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Reviews for The Children of Atum

By : ajgordon
  • From XxAntiSocial1xX on September 01, 2010
    PLEASE, Please finish this story. Omg it's abso-f***ing-brilliant (abso-brilliant??? wow weird lol)
    Anyway... I LOVE this story!

    Eagerly awaiting more!
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  • From on July 21, 2010
    This is such a great story. Porn With Plot!!! I would be nice if Voldemort comes back as his 16? year old self and has a sexual interest in Harry. Maybe some Voldemort/Severus/Harry action will come about it. And the DE sex orgies would be breathtaking. Keep up the good work.
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  • From angelicangel on July 12, 2010
    Are you going to continue this story?Plz do as it is very intereting.If you have any chapters but do not want to post it up,can you send it to me?I don't mind if it is unbeta
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  • From jgoodman on June 18, 2010
    love this story, please update
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  • From Dhalim on May 13, 2010
    My opinion as to why Quirrelmort went after the stone is that each horcrux is like a separate person once it is made. Since Quirrelmort is still alive, he would have no interest in activating a horcrux when he could use a stone to bring himself back to life. I would imagine that contrary to ff belief, the horcrux could not merge with the original soul, so it would be like voldemort was competing with another dark lord, even though it would be technically himself
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  • From ANON - Anon on March 23, 2010
    OMG I hope you update I Love it!!!
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  • From AradiaSnape on February 12, 2010
    Excellent story so far, I can't wait to read more!
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  • From CrazyWriter on January 26, 2010
    This is an amazing story. I love the way you write.
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  • From twistaddicted on October 09, 2009
    Hope you don't mind an on-the-fly beta again, but the word 'stationary' means standing still, the word for the paper one writes on is 'stationery'.
    Also, here:
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  • From twistaddicted on October 09, 2009
    Just a little typo, but mildy annoying - it is Privet Drive, not Private Drive. A Dark Lord who is not evil but kills - or tries to kill - babies? That is rather a difficult idea to make remotely believable. LOL
    However lack of conviction aside, I intend to keep reading, so you must be doing something, or some things, right!
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  • From RyaResshi on September 28, 2009
    Will there be more? Soon?
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  • From BlueTribalRose on September 27, 2009
    I do love this story and can not wait for the next installment.
    Keep up the good work hun you are doing a great job.
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  • From BlueTribalRose on September 27, 2009
    You said you wanted mistakes brought to your attention for chapter 18

    I copied the whole section so you can read the first section

    that says he removed the underwear completed but then in the next section its back on for a few setions until its removed again....

    He pulled the underwear down the rest of the way, letting it fall to the floor before helping her up to sit on his lap, legs on either side of his facing towards him, her back resting on the edge of the desk.

    Severus took in the tear streaked face and gently wiped away the tears before reaching around to pick up the lollypop. He lifted it to her mouth and ran it over a pink swollen lip, she tentatively opened her mouth to accept the treat and he pushed it in slowly, running it over her tongue. He let his other hand wander slowly up her leg inching under the skirt to rub against the cotton covered hardness.

    Harry moaned lifting his body to press into the Potions Master
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  • From RyaResshi on September 20, 2009
    I really never know what to say in reviews, but I really like this story, most stories I wait until they're completed to even look at, but this one is really good. When is Severus going to find out about Harry? Soon? Please?
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  • From ANON - sable_silverrain on September 20, 2009
    Also, don't know if I already asked this, but do we finally get to have Sev find out about Harry's little... Issue??

    And also, would it be okay if I referenced the Mas-Bastet in Further Trouble with Mates? I don't want to use it for a character, but I would like to mention it, if I end up writing the scene I'm contemplating.
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