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By : soldiersgirl0709

From ANON - Tara on August 20, 2009
Paging Dr. Severus Snape..... So now we know why you skipped the hospital! You had Dr. Snape taking care of you. You naughty thing you!! I'm glad to hear you are doing better! :)
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From LadyofClunn on August 20, 2009
Now I am feeling all warm and fuzzy.

*sigh*

I love how Molly is so very righteous. They are going public about their relationship at some point, right? THAT will be a popcorn moment, I am sure.

You captured how he cares for her beautifully. Most men would run and call her mother to come over. Or his mother. Or any other female that might be willing to nurse her back to health, and then run as fast as possible.

I gather that Ginny is also no fool? Soon all the Weasleys are going to catch on... Oh my.

Wonderful chapter!
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From ANON - Aundree'a on August 20, 2009
Im completely out of my Twilight faze. After the movie came out I saw it a million times, and I slowly began to hate the series. Don't even get me started on the last book lol. Although seeing the trailer for New Moon has me a little excited! A lot of my friends love Edward the character, but hate Pattinson. IMO, he's rather cute... but True Blood? OMG. Eric is absolutely gorgeous, and this past episode just about ripped my heart out!
Anyway, this chapter just made me sigh... I know I want a man like that to take care of me when im down for the count. Severus can be very loving and caring. I can't wait to read more!!
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From ANON - Mmajere on August 20, 2009
Lovely way the story has shifted to a tender moment
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From BillsBedroom on August 20, 2009
I reread my review, and the statement about light and fluffy, it should have read " it isn't THE typical story. Sorry, it made me feel like I was bashing your stories. NEVER !!!! I meant stories in general !!!! To much caffeine today, and I was going off on the people who aren't crazy about this story.
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From MariaTeresaQuintanar on August 20, 2009
That was great. I loved your slice of domestic Snape. Excellent writing as per usual. Sorry for not reviewing as I should. I promise to be better! Thanks again for the wonderful writing and please by all means update soon!
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From ANON - Anon on August 20, 2009
In response to bad reviews: This story is TAME compaired to many I have read before. And no, this story is not anywhere near harsher than what you have written before. To those of you who want a hardcore D/s story, try "You Can't Have One Without the Other" by RachelW on Aswinder. Although I do love this story, and was extremely excited by what you are writing about (because it's my favorite type of story, and YOU were writing it = D), it comes no where close (so far) to what takes place in RachelW's.
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From MarieLennox on August 20, 2009
OK, I love your story! It just describes the perfect relationship between Severus and Hermione. Please make your story long!!!
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From smmz79 on August 20, 2009
YAHHH what a sweet chap.. i love severus no matter how he is written... i love this fic SG and do not let anyone bother you about it you are allowed to write something different esp if you want to bc HELLLOO this is your story you are not being paid by anyone to write it a certain way.... and i love everything you do if people would think out of the box then i think they would like it too and you are right it is not that dark at all it is just not typical SG and i think that is what has everyone so weird bc they are used to the funny smutty stuff and i LOVE that too hey i always say that we have to much tragedy and all that in RL to have it in our fantasy life but you know it is good to have something a little angsty too... anyway i said ALL of that to say this... you rock love all of your stuff and you are a genius i would probably still read your stuff even if you started writing non fictional books about wars you know and i hate that stuff so see you are just awesome.. ok so on with my review of the fic.... LOVED IT how sweet is sevie pooh... molly is driving my nuts with her assumptions blah... oh and i love love love your blog keep going sister.. i am really looking forward to that remus fic i love him but i think a more aggressive remus is going to be very nice i am used to the meek and mild and woo hoo DRACO yummy
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From BillsBedroom on August 20, 2009
What a lovely chapter, the softer side of Severus. I am sooo sorry to hear that you are getting so many reviews about how people are squicked about this story. I agree with you, that he is not hurting her in any way. While this story may not be light and fluffy, it certainly isn't your typical "Lets see how much crap she can take from him, because he is a poor repressed, unloved, ex death eater who does not need or want anyone in his life" story. I have always been the type of person to not care what goes on behind other peoples bedroom door. It is frankly, none of my business. I happen to believe that people make their own choices in life, like how they respond to the requests made of them by their significant others. It is not our place to judge. I am truly fascinated by this story, and you are taking it to new heights. I appreciate how you are thinking outside of the box for this one, no one should be pigeon-holed into only one way of writing, I think that you can not grow if you do. Thank you, from an always devoted fan.
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From ANON - VoraciousReader on August 20, 2009
re: the kidney stone issue: My friend said the nurse told her to increase her water intake,to drink until she sloshed, and to add acidic foods like pickles and hot sauce to her diet. It was supposed to make her urine more acidic and help break up the stones, as well as preventing new ones. (I called her to find out what she did)She also took a tablespoonful of cider vinegar in a glass of water morning and night. Hope it helps! As for the chapter, I found Severus taking care of her to be totally in character--the man had been responsible for the safety of the wizarding world for twenty years, taking care of her is eactly what he would do.
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From ANON - trizfores on August 20, 2009
lovely chapter. not the hermione being sick part, but the part were sev takes care of her. me thinks ginny is going to suspect something soon. hehe... :)
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From ANON - shadowchsr on August 19, 2009
Hi, I'm just loving your latest Severus/Hermione story. I also love the D/s aspect of it and I feel that so far you have done your homework on the subject wonderful job portraying it. I do certainly agree that the most important part of D/s is what goes on outside of the bedroom and the true test of how things are going to work just like a non D/s relationship. if it was just about the sex no relationship would work though I personally think the darker aspects (as you called them) all the leather and chains are just fun props. if the control and submission isn't there in the mind and heart of the relationship then it's little more than a game. Of course you already know this as you are writing it so very well. The last chapter had me very much wishing I was in Hermione's shoes. The slow builds and teasing have always been my favorite part of the dynamic as well as the taking care of each other. As that slow build led to spectacular climaxes and also teaches a person to control their body a bit. I can seriously see those two working on not just responsiveness to each other but self control and such when it comes to release as well. (well Snape is already good at that but I can see him teaching hermione over time) Truly there is little more that is as intense as waiting and building to that right moment. I eagerly look forward to when Snape and Hermione reach the point he feels it's ready to take it to the next level as well as the build up along the way. It looks to be an entertaining journey and again I'm very glad that your choose to show this aspect of a D/s lifestyle.
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From LadyofClunn on August 19, 2009
Good gods.

George knows, doesn't he?

I think Severus got his point across. She just had an orgasm in front of the entire Weasley family plus Harry. There better be something good in store for her after dinner...

*turns additional fan on* Is it hot in here or what?

Great job!
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From smmz79 on August 19, 2009
wow great chap.. it seems that while severus is enjoying hermione he is also trying to chase her away bc he is scared of letting her in.... loved the beads very naughty of severus activating and playing with them at the dinner table but that is what he wanted them in for to pushe her and see if she would crumble i think part of him wants her to.... the weasleys are sooo nosy... ok so i was reading your blog and while i am sooo excited about the dramione i am also looking forward to a little werewolf action i love the way you write remus...
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