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By : ajgordon
  • From TobiIsMyGoodBoy on September 19, 2009
    did you mean this chapter or the next?
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  • From mrequecky on September 19, 2009
    loved!
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  • From ladyedgecombe on September 19, 2009
    Poor harry should have told him sooner before Sev discovered it for himself. He will need to punish Harry greatly for this infraction. Maybe even tie him up and not let him sleep in the bed and absolutely Harry will not be allowed to have any release for at least 24 or 48 hours while being stimulated and servicing Severus many times. You will have to decide if Harry tells him about Sirius and Remus being there first. I think this will have to be a whole new punishment or at least extend it another 24 hours. Perhaps he should have to share Harry's punishment with another older gentleman. Lucius may at least love to watch, but then he will be busy with the Dark Lord. Nice Chapter, when I saw it up I said "YES!!!"

    Thanks for writing and I hope you are able to continue this soon.
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  • From ANON - sable_silverrain on September 19, 2009
    Ah, hotness! Are YOU into BDSM?? I've been aware that I'm a sub for about a year now, and if you're into that kind of thing, you should join Fetlife and friend me! My name on there is Sablesilverrain. Interested? Oh, and also, could you add in some Luc, maybe?? *hope* He's sooo hot, and there's not as much out there with him in it as I'd like to see.
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  • From knj4k4 on September 19, 2009
    i guess i dont understand why purring is bad? is it because Harry wasn't supposed to show his other side? because i didn't think Severus knew about that. anyway..I enjoy your dom sub relationship, yes i know sometimes i get squeamish but when i reread it in the right mood its great, but Dom's are supposed to give too, its a give and take, dom's give protection and security and growthi, and subs give their body, heart, and obedience. i haven't seen Severus giving much, or do i have that wrong?
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  • From wolfcathope on September 19, 2009
    Oh I forgot will Sev ever do something to Harry, hurt him, that he will regret. In heat of the moment, when he is very angry and/or hurt scared when he relieses his true feelings.
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  • From wolfcathope on September 19, 2009
    Wow but Sev doesn't love Harry? If Harry ever found out or thought he wasn't loved by Sev, one he gave complete contral over to, he would be crushed!
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  • From julieqt2 on September 17, 2009
    enjoying this a lot. Thankyou
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  • From Hambares on September 14, 2009
    Yay! Updates!!!
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  • From Hambares on September 12, 2009
    I definately think Severus should find out about the purring soon. It needs to happen for them to continue to grow together.
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  • From paganwoman on September 12, 2009
    Welcome back!! Regarding appropriate punishment, wouldn't depriving sexual gratification be a good one? After all, his creature thrives on it and the holding back of sex would be a very painful punishment. However, severus should understand why he didn't say anything about it, it would put him in danger with Dumbledore if it got out. However, the way he handled the troll sould show that Harry has a bit of the warrior in him as well, he is not just "another pretty face". His intellegence and quick thinking shows that he is not just concubine or a pet, that he could hold his own in a fight. Maybe he's a combanation of the two? See, I have been reading more than the sex parts! LOL Anyway welcome back and happy writing!
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  • From wolfcathope on September 12, 2009
    Wow I very happy you up dated, I thought you stop writing. As for Harry's punishment I don't know one Harry risked his life again and his freedom, plus he kept something from his Master that affects them both in a way lieing to him. On the flip side he was protecting himself and doing what Remus and Sirus dirrected, will Sev find out about there relaltionship with Harry? I think if thee is a punishment then it would have to be based on the lieing and lack of trust.
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  • From wynja on September 12, 2009
    -grin- I love this story, I think it's one of the hottest out there right now... buuuut... not to be mean or anything, I just wanted to point out that Snape removes Harry's knickers twice in this story... ;o) I mena, he IS effective and everything, but that might be overdoing it...? ;o)
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  • From WolfPup5683 on September 12, 2009
    great chappy
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  • From ANON - sable_silverrain on September 12, 2009
    Oh, now THAT was hot! I think you melted my computer! Loved it!
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