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Reviews for The Children of Atum

By : ajgordon
  • From blackcub on May 29, 2009
    You actually have some of the written stories out there even w/out a beta while still being compared to those stories. I love this story and would be honored to beta for you. My email is candymlb@hotmail.com.
    Mariah
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  • From draechaeli on May 29, 2009
    This is really well written, I am also happy to see that your BDSM facts are good. I cannot wait to read more.
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  • From Juana13 on May 29, 2009
    loved this! And i'm glad that sev informed harry and all that. its good that harry now understands everything before being thrown in head first into something he'd be unsure about. its bad enough that he's cursed.
    love this and hope to see the next chapter soon : )
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  • From CassandraMalfoy on May 29, 2009
    This is an awesome update! :)
    I can't wait to see what happens next. >;D
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  • From ladyedgecombe on May 29, 2009
    I just love the sev/harry realationship. You do well with it and I didn't find too many errors. I would be happy to beta for you if you wish. I don't have any stories that you can read, but I always did well in creative writing. Let me know if no one else wants to help. I can be reached at Yahoo with the same name. So what is Harry going to do during the summer?
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  • From Elphaba on May 29, 2009
    Great Job! Loved it. I will email you about being a beta on the previous chapters. :D
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  • From wolfcathope on May 29, 2009
    Really love this story but is it right that Harry enters this relationship without Sev knowing about what he is? Also what of Harry's gardians (who he also has a sexual relation with) shouldn't they be told at least? I think Sev would be very good for Harry and even if he shares sometimes I can see him giving him the same cleaning afterwards and reclaiming him. I think Sev will want to thank Lucius for Draco and helping with Harry. Harry wiht his special case can also help other male couples have kids. Like Sirus and Remus. Sev and Him. Even Lord Voldemort but I don't see Harry being one of Tom lowly workers or even allowing him to mark him as such. Maybe mark him as a equal or heir.
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  • From knj4k4 on May 29, 2009
    I'm sorry but review upset you. I don't think i explained myself well. I was upset at his fear and lack of understanding. I love BDSM, and I was afraid that this was going to end up being a perversion. Your explanations however eased my mind. I was afraid that if would be about pain and power without care, instead of the deep emotions of love, desire, control, and submission by choice it requires. I was afraid that Harry would end up submitting without fully understanding what was happening and that Severus wouldn't truly care about his pet. I'm glad you explained it and that I can be sure he isn't being abused. Anyway...sorry I upset you. good chapter.
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  • From Juana13 on May 28, 2009
    BLOODY FUCKIN FANTASTIC!!!!!!!!!!! AND YUMMY!!!!!!!
    wow, that was intense... and i really should get some of that potion stuff..... haahahhahaha!
    looking forward to the next chapter!!! hope theres more snarry sex!!!
    update again soon please!! : )
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  • From wolfcathope on May 28, 2009
    Wow wonderful so he is Severus's will Sev have others particpat in there relation and when is he going to find out what harry is?
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  • From blackcub on May 27, 2009
    Loved the new chapter :) hugs for the amazingness dank you more please!
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  • From Seraphiccandy on May 27, 2009
    Oh and I'm seeing a vibrating butplug in the future and maybe a kitty tail but plug? Pleaseeee? ^_^ Oh and you could have Sev mark him with a tatoo of a snake that moves and does interesting things to Harrys body while he is sitting in class working hard...
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  • From Seraphiccandy on May 27, 2009
    Yay!! Finally!! That was great. Would have enjoyed it even more if Sev had been more pissed off that "some student" had taken Harrys precious virginity.I mean after all those nights its just snapped away from him. I would have thought he would have gone out and discreetly cursed that fifth year into a teaspoon or something. and not even a nicely engraved teaspoon,we're talking a cheap plastic one,lol. Can't wait till Sev finds out about what Harry really is and who REALLY poped his cherry!!
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  • From Kiiyouko on May 27, 2009
    I love this story. I can't wait for the next chapter. Keep it up.
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  • From Elphaba on May 27, 2009
    That chapter made my day!
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