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By : HarryGinny4eva

From SilverEyedPhoenix on February 25, 2009
i LOVED this chapter it was amazing!!! ^_^ well worth the wait =]. Im guessing Harry pulled Draco away from Hermione and theres going to be a bit of explaining to do.

Cant wait till Sunday!!! ^_^
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From revampedfallenangel on February 24, 2009
stories still great as always, don't worry i don't mind if you don't answer my reviews just so long as you keep writing the story :)
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From LadyBlueEyes on February 23, 2009
HG4eva....

brilliantly written!! I really am enjoying this story! Hermione's B-day was a wonderful, eventful day! I wish someone would plan something like that for me!! =)

Pansy got her man!!!!! YAY..i was starting to feel so bad for her, she's been trying so hard to be herself and others have been giving her a hard time. I love that Molly apologized to her, and I was proud that she stood up for herself! And it was about tiem Ron opened his eyes! Ugh...Lavender....thats all I have to say about that...LOL.

Hermione and Draco being awkward together at the table is great! I am eagerly anticipating their first kiss.....and the fianl acceptance of each other as boyfriend/girlfriend.

Theo and Parvati...their discussion in this last chapter shows a wonderful maturity. Parvati is a smart young woman, who sees the whole picture and understands that their are some people who will never change no matter what. I love them as a couple but never would have that to put them together on my own. Kudos to you for thinking of it!!

Ok....I try not to beg for more...but i am going to...LOL More please????

hugs
lady b*
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From ANON - Anon on February 23, 2009
Happy Belated birthday, I was so busy catching up on reviewing that I only just realised that I didn't even put anything in. I'm so sorry. I do hope that you had a truly wonderful day and were suitably spoiled by your loved ones. :)

Had to laugh at Luna's surmising of Hermione's character and being out of place around men in general let alone Draco. You think she'd be better able to deal with them after hanging around Harry and Ron all those years even if it took them a while to realise she was a girl. LOL And oh dear, poor Pansy, having her crush surrounded by girls, it's going to be a long month being stuck at the same table, isn't it? Actually I don't think I'll call him a crush any more, I think it's more than that. LOL

Oh no, here goes Lavender trying to get her hooks into Ron again, you think she would have learned the first time. Still, she probably thinks they're the perfect couple too. Arrggg I hated Won Won in the official books, didn't I channel that into Lavender already? LOL Oh what a timely interruption by Pansy indeed and Ron seems more than a little grateful don't you think? Hee hee. Hey, he did notice her all this time - woo hoo! LOL I think it's cool to that Draco is growing on him and it's only his loyalities that are stopping him from becoming his friend which is pretty funny considering the four of them are practically swapping partners. LMAO

The conversation between Ron and Hermione about dating other people would have been interesting and rather surprising that they had that kind of a conversation at all, I'm not aware of too many ex copuples that would do that. Oh and here comes the cat fight. I'm glad Pansy didn't back down to Lavender but jeez, way too much venom, girl, even if there is a lot of history there. Like I said, I'm glad Pansy gave as good as she got. And yes, I can well imagine that being the fodder of gossip for days. And Lavender really went for the jugular too, Pansy didn't stoop to that. My estimation of her just went up a little higher. But now for the best bit this chapter had to offer...... :)

I could just hug Ron right now only I'd get in the way of a little spectacular relationship building. Finally he made up his mind to make a move and I love the dressing down he gave Lavender IN FRONT OF EVERYONE. Oh and straight away he's got his arm around her, smooth move, Weasley. LOL Ah and maintaining gaze with Draco, that was perfect. I bet a lot flashed through both wizards' eyes at that moment, a lot of understanding, gratitude, respect and admiration I should think even if they didn't understand it. Draco still had to give her an out though, didn't he? LOL And Ron would have done the same if their positions were reversed. And after that all I can say is awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww. :)

You know, I feel like Theo and Vati's confession of love was a bit of a low note after Ron and Pansy. I don't mean by how you wrote it, certainly not, just that it was almost like an anticlimax after the big fight. I love that they declared their feelings for eachother so publically and I am very impressed at the way they actually listen to one another and don't just talk at each other but yeah, I was far more excited to read about Pansy and Ron but that's probably just me and yay, I finally caught up - pheeww!!! LOVED IT ALL!!!!!!
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From marieriddle20 on February 22, 2009
what i love about this story is that it's not only a draco/hermione fic, but a draco/hermione, hp/gw, ron/pansy, patil/nott, i love it!

cant wait for more
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From ANON - Anon on February 22, 2009
I wonder why they haven't told Hermione about Blaise, I think she would have understood and that they could have trusted her with the information. Either way, I'm glad the others have talked it through and agreed to make more effort with Blaise.

LMAO - mums have their ways of finding out what they need to know, don't they? Fancy sending Tonks in so Narcissa could find out how Draco is going. I loved her explanation of what Andromeda was like and how Draco could understand why Tonks might be in awe of her mother. LOL And he's got to meet his cousin Teddy, how cute is that? DWAKE!!! LMAO - oh I can't wait to hear what the gang thinks of that! I love that Teddy jumped up and gave him a snuggle but not nearly as much as I loved Draco's realisation that perhaps he wasn't such a bad person after all. I hope Blaise isn't too upset that Draco is going to be late to meet him. And there you go, another awww moment since Draco wrote his mother a big newsy letter and finished it off with a very special 'I love you' (I'm sure he did look cute holding Teddy too.)

Hermione's turn for the big diary write up. LOL And oh, there's going to be a Halloween Ball - now I will definitely look forward to that. :) Interesting that Hermione has noticed Ron notice Pansy. Perhaps I didn't totally stuff up my guess after all????? And all those 'sighs' she wrote. LMAO Interesting that Blaise is still being a bit of a jerk, not that I expected things to change overnight just because he'd had that big blow up but I did think he'd settle down a bit more. She'd said he'd been quite reasonable so I wonder what triggered that little outburst????? LMAO at Vati and Theo (and how subtle of Greg to get them to say what they did, it might have been an out there statement but I'm sure that's how Greg intended to push them together anyway). :)

Aww poor Millie, now you've gone and made me feel sad for her too. She would never come outright and say she likes Greg, she's much too proud and I don't think Greg's likely to notice either, he does still like Hermione even if he's accepted the relationship they have. I hope the girls get together and give her a bit more of a confidence boost too, but for her own sake, not to attract male atteniton if you know what I mean. LMAO on the old musical chairs game - this will be a laugh. And LMAO again for Millie yelling out to pick the seventh years next. And Draco and Hermione ended up at a table together - now isn't that a surprise??? ;) LMAO

Oh gawd, Blaise and Harry together, and they won't be impressed when they see our leading pair together either. A blank look from Ron?? SO he's thinking deeply about something then. :) And wow, I was expecting Draco to say his favourite colour was blue because of Hermione's dress but the 'many shades of brown' - well it's a good thing I'm not a diabetic, that was just too sweet. LOL

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From ANON - Anon on February 22, 2009
Aww poor Pansy having to watch her crush dancing with someone else, my heart aches for her. I can understand how she'd think the bubbly might help but in the long run, it won't, it's just a temporary fix (and I use the term 'fix' loosely). Having said that, I know a lot of people think Ron can be thick and unobservant but I dunno, I reckon he's noticed Pansy looking at him by now, could be a bad guess on my part, of course. LOL I'm good at seeing things that aren't there. LMAO And aww there's Draco coming to her rescue, that's so sweet. I like that he still cares for her and feels free to show her a better friendship now than what they had before. Oh no, what's Molly going to do!!!!!

LOL Well mother hen came to the fore there, didn't it but I don't blame Draco for being wary after the previous outburst. But she's apologised for it, I thought she would, she acts first and thinks second and even though that's wrong, I can see why she'd be that way. It takes a big person to admit they're wrong about something so I'm glad she had the courage to tell Pansy that. Poor Pansy, she must be so confused, being attacked one minute and being cared for the next. I actually think Molly would be quite happy if they got together. And I loved that she helped Pansy with her make-up and tell her if anything happened between Pansy and Ron then they'd be happy about it. Not sure that Ron is always a good judge of character though but he's grown up a bit so perhaps he's learned to tell the difference a little better. :)
No surprise that Draco was waiting outside to make sure things were okay but what a laugh that Molly is 'continuing surveillance'. LMAO

Can't wait to hear Pansy and Hermione's conversation about the day and I laughed at the thought of Pansy rushing away to write it down in her diary - ah I remember those days well. LOL OMG Draco and that bewitched rose making its way to Hermione - now that's a perfect ending for the day and damn isn't that Theo an observant buggar. LOL That was very sweet - pity Draco ran away before she could say thank you!!!!

NOw I know I say 'I love this bit' a lot (because it's true) but wow, this whole part on Blaise just blew me away. He so needed to do that, just let his frustrations out and and let it rip and yet he still had the control and foresight to take it out on inanimate objects, he didn't hurt anyone in the process and then for Ginny to come in and take over and let him know that she'd take care of things, well that spoke volumes to me so I hope that it spoke volumes to Blaise too. And you made me cry again!!!!!! Arrrrrrrrrrgggggggggggggggggg!!!!!! I'd be quite happy to hold him close and let him get those tears out and thank goodness he read in Ginny's eyes what she was trying to convey. And he knows Pansy's right there for him too now. I don't think he realised that they were still there for him, not that they really knew how to show it either.

And there goes Ginny again being peacemaker - when did she get to be this good? I imagine her to be more like Molly I guess and always be at war with her brothers, being the youngest and only sister, she'd have to be able to fight for herself. Guess she's more like her dad, he always seemed to see both sides of the story. Had to laugh when she compared Draco to Ron, smiling through tears must be a really good look, eh? LOL Of course, Molly would have passed on the mother hen bit and taking care of people when they need her, I can see that too. Now I have to find tissues - you owe me a box of them by now. LOL ;)

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From blondpierogi on February 22, 2009
awwies great chapter!!! yay Pansy and Ron are finally together and Vati nd Theo finally told each other how they felll... Great chapter like always!!
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From dragongirl on February 22, 2009
Nice move from Ron....
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From kazfeist on February 22, 2009
Loved Ron standing up for Pansy. Very nicely done! :D
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From SilverEyedPhoenix on February 22, 2009
yay for Pansy and Ron!! ^_^

great chapter as always
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From Jullsy on February 21, 2009
He excused himself and they talked a little bit finally :). He was so sweet.
Sex doesn't always mean romantic, but I have a lot of hopes for their first kiss... Your story is the light in my busy days with the moving. hugs
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From kazfeist on February 20, 2009
Another great chapter. Loved Draco's favorite color, and his apology was super. As was the vignette with Teddy. I'm so glad the Lupins have lived in your story. Can't wait for more. :D
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From QueenofPutrescense on February 19, 2009
A quick note this time, because I'm really trying not to go to bed so late... I love that you brought in Teddy the way you did. Watching people around kids can be a very interesting way to get a sense of who they are and I loved Draco's inner reaction. Sending lots of smiles your way, as always. :)
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