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Reviews for Struggling Through New Beginnings

By : HarryGinny4eva
  • From MotekElm on March 31, 2017

    Romantic, optimistic love story of the Griffindors and Slytherins coming together after the war. A bit long and drawn out. 

    I don't like how the author revives the dead from the war but overall I enjoyed it, and I think the revived characters, especially Snape, Lupin and Tonks really added to the story


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  • From ANON - venomous_princess on June 17, 2014
    I am relatively new to this site and fan fiction in general I just needed to tell you that I am so glad I found this story it was perfection!!! I have spent the last couple of days devouring your story. I have adored getting to know each character through new eyes. Pansy became this strong amazing character with proper issues but with an amazing heart underneath. I have laugh, cried and dreamt of this story and have to let you know you have the gift of writing most stories on here are just smut, not that it's a bad thing but, you wove a complex story that captures and intrigues. I hope that you continue to write your stories on here.. I would love the chance to see how your story ends.
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  • From Astrid-Lemons on June 14, 2014
    So I didn't get much sleep last night and just finished reading the whole story a few minutes ago. I am completely blown away! It made me laugh so hard at some points that I couldn't breathe and just barked like a mentally challenged seal. Then there were parts that made me cry hysterically to the point where I swore I could feel the character's pain. I absolutely fell in love with Pansy, to my complete surprise! You have a wonderful gift, love!

    I hope you are still working on a sequel, as I am very anxious to devour more of your work. You have me in complete awe, and I feel so honored to have someone with your talent review my own stories. You are the kind of writer I strive to be. Thank you for sharing such an amazing piece of work!
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  • From Astrid-Lemons on June 13, 2014
    Hey there lovely!!!

    I'm only on chapter 9 but I just had to tell you how much I'm enjoying this! I absolutely adore how you take time to get in every character's head to give it more of a three-dimensional feel. I'll be lucky if I get any sleep tonight! I'll probably end up spamming you with new reviews as I read. I hope you won't mind =)
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  • From ANON - MilissaRukia on February 07, 2014
    Chapter 36 is where I am at. And I have loved the story so far. All that has been in the telling. The way that everyone interacts and behaves seems so real. It is like reading a well written novel. I thank you for the entertainment that I receive from reading.
    As it is bed time for me I wanted to put out my thoughts on the last chapter that I read. I have laughed at their antics so much I have my family looking at me strangely. I so loved what Snape did to Draco and Hermionie in class it was to die for. I will continue to read more tomorrow and know that I will be just as entertained as I am now.
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  • From elenavaldes on March 20, 2011
    I'n glad I get to read the uncensored version here although sometimes this site doesn't behave. I'm enjoying this story very much. Poor Draco, I kind of understand why he feels the way he does. He might find it hard to adjust to the new reality at Hogwarts. Great fic!

    Elena
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  • From LadyBlueEyes on April 13, 2010
    HG4Eva...

    Just wanted to tell you I read this again. Its still as meaningful as it was the first time I read it, and it still made me smile and even laugh out loud at some parts. I haven't been on much lately, and yes I'm slacking in my own writing, but I hope to see more from you soon!!

    Best wishes..

    Lady B*
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  • From Quiranna on April 07, 2009
    Oh, please. Get the first chapter of five years later started quickly!!! I really want to see more of Luna and Greg. That particular couple is so cute. And give us smut from everyone, if possible?! Please! I love sequels to much loved stories ( and this one is definitely on that list.) Keep it up! You're doing wonderfully and I believe that you'll get a nice crossover audience from it.
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  • From margaritama on April 07, 2009
    What a fantastic ending. I was on pins and needles, pins and needles I tell you. SO MUCH GOING ON AT THE END. And oh my, a nervous and insecure Draco and the wonderfully reassuring Hermione. I think they need each other so much. I do think they'll hold strong for the next five years. I hope there's a wedding in their future - LOL

    And Ginny, well, my goodness! What will happen there???

    Now, Blaise should have a fantastic girlfriend in the future named (drum roll) Margarita, Maggie, Margaret - just take your pick. Sorry Dreamweaver! You know I love you babe.

    Can't wait for more babe...oh, do you have an LJ acct? If so, please share what it is! Email me when the new story posts at margaritama@hotmail.com or go to my live journal (see my author's page) or just drop me a line if you review my story Her Shoes.

    Hugs.
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  • From shelagh on April 06, 2009
    Great Story! I can't wait for the next one.
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  • From sincollins on April 06, 2009
    this story was.... umm.... well... nothing seems to fit what the story is. brilliant and amazing come to mind, but doesnt quite do it justice. i've read too many hp fanfics to count and this is in my top 5... ok, ok.. top 3!! the way you were able to change the characters yet keep them the same (make sense?? lol) took skill..lol. it was nice to see; pansy as more than a vindictive bitch, draco sporting more than a sneer (but still being his snarky self), ron NOT being a total baby, jerk, idiot(...i could go on, but i wont), harry being the idiot sometimes (hate it when authors make him ALWAYS right and the goody goody lol). i'll stop now!! your story was great, I LOVED IT! cant wait to read the next one!
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  • From TerryMoon on April 05, 2009
    Hey There!
    I'd like to tell you how much I've enjoyed reading this story of yours. From the very beginning, its summary captivated me and the story itself made sure I became a regular reader of it. Sorry for not reviewing before and for reading in silence and not giving you my "spoken" support while you were writing it.
    I wanted you to know that in the silence, you've had a true supporter of this story and have gained a faithful reader. I can't promise you I'll review each chapter of the sequel, but I can tell you I'll do so from time to time.
    Thank you for this wonderful story. I love the personality you've given to all the Slytherins, specially Pansy's and Greg's. I found Blaise development quite believable and enthrailing.
    Seriously, I've loved reading this. Thank you for creating this wonderful story and sorry, againg, for not reviewing before.
    Read you around!
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  • From blondpierogi on April 05, 2009
    BLOODY HELL THIS STORY IS AWESOME!!! Seriously I love this story. Every chapter was written so amazingly and with soo much depth. Great JOb!!! I am sad that this part is over and now i cannot wait to read the second part, hmm i wonder whats gonna happen 5 years later. Once again GREAT JOB!!! KUDOS!!!
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  • From ANON - Anon on April 05, 2009
    First off NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO! And secondly, it's a good thing I know there's going to be a sequel. LMAO

    LOVE, LOVE, LOVE the whole deal between Luna and Gregory. I can so imagine her 'purring' his name and putting her hand on his arm to 'feel his muscles'. And poor thing, he got hit with a ton of bricks, didn't he? And dang, suddenly he's very aware of our lovely Luna. :) I loved reading his reflective thoughts and trying to work out how she managed to crashland into him and bounce off again and leave him floudering to comprehend what happened. LOL

    "I think together, we might bring you to heights you
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  • From AriesGirl on April 05, 2009
    WoW! deep dark secrets revealed by all! I had a feeling Blaise had a thing for Hermione all along, just didn't want to say so. Afraid you would have switched up the story on me there. lol

    Read the last chapter, A little confused though. Didn't know that Ginny told Harry anything. And I didn't know that Greg apologised to Luna about anything either. So Luna's quote was kinda lost on me. Did the chapter miss something in the upload? Oh well, great job this chapter was. ;-)
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