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By : HarryGinny4eva

From marieriddle20 on March 16, 2009
good chap...i loved the ginny/harry and draco/hermione.....lol to the mil in a bunch of dress poor boy.....im reading deathly hallows again now so it fits so perfectly with you bring up the albus didnt give them enough to go on....cant wait for more
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From ANON - Anon on March 16, 2009
Have finished celebrating now. LOL Poor Greg, no idea what he was in for when Millie asked him his opinion of dresses, did he? Thank goodness Pansy came along and saved the day. It is sad though, that he is only with her to be with someone, not because he really cares for her in that way. That's not fair on either of them.

I wonder if Mr Patil knew how much he helped rather than hindered the people around him when he carried on the way he did. To be compared to Lucius Malfoy that way, which would have cut deeper than anything else, I am sure must have really sat him back on his arse. As for everyone else, for Draco to speak his mind like that, what a shocker and for a moment there, I really thought Blaise was going to get up and say something too. He's gone rather reflective, hasn't he? Finally clued himself in to what was going on around him. I like that he is trying so much harder now to be civil around Hermione, I think by doing that he will get included in a lot more things now and that will only help him further.

Love how Hermione is really getting into her flirty side and I guess having a wizard who treats her like a woman and not one of the guys has helped by a long shot. Damn, 59 minutes in their time is going to be a heck of a lot longer, isn't it? LMAO

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From kazfeist on March 16, 2009
Wonderful update! Finally Dumbles mans up and apologizes. Well done! Now, on to the ball. Can't wait to see all the pretty frocks; and I expect some hottt lovin' for our couples after the dance, eh? :D
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From AriesGirl on March 15, 2009
Wonderful! Same dress, just different colors, That made me burst out laughing. 25 dresses? Poor Greg, So have you come up with the right girl for him yet? Will we meet her soon?
The girl that blasted into Blaise last chapter sounds good.
Glad to see Blaise thinking things thru now.
So... Harry & Ginny now?... Nice spell.
Draco & Hermione, Savoring the wait dear.
So... Have you thought about maybe writeing for Playboy, Hustler, JUGGS?
Youv'e got the talent.
I had my husband read this chapter. I asked him what he thought of it? He said to me, "I'm going to go take a shower."
And he did too.
Another excellent, Bravo chapter, "Hands Down."
see ya wednesday

P.S.
Bonnie is a nice girl. Just got rid of a Bonnie Write wannabe for her. And a Tom Felton Wannabe too. That was fun. Ever want to get rid of a wannabe, throw legal mumbo jumbo at them and they run! I copy and pasted the whole conversation with the Tom wannabe onto a WORD document if ya want to check out my work sometime. lol They have dubbed me "the Terminater" It was really funny, as I was having it out with him, I had others cheering me on! "You go girl! Rip his face off! Get that sob! You would have loved it. In the end, he deleted out his account. The Bonnie one, I just told her that Bonnie is upset with her using copy writed pictures and using her name. Then I sent her the twitter rules about pretenders. She's gone...

Catch ya later!

Pat
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From blondpierogi on March 15, 2009
Hi! I havnt commented in a while. sorry for my delays on the BLOODY AWESOMES and KUDOS!!!! I just got done with a week of midterms, 6 in all and 2 papers and work.. i was soo busy. but now im on spring break and I get to catch up on all the lovely chapters that i missed. WOW this story gets better and better with each chapter. You are an awesome writer and your stories rock!!!! keep up the wonderful work! I cannot wait to read more. love yah!!! :-)
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From dragongirl on March 15, 2009
This Dumbledore apologies are a strike of genius, this were abslutly needed on the Epiloge the DH..... Keep them coming..
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From SilverEyedPhoenix on March 15, 2009
Hey Great chapter btw! ^_^ I thought it was neat who instead of hermione being all mushy and stuff when Dumbledore apologized she got angry heh

oh and i found a mistake well im pretty positive its a mistake, but just thought i'd let you know.

"And, Theo and Pansy had all kinds of shared jokes between them"

isn't it suppose to be parvati ??

n way looking forward to wednesday ^_^
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From ANON - Anon on March 15, 2009
I shall respond, hon, just as soon as I sober up from celebrating my girlfriends' birthday with a few drinkies afternoon. LMAO Not to mention so I can actually understand what I'm reading. LOL
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From margaritama on March 14, 2009
I love how you focused on Draco and Harry in this - they each won a prize in this one. Draco won Hermione outside and Harry won Snape, in a way. Okay not quite the same - LOL.

Hot damn that outside lite smutness was so deliciously decadent. I think you captured two exploring young adults so well. Their movements, reactions and eagerness was clear from the carefully chosen words. I think I'll have to go back and re-read it.

You have the best school ideas, I really liked the classroom scene - how fun and challenging. And to think that Harry saved the "day." Poor Draco was so damn annoyed by the Boy Who Lived to Piss Him Off. Then he had to go and deal with him when visiting Tonks. Of course, leave it to her to make things clear to all the male dunderheads: they are all family. Teddy loves both of those boys so they better get their act together or she will beat them senseless. I gave Remus a few points for being kind to Draco, who needs it by the way. He not only craves the closeness and support that comes from family (oh he may have acted begrudgingly about going but he secretly wanted to see the Lupins) but he needs it. Now that he's on this path with only himself to guide him, as I pointed out in another review, he needs beacons to keep him grounded. Hermione can only offer so much, having a strong and supportive role model is important.

I think that this is interesting: Harry and Draco are connected and might become close because of the Lupins, Remus will eventually warm up to Draco and try to help him more, Draco and Snape are close because of the nature of their relationship - Snape loves that boy, Draco will be a connection between Snape and Remus - they will both care for him. So perfect, eventually.

Sigh -- again the scene between Hermione and Draco was HOT HOT HOT.
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From ANON - Anon on March 12, 2009
I must say, I don't think this happened too quickly. We're in the 38th chapter for Merlin's sake. LOL ;) And they have a long history together where the sparks always flew between them even if they didn't know why and yes, at that age, when you're in the fresh throes of passion, even a week feels like forever so in my opinion, you have nothing to apologise for. :) Not that I think less of anyone who wanted a lot more tension to build between the two.

For someone who had admitted he isn't 'that' experienced - DAMN!!!! LOL Insert my usual mantra here. ;) I think your descriptions of Hermione's first real 'heavy' session were perfect. It's so hard to describe what you're feeling and why parts of your body are reacting the way they do or why it is you know that you have to have more and Hermione, more than most, would have trouble letting go and just 'feeling' rather than trying to think about what as happening between them. I love the glimpse into Draco's head and know he was nervous too because he wanted her to think he was 'beautiful' as well.

I can't speak for Draco, of course, but imagining a sexy Snape naked wouldn't help me at all. LMAO Hermione's first time of seeing hard male flesh, perfectly described too and I love that she wasn't afraid to touch him, in awe, yes, but wanting to give him the same pleasure he had given her - perfect. And I'm p-ing myself laughing at her teasing him and not saying I love you back to him - gotta love that girl. LMAO

How could they not fear a pop quiz?? It's been years since I was at school and still the thought of it - yeesh!! Hmmm is Peyton going to get a good talking to now? (lucky witch) LOL Poor Neville, I so wanted him to be braver but I know how Snape effects him so. But what a reaction, sending that spell his way and having Harry protect him. I don't know who was the more shocked. And it brought about the kind of attention that Harry hates. I wonder how Snape feels about it all.

The whole visiting with Remus, Tonks and Teddy - LOVED IT. From her sticking it to all the men, Harry and Draco's truce even if they weren't sure what to do about it to Teddy falling asleep on Draco. Made me think of the time in that other chapter when Draco was thinking to himself that if Teddy liked him the he must be a good person because kids were in tune to things like that. In all a very big AWWWWWWWWWWWWW moment. Oh and the joking about Tonk's hair colours - PRICELESS!!!

Oh you so don't want to see a picture of me with a "Joker" like grin on my face. LMAO I don't see Luna as Looney either. She's in Ravenclaw for a reason, after all. And of course this story is very 'serious stuff' (addictive) to me. I can't see Remus and Severus being good friends any more than I can really see Harry and Draco being life long pals but I can imagine all four of them reaching a point where they could respect one another. No Aussie reference with the 'Beans and Quirke', I just found that funny.

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From kazfeist on March 12, 2009
Loved the most recent chapter. My favorite scene was Teddy asleep on Draco's chest. A child can break down so many barriers by their insistent innocent love, can't they? Liked how you're making Harry get closer and closer to Snape and Dumbledore. I think they will still need to have an actual confrontation...particularly between Dumbledore and Harry. He's right, he's done too much to him. Loved the level of intimacy between Draco and Hermione. I didn't think it was too quick in coming, nor did I mind how the declarations were made. Inventive, I thought. Looking forward to enjoying more in the coming days. I thought I saw a typo, but now I forget where it was. Email me if you want. Kazfeist at gmail dot com. :D
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From Quiranna on March 12, 2009
the smut was puuuurrrrfect! Lol. And yes, I do agree with you. I just feel so bad for him, because he's all alone with no one who seems to understand. I've never understood people who cannot separate their opinions and just listen to someone. You don't have to agree, just do what a friend does and be their as sounding bored. Sometimes thats all someone needs. But I suppose not everyone can be a natural counselor...Oh, well. I'm so glad to see Mione and Draco so happy. I loved what happened with Snape and them what happened with the men later. More, you're doing fabulosa!
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From AriesGirl on March 11, 2009
Yeah, I immagine you most likely lost that review I had given you. Thaough I think I recomended another site to place it on. cant remember if it was checkmated or wizardtales?

What can I say about this chapter? Holey canoli Batman!

WoW! Definately a stickey fingered situation ma dear.

The woman can really write a good porn script!

Wish I were there.... lol

what other sentences decribe a good @$#%

No matter, this was great!

You are talented and you kept true and kept it real

Bravo Baby!

Patty
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From AriesGirl on March 11, 2009
Now that part of the story makes more sence to me, I thought it was missing something! Ta da! Yeah! it's me! Aries Girl 40 Though since I became famous in the Twitter & fan fiction world as of late I can't use the 40 at the moment, Google my handle and you'll get a laugh. I twittered Tom Felton and he answered me. Everyone thought for sure he knew me personally, and I got loaded down with messages and questains to ask him. it got real strange there for awhile, then Bonnie Wright contacted me! so now I have her as a follower and we twitter back and forth, sweet girl. Thru it all I've read every chapter. I'm ready with 1-2 I'm waiting for quey to go down a little. it was up to 11 days! if your on twitter look me up! I'm under my HPFF name with the 40. Okay? Now I am going to rate the last chapter and stop back for the rest that I missed on HPFF, I hate to use the review space there yet.

Patty
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From marieriddle20 on March 11, 2009
loved the draco/hermione scene

omg snape just gave harry potter 10 pts!!!!!!

im glad that there might be a possibility of an almost friendship for draco and harry...tonks is right the 3 of them need to grow up, their all aduats now

that was the cutest thing with the kid laying on draco...aww....

i agree with you on the whole when your 17/18...months feel like forever...i would know seeing how i am at that stage, well just leaving it cause im turning 19 on the 20th....

amazing chap as i expected it would be
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