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From ANON - AnonGirl on April 17, 2016
I know it's been a few years, but I'm still hopefull for an update.
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From LinBer on March 29, 2013
This was a really great and disturbing story at the same time.. You have a great imagination and I can only imagine how much time you have put into this! However, it gets a little too much of the talking, thinking, explaining, wondering etc. in the later chapter's (you also wondered if people had stopped reading or just stopped reviewing - I believe this is why..).. It tends to get a little boring (for lack of a better word) when everyone tries to figure out what is going on with Hermione, and when they do, they explain it and talk about it to someone else (mostly Albus or Albus to someone else
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From ANON - RavenJedi on February 03, 2013
Since it appears you have abandoned this story, any chance you could tell summarize what was going to happen? Questions I, and maybe some other readers, would love to have the answers to:

Did Remus ever wise up and realize his attachment to Hermione is unhealthy for both of them? Does he ever get back together with Tonks?

Does Ron and the rest of the Weasleys ever find out about the babies?

Does Sirius die?

What happens to Kreacher?

Does the Golden Trio ever find each other?

How in the world does Hermione end up with Snape?

How is the conclusion of the fifth book affected?

And what of Hermione and her daughter? Are they every able to live a normal life? Is she ever cured?

Sucks that you're not writing anymore (I'm assuming) but hoping you can share some answers.
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From WesleyY7 on October 21, 2012
Happy 4th birthday, Cherries. :)
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From ANON - jk on July 24, 2011
Siriusly, its been months. Please don't leave us hanging. This is an addicting story! Update?
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From ANON - Kips on July 03, 2011
me again. dont read reviews because i dont want to spoil anything but saw the one above me. ss/hg is your endgame? really? like i said, im only a few chapters in but that shocks me. with all the men in hermiones life that pairing doesnt really fit with whats happening right now. he could care less about her. hes all about lily. i guess i could change my mind but with all the bad stuff thats happening to her i cant see how getting together with another troubled man old enough to be her father is going to make things better for her.
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From ANON - Kips on July 03, 2011
im a few chapters into this and am really liking it. some of the stuff makes me uncomfortable and goes to far, but its a really good story. packed with emotion and smut. cant beat that. alhtough im guessing from the warnings things will get worse. however good it is, im looking at the dates and worried i may become too invested in a story that rarely gets updated. do you have a schedule or goal for completion? ive been burned before and do not want to get involved in an abandoned wip.
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From ANON - wrapitup on June 30, 2011
Are you ever gonna finish this? It's already longer than "War an Peace" and you've gone nowhere near the Hg/Ss pairing you mentioned early on. What's up? You gettin near the end? You said around 30 chapters and currently we are at 43, wrap it up already!!
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From ANON - lazy anon reviews from phone on June 22, 2011
Roses are red,
Violets are blue,
I'm so tickled,
To see an update from you.

Sirius has lost it,
He's creeping me out,
I liked him better,
When he made Hermione moan & shout.

Remus is hovering,
He needs to back away,
Go find Tonks this minute,
And let Harry & Ron save the day!

Persimmonie is to precious,
Adara still makes me sad,
Yet I still kinda miss the hot sex,
Does that make me evil and bad?

Bill is still with Fleur,
But magic may make him give it a go,
You can always bring in Charlie,
And where the hell is Draco?!

Hermione isn't cured yet,
That may make her quite randy,
Another vigorous shag,
Would be rather dandy.

Your story is amazing,
Emotional and hot,
Now I have to beg,
Do you have an update or not?! :P
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From StillHorny on May 22, 2011
Oh my!!!

Hermoine's parent want to take her away? Is this Daddy dearest's attempt at getting Hermoine to himself? Was he affected by her tears?!?!?!

Poor Tonks; I feel sorry for her.

Remus caught by Filch AND that damn cat. Will Harry and Ron's night time searching help Remus out of this mess???? Will Remus then be forced to let them see Hermoine? If so, how will she react?

And what about Sirius and his imaginary Hermoine. What is that all about?

Oh what a perverse plot you have made. I am LOVING every word of it!!!!! *more smut, more smut, more smut*
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From StillHorny on May 12, 2011
I have been reading this story for about two weeks now...WOW!!!!!!

I am a major D/s slut and Hermoine (even though she is doing better) is an excellent submissive. I LOVE that she misses the ropes; that was priceless.

Plots everywhere, you never know what will happen next. Will Sirius get to Hermoine? Will Severus and Bill try to get some "private" time with Hermoine? Was her father affected?

I can't wait to see what happens next!?!?!?!?! I await your next chapter with bated breath.
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From BlueAlquimista on April 11, 2011
I said I was curious about the ending?... Well... now, I'm not.

It has some good sex-scenes (but others are dead boring), so you could cut it, and make some decent one-chapter PWP fics...

But the 'plot'?... is totally incoherent, non-logical, and often ridiculous... basically all the wizard population is retarded, and while all people has a IQ of 20 Kreacher has 70 so he is the king!!!... He will be totally invincible... until the moment you chose to take him down, of course. Not very original. Usually is Super-Powerful-Dark-Lord Voldemort, in this fic is Super-Powerful-Dark-Lord Kreacher... but it's the same thing.

0-10? I give it a 3.

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From ANON - eclaire on April 10, 2011
Hi! Just wanted to thank you for writing a realistic fic (on account of a woman losing her virginity, I mean). I also read you AN on chapter three and it was eye-opening to tell the truth. I could actually relate myself to many of the things you wrote and thus was encouraged to research the subject further.

I, while definitely not a virgin for many years, am still highly inexperienced in love making. Particularly the part of penetration that should feel nice. Even if I think that I'm aroused enough, I have never felt any positive feelings from it and cannot describe it being better than "tolerable". Even though I understand that erotic fiction is mostly inaccurate, I have at times doubted myself and thought that there was something wrong with me. None of my friends could understand my problem either. However, now I have hope that things could get better... =)

About your fic itself: I like the overall dark feel of it. Both Sirius and Hermione being manipulated expertly by an sadistic house elf is actually deeply arousing thought :3

Thanks for your fic so far. Now I'm going to read chapter 4 -->
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From BlueAlquimista on April 09, 2011
so much imperius!... but Sirius can't 'imperiuse' Kreacher?... ridiculous!
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From BlueAlquimista on April 09, 2011
bufff... this is getting boring... 42 chapters!... the sex was good, but after the kidnapping.. has no interest, is only a list of 'deviations'. And the plot, the thing what would make this interesting... is so illogical! it make the fic boring... no matter what's happening, nothing has sense, so anything can occur without make any coherence with what has happened before...

It's a shame... so realistic in some ways, and so unrealistic in the most important ones...

Do you really think a crisis like this can go unresolved for more of a day or two?... Molly would let Ginny stay? or Harry? The order would still using a house who is not safe?... do you really think Ron and Harry (with the help of Dobby and/or Mad-Eye) couldn't find her? etc, etc, etc...

Day 1: Hermione disappears.
Day 2: The headquarters are dissasembled from botton to top.
ALL PEOPLE is searched with legetimency and veritaserum... and sniffed by Remus and Snape!?
Hermione is found, Kreached killed, and Sirius probably killed too (or send back to azkaban)
End of story.

If by some strange thing, they couldn't find Hermione, the next obvious step is to destroy the headquarters stone by stone... until they would find her.

It's totally ridiculous to think they would do nothing about it for days, weeks... years?... totally ridiculous.

I'm a little curious about how can this mess end... but I will briefly go over the remaining chapters.

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