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By : HarryGinny4eva

From AriesGirl on March 29, 2009
Horseback riding! Your killing me! All my theory-izing, All of it, Ka put! Damn maybe the next story I'll get something right? lol

This chapter I could tell you got totally into. Fidallis practice. That is what it took for these students to come out with their one true deep down secret. Cool. So, whos got the bun in the oven? Milly or Ginny? Wouldn't put it past Milly, questain now is will she tell the father, or are you going to save that for the next story? Make it a good scene, full of drama,
Harry, your going to be a father, I'm pregnant. Harry's face went whiter than the first snow. Harry, did you hear me? Ginny snaps her fingers in front of Harry's face and he blinks rapidly. Excuse me, do I know you? (Harry has lost his memory. lol!)

Wow what a way to end a chapter. I think I'm preganant, Nargles are real! You know how wonderful you are, right? Or do I have to remind you another half a million more times?

Right now, I need bed, it's late. See ya on the flip side of the moon!
Patty

Just noticed the security words, want a laugh? their WIENER Fitts LOL! For Real!
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From kazfeist on March 29, 2009
I really liked the last chapter. I particularly enjoyed trying to match the secrets with the speakers. The way you've drawn all your characters is so realistic and vivid. I am sorry this story is almost at an end, though. :(
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From SilverEyedPhoenix on March 29, 2009
lol love the last secret

"Nargles are real" lol

great chapter
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From dragongirl on March 29, 2009
This cliffhanger was simply evil............... LOL Too much going on and I hope that you already started the sequel of this... Keep them coming ....
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From marieriddle20 on March 29, 2009
who thinks there pregnant?...looks like there might be hope for harrp/draco to get along....loved chap...cant wait for more...
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From ANON - Anon on March 28, 2009
Finally, some time to myself. LOL What an interesting 'deep and meaningful' conversation Hermione and Draco had. Trying to sus out what the other wanted while still being true to themselves and what they think they might want out of life. At least they knew not to rush into anything. You can't just take it back once those kiddies come along (not without a lot of emotional damage at any rate). And it's obvious that Draco HAS been thinking about it and wondering what kind of a father he would be despite the rather dubious role model he had.

Love the banter they share and how Hermione makes a joke of everything everytime Draco is semi-serious. A defence mechanaism perhaps? Or she is really getting good at teasing him. LOL And I think I would be entranced by Draco's husky voice too.

Their first time was perfect as one would it expect it to be, no screaming down the walls in an OMG orgasm, just a pleasant experience with a promise of more to come. I'm sure there's only a lucky few that get it right the first time. It was very tender and honest which is probably what I liked the most. That and Draco's promise to do better next time. ;) LMAO

LMAO I am sure you'd be a welcome participant in the Slytherin Groupie Club. ;) Agreed, I can see Blaise having to struggle with the whole idea of girls' issues too but he has Margaritama and I to help him out as soon as we have our little wrestle. Hope she knows a good bubblehead charm. LOL I think they should all (our favourite Slytherin boys) come down and watch the show - mud and all. LMAO Yes, love Ron in this story and I'm glad you liked my silly joke too. LOL

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From marieriddle20 on March 27, 2009
i loved that scene...about time they had some 'fun'....cant wait for an update!
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From kazfeist on March 27, 2009
Well, that was as sweet a 'first time' scene as I've read. Realistic and romantic at the same time. Well done! ;D
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From LadyBlueEyes on March 26, 2009
Well, that was a perfect way to lose one's virginity. The conversation about marriage and kids was confusing and heartfelt at the same time. After all at 18 do any of us truly know what we want? In the end they both said the same thing, yes but not right now. (Even if Draco kind of rambled on, he won't let her go so of course he wants marriage and kids eventually, he just hasn't officially excepted it yet!)

Their coming together was awkward and sweet, the way a first time should be. Each partner struggles to learn exactly what works for the other and Hermione is right, a girl doesn't always orgasm on her first time anyway. There is no doubt in my mind that Draco will make it up to her many many times.

Loved the whole chapter, thought it was more about hope than anything....the hope that what they have is strong enough to see them through whatever else life throws at them, the hope that they'll make it together (though neither ever actually voices that or even thinks it - i feel its more of an understated thing!) LOL honestly just another in a long line of brilliantly written chapters by you. You are definitely a master of subtlety when it comes to writing! =)

Love and Hugs!
Lady B*
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From SilverEyedPhoenix on March 26, 2009
yay!!! the deed is done lol! I love that you didnt over do it, it was perfect and left me wanting more!! ^_^ great chapter
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From AriesGirl on March 25, 2009
Very intimate moment, I was going awwww. and then I went oh! and then I went WHAT?!!! Hermione wasn't a virgin after-all? I am sitting here wondering who did the deed, and could recall only two moments, when it could have happened make that a possible three. Krum, could-a done it, Lockhart could-a done it, Hell, he coulda done half the school, he was an expert with memory charms and Hermione did think he was pretty wonderful... Then there was Malfoy manor when she was being tortured, Lucius could-a went for the forbidden fruit. That would kill Draco. I'll take "the Lockhart did it" vote! Hope it's part of the story now. lol (or I just read into your story on a new level you hadn't thought of. Hemmmmmmmmm....)I do do that quite often, drives writers insane! By the way, did I say wonderful chapter? Still think it is cute the way the guys are the ones having the questains about futures, marriage and children. The girls all seem to want to wait, but would consider it in the future. lol That was great! ( did I ever tell you that when I was dateing my future husband, that he told me three months into the relationship that"He was going to marry me someday?" Unbelievable relationship we had. Tons of drama! You would love it. Did I mention this was a great chapter? (It's a great chapter!) Ta Ta .
P.S. Yes, I did send Tom Felton the link to your story. And you should give Twitter a go, there are a ton of authors, writers and publishing houses there. You really should talk to the pro's, Ask questains. You my dear, need to be published in print. There is your advice for the day. ;-)
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From blondpierogi on March 25, 2009
Hey another Bloody Awesome chapter!!! Great job on it. I cannot wait to read more!!1
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From margaritama on March 25, 2009
BRAVO - a realistic and honest first time. Thank you for keeping it real sweetie. Oh Draco, work up that stamina for goodness sakes! I agree about earning that title LOL

Nuff said...no great big insightful review I'm afraid as I really just liked the realism of this chapter. And Draco looking sheepish was too funny.

PS: are you on LJ
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From dragongirl on March 25, 2009
This was as I expected spectacular... Love it... Bravo... LOL
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From margaritama on March 25, 2009
Theo is such a little hothead with his emotions. He's usually the calm, collected one but Vati seems to make him lose all his control. How sweet! And they have each other and their friends to support their decision. The Nott curse was a hilarious add on by the way.

Ron and Pansy are so cute - and she's so honest in her feelings. I hope Ron understands and sees that. I'm rather proud of your Ron - he's not a prat. I couldn't believe he actually said that to Draco.

I really liked this chapter - Blaise in particular is just fascinating. He's like the lone wolf of the pack, sitting by the sidelines watching, learning and interjecting when necessary. He's part of the group yet apart. Good to know he feels. And yes, I would gladly challenge Dreamweaver to a mud wrestling contest for Blaise - of course he's have to be there to watch! LOL Bring it on! :-)
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