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Reviews for Cherries

By : bubblybabs
  • From Elphaba on November 25, 2008
    That was a wonderful chapter! Nice balance to what had been happening. I so would like Kreacher to get caught being meant though.
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  • From sbrande on November 24, 2008
    Oh how thoughtful of Sirius to at least attempt to make Hermione's birthday a little bit more memorable for her.

    I do have to wonder whether or not she will attempt to escape in the future and if she will be successful.

    How many more chapters do you see this story containing?

    Please don't rush it, as I am enjoying it tremendously.

    Love Sonia :)
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  • From WesleyY7 on November 23, 2008
    Not a lot of sex in this chapter, but I did have a laugh at your footnotes sending readers back to other chapters to reread the smut there. Good thing you did too because I didn't realize you had added an entire section to the Cherry Bowl scene. Hot, hot, hot! Loved it! Yay for more subliminals, but not so much yay for it being directed at Sirius. Sorry, somnophilia is a kink of mine, but notsomuch with guys. Am beginning to think I'm rather sick for enjoying this, but you're the one writing it, so I don't feel so bad. ;)
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  • From ANON - roxie on November 23, 2008
    I liked this chapter. I can see how Sirius might not be such a bad guy in different circumstances. Hermione seems to be getting close to the point where, even if she is rescued, she will never recover psychologically. I still really want her rescued but if you don't plan for this story to end well, please give me a heads up. I hope you have some really good payback planned for Kreacher cause that boy deserves it! Just out of curriosity, why isn't Sirius more squicked out by the stuff Kreacher is doing?
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  • From WesleyY7 on November 22, 2008
    Interesting story, but I do understand the above reviewers desire to see Hermione get rescued. It's gotten to the point where it's almost more pain than pleasure. I never thought I would ever type these words, but Kreacher's whispering to a sleeping Hermione is very erotic. I would love to see (and hear) more of his subliminal suggestions to and fondling of an oblivious Hermoine. Okay, now I really feel like a pervert!
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  • From ANON - Roxie on November 17, 2008
    please let her be rescued! I get the whole Dom/sub thing but come on. She needs to get out of there. And why can't moody see her in the basement with that magic eye of his?
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  • From ANON - Anon on November 15, 2008
    Well, you're doing a really thorough and brilliant job portraying some really heinous and disgustingly depraved acts. I think you could have split up your chapters more so it would be more manageable to read. you pack a whole lot into one chapter, almost too much. anyways, good writing. The last chapter was really really gross, but I understand it is something people engage in and I've accidently come across this on the internet. I feel really bad for Hermione, you portray her feelings really well. Anyway, keep doing what you're doing.
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  • From ANON - soniab on November 14, 2008
    I am thoroughly enjoying this story and I'm not ashamed to say this. Keep up the good work as it looks like you've done your research quite admirably.
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  • From ANON - Seravina on October 31, 2008
    Will there be more?
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  • From 1505627 on October 18, 2008
    scat please
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  • From deadhead on October 16, 2008
    I liked this a lot. I only wish you had lingered a little longer over each act, describing them in more detail - smell, taste, feel etc. Are you planning to write more?
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