON - roxie on March 10, 2009
Poor Remus! An interesting descent into madness for Sirius. What a psycho, especially since they forced that potion on Remus. I would love to see Remus go full on werewolf on his ass and rip his nasty throat out! I guess he doesn't understand the concept of playing with fire. But no one ever said he was particularly smart did they...

Since chapter 26 is already written, does that mean you are gonna post it soon.... Please, please...
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From abbicee on March 10, 2009
Well I don't blame Remus since I can't help but think of him as a rape victim too, but I wish he could find some way to let someone know about Hermione. Somewhere, in the back of my mind, I keep thinking I should feel some sympathy for Sirius and how he's been driven insane by the brainwashing of Kreacher, but I just can't bring myself to feel it. It doesn't help that Sirius has never been a favorite of mine. All I can think is that Remus managed to throw off Kreacher's subliminal teachings and recognize it for what it was, so why can't Sirius? I know I'm possibly being unfair to Sirius, but I keep thinking his appointment with the veil can't come soon enough, but then, without Sirius what will happen to Hermione? So the baby is the next chapter. I'm looking forward to that, but I wonder where Hermione will be when that happens. In the slave room or with Bella?
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From WesleyY7 on March 09, 2009
I adore Remus, and you're right. This is not a very pleasant chapter. Well, not completely unpleasant of course. ;)

*I like how Remus refers to the basement as the "aquarium". Interesting turn of a phrase there.

*Molly Weasley rocks. That is all.

*"Sirius is cuckoo" has now been added to my mantra list alongside "Poor, poor Hermione". And what's sad is I see his point about Azkaban. His decision to trust Peter led to the death of two of his very best friends, he's been framed for murder, left in prison for over a decade, and is deserted by his friends. (Did Remus try to get help him, or did he believe Sirius guilty? What about Dumbledore?) I get it. He's a little mad and now his mind has been twisted by Kreacher. But holy moly, he is completely losing it. He's gone letting Hermione suffer from her "punishment" and waiting to harm her? (Thanks for only refering to that, instead of telling us by the way.) Cra-zy.

*I've just begun to notice in this chapter Sirius is taking on some of Kreacher's mannerisms. The "oh yes, you will"s and "oh no, you won't"s are even creepier coming from him.

*I'm a bad, bad person and I think I'll be going to that special hell. Thank Merlin for that potion because that entire sex scene was...wow. The guilt and the anger and the dirty talk and the angst and the orgasms. And this: "the two men unconsciously forming a harmonizing rhythm with one another to maximize their pleasure as both fisted her hair, their fingers entwined."

*"What the fuck are they crying for?" Okay, so Sirius is crazy, but I love when he has random thoughts like this when he's irritated. LOL.

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From Visitkarte on March 03, 2009
OK, Kreacher tricked them, but Lupin was more than stupid (yes, I suggest you made him act more stupid by purpose). He should have ordered Kreacher to bring them to Headmaster's office and leave them there. He should never have left Hermione with the wand for the apparition (she has Stockholm Syndrome, after all) and he should have sent a patronus to Dumbledore in the first place and called Dobby to help. A patronus can lead the way.

The story is very complicated and it doesn't help that it has some gaps in the logic. Hermione is tortured and has a deep Stockholm Syndrome, but she has also protective instincts for her unborn baby. Lupin is very clever and experienced fighter, and I spare my comment about Sirius and Kreacher, because they are obviously planed as OOC for the story to work. Let
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From Elphaba on March 02, 2009
GREAT Story! Loved Remmy helping out! Can't wait to see what happens next. I wonder if the vow would allow legimancy?
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From abbicee on March 02, 2009
I've been reading this story off and on since I found it several chapters ago and I can't remember if I've reviewed before or not, but since I think I'm commited to reading it to the end now, I probably should reivew. This normally isn't the type of story I read since I'm not a big D/s fan and I tend to read mostly slash, but there's just something about this fic that keeps me coming back to see what's happenning next. I was so excited to see Hermione finally break and tell Sirius off and then so sad when she reverted back to her slave self, but I think I can understand why that happened. I just hope we haven't seen the last of angry Hermione. Poor Remus, what a situation to be in, but I hope he can keep talking to Hermione and be there when she needs him, but I suspect Sirius is going to force his fantasy onto Hermione and Remus. As for Kreacher, I hope the next time he forces Hermione to go down on him she bites it off.
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From ANON - soniab on March 01, 2009
Oh no, no, no, no, NO! Fuck me, that was intense. I so thought Remus would get Hermione out of there, but Kreacher is a slippery snake of a house elf. Well done my dearest author.

If you are reading either 'Descending into Obscurity', or 'Everything I Do, I do It For You', then you are reading my fanfics. Both are SS/HG, the only ship according to Sonia law, LOL, and I hope you are enjoying them. "Everything...' is not on TPP, but is on Ashwinder.

Thanking you for another brilliant chapter, though it wasn't as long as the past ones have been, and I am looking forward to more. I wonder when SS will come into it, and could you include him a bit more?

Thanks, you're the best.

Love Sonia :)
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From ANON - roxie on March 01, 2009
I like the shorter chapter lengths, they make it easier to read. Poor Remus, now he has to wait. Week to find out what they did to punish Hermione.

Here's a stupid question, I know Remus promised not to tell anyone about the info he has on Hermione and Sirius, but what about telling someone to use legilimacy on him, or using a pensieve. Can he get the info to the people who can help like that ?
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From WesleyY7 on March 01, 2009
Holy crap!!! I didn't...this chapter has left my stunned. Wow.

*Okay, I full on expected an awesome threesome in this chapter, then bam! bam! bam! Everything happened so fast!

*"So Close, Yet So Far Away" Damn you and your evil titles! ;)

*Hermione - The poor girl. Who to listen to? Utterly defeated by this point, but still finding enough strength to side with Remus. Oh to be given such hope and then have it snatched away. Interesting observation about how much she's changed and whether someone else would have reacted the same way. It's be shown that Ginny can be controlled, but I think it's the age and innocence of her and Hermione that allows it? I think Tonks would have been able to say no before things got too deep. And I got a bad shiver thinking about this story, but replacing Minerva has the female. Love her, but ew. ;)

*Kreacher - Okay, so you were an evil mastermind at the end, but you got owned by Remus at one point! Ha!

*Sirius - I've commented enough about your metnal status. I am not looking forward to when he wakes up.

*Remus - You have always been my favorite Professor. Quick thinking fighting the Muggle way and left handed at that. I loved how he managed to find loopholes through the Vow and get out of sleeping with Hermione. (Well, a part of me isn't happy about that of course, because I'm very pervy as you know.) And he gets to see her again in seven days? That's great, but a lot of damage can be done in seven days. And Remus lovers should be worried about the next chapter? Oh man, woman! What are you doing to us? I need to run off and check your warnings again.

*So, I'm seeing a light at the end of the tunnel. I'm torn because while I'll be happy to see the torment ending, I've been enjoying the story. Also a bit worried because while I enjoy when Hermione is enjoying herself (wink, wink) I pretty sure I'd feel guilty after all that has happened in this chapter. Although you have mentioned that this is going to focus on Snape/Hermione and we have yet to see them, so curious as to what's going to happen there.

*Labor is coming soon? Ahhhhh!
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From ANON - JordenK on February 26, 2009
All the Kreacher revelations in the past few chapters have been very surprising. If someone had told me when I began this story that a house elf would have all the power and control in this story, I wouldn't have believed them. Wow. Chapter 22 made me feel very bad for Lupin. I really like him and to be confronted by all of this stuff is sad. Man better get some in the next chapter, but he still makes me sad. Some of his scenes and reacitons made me think of when I tried explaining this story to a friend of mine to get her to read it. "She's kidnapped by Sirius and controlled by Kreacher? She's pregnant, but it's Ron's baby because he pushed his cum in her? Every kink is in this crazy story, but it's well written with a plot?" So Lupin didn't think the last one, but still. And still worried about the baby. Is it wrong to beg you to write faster if you post a cliffhanger?

One of your reviewers posted that Hermione is whiny and the story is going downhill. I have to disagree. She's a kidnapped and pregnant 16 year old who's been brainwashed. I think we're finally seeing some of tha told Hermione spirit at last. (I still expect her to have some orgasms while she keeps that spirit!) I'm finding the story interesting. While some of the stuff is making me uncomfortable (I forever worry about the baby) I like watching the story unfold. I think you have a lot more planned for your readers and I am looking forward to reading.
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From ANON - soniab on February 22, 2009
Oh fantastic, another great chapter. I do wonder however, how Remus will be able to get out of this particular situation without doing 'something' to Hermione? Poor girl indeed. Thanks for the pre-warning about the cliffie otherwise I would have had to hunt you down.

Damn Kreacher and his malnipulative ways... There is so very much more I could say regarding him, but I am too polite... Yeah right. Just know that I love, and hate, the way you have written him.

Oh, and I think Remus will talk Sirius into taking Hermione's baby and the Weasley's will raise it. Am I close? Either that or Bella will kill it. I can not fathom a child being brought up in this environment, especially a girl. hell, any child.

Looking forward to more soon please, and thanks for the email.

Love Sonia :)
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From WesleyY7 on February 21, 2009
Yes! So excited to see a new chapter! I missed the story and got spoiled by your quick update last time. Let's see how our cliffhanger plays out now...

*I really don't know what to say about Sirius in the first part of this chapter. Going over all the ways Hermione *couldn't* escape was a little scary for me. Okay so he's worried her fighting spirit might be bad because of what Bella might do (which is a valid worry), but worried that he might accidently hurt her in the heat of the moment?! Upset that she's ruining the fantasy and turning off someone he might bring down to share her? Oh, Sirius.

*Kreacher, Kreacher, Kreacher. He's now playing them while they're awake?! Gotta love that elfin magic. From nighttime whispers creeping into dreams to daytime dulcet tones soothing into submission. The elf does not miss a trick! Forget Voldemort! Kreacher's the true Dark Lord! Did the Blacks teach him or do all House Elves have this power? I know have a sudden vision of the Hogwarts House Elves going from dorm to dorm, corrupting poor innocent students as they sleep. Bad brain, bad!

*Sirius, Azakaban was awful. You did not deserve to be there. It is not Hermione's fault though! No matter what you think you should get, it's not her fault. Listen to those doubts in your head! Fight, man! (Not too much though because I don't want the story to end just yet.)

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