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By : bubblybabs
  • From starupinthesky on April 23, 2009
    I've finally caught up with your story. I am really hoping that Hermione will realize that she shouldn't go with Sirius. You have done a very good job of showing her symptoms of Stockholm syndrome, but I still hope that she is able to see all the harm that he has done to her.
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  • From Elphaba on April 23, 2009
    Ok it took me 3 days to read this chapter and it was excellent. You handled everything VERY well. You reached out and touched my heart.
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  • From Visitkarte on April 22, 2009
    PS: After the shock of the dead baby I knew, I was scared to death every time my son slept longer than 3 hours t time... And I always let my babies sleep 45
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  • From Visitkarte on April 22, 2009
    SIDS was a great idea, seeing that Hermione is in so much distress anyway and she doesn't deserve the added knowledge of the real reason why Adara is dead. It would be a very good idea to modify Sirius' memory, too, no matter what his wishes are.

    BUT: How are they going to explain her why she isn't allowed to sleep in the same room as her child? The statistics say that children who sleep in the same bed with the parents are more likely to dye on SIDS. And the children who sleep on their tummy, which sleep in too warm clothes, on a too soft mattress, with a pillow and such. So, it means, some of the SIDS-babies were probably smothered in their sleep. I knew a baby who died on SIDS and I know someone who could save his kid with a lot of luck. They monitored the child until it was two years old in the sleep. So, using a 'monitoring charm' with a loud alarm and a kind of a 'shocker' 'just in case' might be very helpful, even if it was a pretty lie. They could fix the charm so it would wake even a deaf person...

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  • From ANON - Lilandra on April 22, 2009
    I'm so glad you updated. I started reading this story just expecting some smut, but it is so much more. It has some really upsetting chapters and ideas. It is well-written and well-documented. I did not read the reviews, but did read your replies, and I deduced from them that several people have commented on the topic of having an orgasm while being raped. You gave a good explanation.
    I don't know if this has already been mentioned, but I can't understand how Kreacher could have believed he is punishing himself by having sex with Hermione. I mean, I can tell myself I must punish myself by eating some choclate, but I would know that was not really a punishment. (This is a comment on something a few chapters ago, but I only started reading a few days ago.)
    I'm curious to how the story will develop. I hope Remus will get his feelings for Nymphadora back and Hermione will end up with Severus and tell Sirius to go fuck himself. Perhaps she could drop some of her worst memories into a pensieve and Sirius be forced to watch them? Maybe then he would stop acting so selvish. I wonder if Draco will turn up again in the story, I would like that. Good luck writing.
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  • From WesleyY7 on April 22, 2009
    There was so much to take in with this chapter. 17,000+ words and no "mindless sex stuff". Sirius and Hermoine's reactions to their daughter's death. The Grangers' reactions to their daughter's experience. Remus and Sirius's conflicting thoughts and emotions. Snape and Lupin's discussion about Hermione and Lily. Actually, Sanpe in general. Your author's notes. (*hugs*) A lot to take in. I'm going to have to read this one again before I can give a thorough review. However...


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  • From apkblack on April 20, 2009
    Okay, now I'm officially nagging. /tappingtoesimpatiently

    PLEASE UPDATE!!!!! I'M DYIN' HERE!!!!!!
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  • From WesleyY7 on April 13, 2009
    JayFortuna - I don't know if you read other reviews, but I just had to comment because your feelings on Adara's death mirrored my own. When I first read this chapter, I was absolutely devestated. However, there was that small part of me that was relieved it was Adara and not Persimmione which made me feel very, very guilty.

    And I too have been worried about Kreacher remaining alive, but now you've added one more concern. I didn't even think of using info on the baby's death against Hermione. Merlin.

    See this, Babs? We love you, but you're evil!! ;)
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  • From ANON - JayFortuna on April 13, 2009
    Okay. Here goes...

    I'm really caught in this controversy about Sirius. He has been acting like a real *** (put any bad word here). But besides his own psychology, he has Kreacher and Azkaban to influence his behaviour. Still, some certain thoughts were really his own, for example, ''it was okay if she orgasmed" sad excuses for logic. And, unlike Remus, he never tried to analyze his behaviour ("Why? I don't know, I just am"). Yep, he's pretty clueless about everything. So I do not really know what to think about him. But no matter what, I never felt any pity, probably because he's had a, um, good time. OMG, I think I'll never be able to solve this problem.

    Adara's death... oh. Just when it seemed like Hermione had been hurt with everything in any possible way and there could be nothing new to cause her pain, it had to happen. Oh, I really want Sirius to hurt... and in some twisted way I'm glad that it was his daughter who died and not Ron's. Maybe he'll even use his brains and realise whose fault it is. But if he blames Hermione... it will be just too much.

    Letting Kreacher exist looks like a possibility for him to escape. As well as not telling Hermione the cause of her daughter's death is a possibility for her learning it the hardest way. Of course, you shouldn't tell us anything, but given these possibilities, I'm pretty nervous to read next chapters. Anyway, I believe in your abilities to provide us with great stuff ^_^
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  • From apkblack on April 13, 2009
    Just posting because I'm checking back obsessively for updates and it's getting frustrating to show up and be, well, frustrated, so figured I should do something just so I feel like I showed up for a reason.
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  • From Visitkarte on April 12, 2009
    Chapter 31

    What an Easter present! So sad, so cruel!

    I'm happy at least Persemone is alive, but Hermione is not nearly close to recovery. In fact, I'm afraid she'll crash badly, in the first line.

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  • From Elphaba on April 07, 2009
    Oh That was a great chapter! Very sad but compelling! Wonderful job writing. I love that you site references for everything that you need to. Great job!
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  • From apkblack on April 06, 2009
    One really stupid little nitpicking comment: At the very end, when Severus asks Albus if he'll "tell Sirius about his daughter," you know as well as I that Severus would have said "tell Black about his daughter."

    ;-)
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  • From ANON - abbi cee on April 06, 2009
    Two chapters to read! Did I miss the first one or did you post two together? Anyway, I'm glad to see Draco isn't completely heartless. Bella is beyond twisted, it makes you wonder if she too had a perverted house elf giving her lessons. I bet Lucius will not be pleased. And Poor Adara, she was so young and innocent. As if Hermione didn't have enough problems now she'll have this guilt to add on to it. Sirius will be devastated, but considering his mental state I wonder if he won't get angry immediately after. Will he blame Hermione or will he realize that this is partly his fault too? And what are they going to do with Kreacher? I sure hope they can find an elf-proof cell for him or Hermione still won't be out of danger. Looking forward to seeing what kind of answers they can get out of him.
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  • From apkblack on April 06, 2009
    Oh thank god. Finally. I can breathe again.
    It was relatively easy to pick up that Remus was Snape, because you got the tone of his speech just right. Though the "Gr- Hermione" hint was very helpful too. LOL And thank you thank you thank you thank you for not making Dumbledore a part of the sex. I can't get with that one. (His youthful love for Grindlewald can last forever, as far as I see it.)
    I really thought Kreacher had done something to Adara, I didn't get it right away that she was smothered by Hermione until reading your notes. Once again, instead of taking the easy or obvious way out, you've totally mindfucked us all. (crying)
    Great writing.
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