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Reviews for Daughter of Leda

By : andarte
  • From Poetlover on November 29, 2008
    No....it's not terrible. I'm sure we all have moments like that. I wish I had a coworker that looked like Lucius! LOL I do have a friend that reminds me of the elves in Lord of the Rings, but that doesn't have any bearing with the Harry Potter world! I hope that things are getting better for ya. Great chapter! I'm surprised Hermione mentioned the charm on the necklace that Leda left her. But I guess eventually, and in a small way Hermione has to trust Lucius. Keep up the excellent work. I look forward to the next chapter!!
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  • From dolphindreamer on November 28, 2008
    Love this story so far, can not wait to read more. I really wish the chapters were longer just so that I could have more of this to enjoy. I hope things get better for you soon. Try to write as stress relief!
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  • From catysmom1028 on November 25, 2008
    I like it. Please update soon.

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  • From Poetlover on November 24, 2008
    Yes, an update! Good chapter. who wouldn't want lucius' hands all over their body? *grins* sorry to hear about the muses going on holiday, but it's good to see that they are coming back. :)keep up the great work, and keep those chapters coming.
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  • From Tenar10r on November 24, 2008
    This is fun! I am looking forward to more.
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  • From LadyVoldemort87 on November 24, 2008
    OOOO, I do like this, one question though...How old is Hermione?
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  • From GammaOrionis on November 24, 2008
    I'm so sorry you are having relationship trouble. I know how icky that can make one feel. I hope it gets better soon, though, it can take a while to work things like that out.

    The chapter was definitely good! I'm just a little sad it wasn't longer, but it had a nice cut off place. I hope to read more soon, when you are ready.
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  • From happybunny on November 24, 2008
    Thoroughly enjoyable. I especially liked the bit about the charm repressing Hermione's personality. Perhaps she would have been in Slytherin without it...

    Poor Lucius. I know he's generally not the pitiable sort, but you have to feel a little sorry for him, with what Leda probably has him set up for.

    Hope you are doing better! Good luck getting your muses back into shape!
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  • From jracklesfan77 on November 12, 2008
    Just wanted to say that I enjoyed the first few chapters of this - it shows promise and sounds like an interesting plot :D

    Not quite sure if and how I will know there are updates to this - I don't check the site often.

    Anyway, nice work and if I get a chance to read the read, great! If not, thanks for sharing anyway. Keep up the good work and best of luck.
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  • From MistressV on November 11, 2008
    Geeze, I'm offline for a few days and you sneek not one but two chapters up! As before, you haven't yet failed me with your flow and grammer and the like. Lucius Malfoy on his knees? Goodness, me, I may be coming down with the vapors! ;P

    I don't think I've yet read a story that involves Hermione's mom - I like their excursion together! And of course they would run into the ultimate aristocrat himself. He does seem ever present when he is least (or maybe it's most) wanted!

    Keep it up and add some more chapters soon!
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  • From ANON - Anon on November 10, 2008
    mhmmm. Great story. Love it. Keep it up. I love this strong-willed hermione. And this silky-spoken lucius.
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  • From Shaitan on November 09, 2008
    I am enjoying your story very much. Please update soon.
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  • From GammaOrionis on November 09, 2008
    We all have writing demands of our time. I know I do! I shall have to be discontent and wait...I'm sure the wait will be worth it. Lucius was delightful here. Charming to Mrs. Granger! Hehehehe! *happy dance and claps* Hope to read more later this week!
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  • From wishywashy on November 09, 2008
    so hermione is embarrassed of her mommy?
    i'm enjoying this. a bit mary-sue-ish at times b ut still very good.
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  • From Poetlover on November 09, 2008
    Very true! I can't wait to read more of Lucius' thoughts on what's going on. Atleast I hope you will include his thoughts on what's going on.
    *Grin* Sorry about the missed spelled word in my last review. It was around 4am when I reviewed the last chapter. I couldn't sleep, so I decided to see if any stories had been updated. My brain was half asleep. lol I am really looking forward to reading more. I can't wait to see where this goes. Keep up the great work.


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