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By : HarryGinny4eva

From LadyBlueEyes on December 31, 2008
Ok its been a few chapters since i reviewed.....forgive me! This story is moving a long at a wonderful pace. I am loving the tension between the new group, the awkwardness and the attractions. I think we can all understand what Pansy is going thru, liking someone and not being sure if they like you back. Poor Greg, to have his feelings for Hermione outed like that, but better him than Malfoy at the moment.

Ron it seems has some regrets about his relationship with Hermione, she apparently does not! Ron is also a suspicious prat!

Poor Ginny, I could totally empathize with her feelings. She did everything Harry asked of her as the War was being fought, she is right that now he needs to consider her feelings, not just his own. I could only imagine the dumbfounded expression on Harry's face while she was yelling at him.

Also, I love that we got two chapters for the price of one....LOL! You've made my night!

Happy New Years!!!

Lady B*
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From trixiedust on December 31, 2008
Well, sorry to give you a poor review, but I don't think you've captured Ginny's true essence at all, and frankly her childish actions are enough to make me stop reading this fan fic.

She handled everything else gracefully, why does she now have to act like she's reverted in age? Ginny has always been underestimated by people, and I think you've done just that.
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From blondpierogi on December 30, 2008
hey! well you do deserve the Bloody Awesome!!! you are awesome!!
great job and I cannot wait to read more!
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From SilverEyedPhoenix on December 29, 2008
So I read all 15 Chapters today and am pleased to say that i love this story its very unique and stands out from all of the stories i've have read in the past. I really enjoy your method of writing and am looking forward to the following chapters! =]
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From kazfeist on December 29, 2008
Didn't realize you'd updated twice during the holidays! Just wanted to say, again, how much I love this story. I'm glad you've used Snape for Blaise. I don't think he'd be able to talk to anyone else, and Snape's got his best interests at heart, I think. Can't wait for more. :D
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From margaritama on December 26, 2008
Ok, what I think I love most about this story is how realistic it is - no really, sans epilogue, this could have been their 7th year. And I'm loving this new Draco - he's still no one to be reckoned with (a bad ass will always be a bad ass) but he's channeling himself into more positive efforts. Notice I don't say good cause I think there will always be a bit of darkness in Draco, he's been through too much in his young life. However, I think he could still lead a positive life. Sigh, cannot wait for Draco/Hermione action. And when will Ron notice the lovely Pansy?
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From margaritama on December 26, 2008
I love this story, I love how Pansy is so integral...it really adds a dimension and depth that give this fic a richness all its own. Cannot wait for D/G action - I'm sure Draco hasn't lost any hotness - yummy.
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From blondpierogi on December 26, 2008
another awesome chapter! you are brilliant!!! bloody awesome!!!
i cannot wait to see what happens next. hmm is Blaise going to attack Draco now, or what??? eeehh i am soo excited to read more!!!
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From ANON - Anon on December 23, 2008
Now to review properly without the tears to get in the way. (And I've already taken off my make up - ;) LOL) Ah so Draco found Pansy singing and humming and actually being happy. That's kind of sad that he'd be so shocked by it considering he's supposed to be spending 'the rest of his life' with her. I do like that he described her as someone worth marrying even though he didn't want it to be him. And FINALLY, they are actually talking.

Wow, she really told him what she thought, didn't she? It's like a dam has been broken and everything she's been keeping penned up for years has been released - the flood gates are open. And she's gone and said too much again, hasn't she? Well, (laughs) she did happen to slip a crucial bit of information about Hermione being SINGLE as a bonus. But oh, the poor thing. Now she's terrfied of what Hermione and Ginny will think of her after saying too much. She has really become quite close to them in such a short time and now she fears she's just thrown it all away. I'd be just as furious (within the fear) with Draco as myself for all that too.

And there he goes, sitting back and thinking it all over. Getting upset because he knows a lot of what she said is true but I also think he knows that belongs with the old Draco and he doesn't want to be that wizard any more. (LMAO on Theo coming in and his backchat comment to Draco - I was amused) I love that he stopped Pansy from storming back out (no doubt off to do some damage control) and told her how he felt too and I'm glad that both he and Pansy could believe what he said. And Theo's response to what he overheard between the two of them - perfection itself. :)

I love that you are a conduit writer - it all works for me (okay, even the times when I cry) LOL And of course, there's no need for me to tell you how much I'm looking forward to the AHEM part. LMAO More please!!!!!!
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From kazfeist on December 22, 2008
Another great chapter...and thanks for having Draco be man enough to nip Pansy's fears in the bud. Can't wait for more. :D
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From dragonsgirl on December 21, 2008
ohhhhhhh deep thought... loving that Pansy rambled! I'm getting really into this story! I love their thoughts, they're really....real lol. And I adore Theo and Greg! never gave them a second thought but I'm glad you did!
great chapter hun! keep it up!
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From ANON - Anon on December 21, 2008
I'm going to come back and do a proper review later but where was my "you may need tissues" warning, goshdarnit!!!!!!!!! Honestly I have tears pouring down my face and now I've got to go redo my make-up before I look more like a panda than I usually do. That was just so touching! (sob)!
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From blondpierogi on December 19, 2008
I must say this story ROCKS!!!
Great job! you are an awesome writer and your stroies are the best!!!! I enjoyed reading your other story and I cannot wait to read more of this one!!!!
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From ANON - Anon on December 18, 2008
Arrg, get with the program, Blaise, you're going to get left behind. Actually I'm hoping the therapy session does him a lot of good and I'm thinking that's when he'll get everything off his chest and sort himself out. (well that's what I'm hoping - LOL) And at least he's willing to sort things out with Pansy although I'm not sure on what level - but hey, he is thinking about what she said to him while trying not to at the same time. LOL Loved his reaction to seeing her, Ginny and Harry all getting along. Aww, she's not a traitor. But it's good he's questioning himself, I love seeing that.

LMAO and OMG I love you right now for getting Theo and Parvati flirting and Luna, LMAO - the way she 'helped' them along. And Draco backing Luna up - I could see how Parvati would be stunned - sure you move on but you take a part of the past with you wherever you go. Oh poor Bliase, I almost feel sorry for him. LOL Trust Luna to come out with a comment like that and hee hee there Theo goes flirting again. Oh my, they're all growing up. (sniffs back a tear). Loved Theo's theory on why some of them have adjusted better - quite the smartie, eh? Draco seems impressed by him. Theo seems quite good at finishing other people's sentences for them too. LOL Loved the last line about no matter what, he and Blaise were friends and that he was happy about that.

Just want to say that I've nearly fallen off my chair laughing at every little italicised thought. :)

Aww, love the insight we are getting in to Pansy's character. All those questions she had for Tonks, I bet she's been bursting to ask for years but was too afraid to. And to get someone she obviously admires as well, that was well done. Hmm, is there a significance as to who's in the Slythering common room as she's musing along to herself, I wonder. Here's hoping she gets the 'freedom' she's been looking for and that she finds Draco a witch that he'd much rather be with and stand up to his mother and their traditions for, hey? LOL ;) Oh, and I think Bliase needs a good witch to help him overcome his troubles too. I'm happy to volunteer. :)

Hmmm, no reactions on the makeover on purpose, hey? Very interesting. LOL But of course, you give me practical reasons why. LOL I'm going to pretend that deep down it registered with all of them. ;) LOL And hmmm, innocent Draco and innocent???? Hermione - that makes for fun times. Ah, it was such a long time ago for me that a simple kiss could mean so much. Ug, feels old and jaded now.

Hehe, no worries, Luscious isn't going anywhere. ;)

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From Jullsy on December 18, 2008
It was a nice long chapter, but Draco and Hermione didn't speak to each other. It's funny that Blaize suspects Draco about Hermione.
I have the impresion that Blaize will do something stupid and vile.
I liked a lot the last part of the chapter with Pansy thinking how to break up with Draco. Will she find the solution alone?
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