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Reviews for Delicate

By : soldiersgirl0709
  • From ANON - VoraciousReader on August 18, 2009
    They'll understand one another eventually, since such intimacies will force it on them. As it is, I fully intend to enjoy the delicious ride you have set up for us without questioning the intinerary!
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  • From bournespeed on August 18, 2009
    Brilliant chapter, evil Severus, lol..........i remember when my husband used to do amusing things like that to me, those were the days, shame he turned into a boring old fart, lol!!
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  • From BillsBedroom on August 18, 2009
    Well I totally agree with the Eric scene you are talking about. I have been a Bill fan from the beginning, but I think Eric has put a crack in it. He actually seemed somewhat human in the Sunday show. Damn!! I really wanted to hate him! As for this story, you had ME squirming in my seat as I was reading!! The power of the written word!! Waiting eagerly for the next chapter!!
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  • From KellyJCR on August 18, 2009
    I can clearly see Severus starting to soften. I have to agree with you about the idea that the sub has all the power in the relationship. You might want to clue Hermione in on that fact though. She seems oblivious to the notion that just as she gives Severus the control with her body she gives herself free reign with his emotions. That being said, the dinner scene, was that him testing Hermione? It was clear before they left that they were in agreement to keep things quiet, but that little trick at the party could have blown that plan to bits. Is this Severus starting to take a more dominante role with her? Or is he just testing the boundries before he goes further? I am loving the authenticity you give Molly. I wouldn't put it past her to be one of the parties that believe that Severus and Hermione are living in sin and debauchery. Can't wait for more as usual. Well done!!!

    I couldn't help notice that you also watch True Blood. I am convinced after this last episode that Eric Northam is related to the Malfoys. It has to be the blond hair and the smirk. HE IS GORGEOUS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From diamondhelen on August 18, 2009
    That was hot! Even more so because of the obliviousness of her friends. Severus seems to be relaxing more into their relationship too, which i like, i love the way you develop the characters in your stories.
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  • From HarryGinny4eva on August 17, 2009
    Well, that's what she gets for asking. lol Merlin, he's going to burn her up when finally lets himself go. I understand he's protecting himself, but he'd better learn to trust soon. Her normal female insecurities might come into play and then he'll have double the work to do. Sigh... Oh, and great song choice! :-)

    Thanks again! HG4eva
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  • From ANON - Rumple on August 17, 2009
    Sorry your not feeling well, hope you get better soon. Very intriguing story, trying to patiently wait for the next chapter. Its not easy LOL
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  • From ANON - Tara on August 16, 2009
    I'm sorry to hear your not feeling well. I hope you feel better soon! :) Poor Hermione so confused doesn't know what to do lol.
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  • From TriniMinx on August 16, 2009
    Not going to lie...this is just strange.

    I dunno if I want to read the rest...it's not normal you. I like you other writing better. :-/
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  • From LadyofClunn on August 16, 2009
    OH!

    At first I didn't see your A/N about the kidney stone - nasty things they are!

    Get well soon, S_G!
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  • From LadyofClunn on August 16, 2009
    *stares at screen*

    Very sexy. Very sexy, indeed.

    He really is making her wait, isn't he? Is he expecting her to back out? She's a Gryffindor, she'd never back down from a challenge like that!

    I was a bit surprised that Severus said their relationship would go as long as he wanted it - should she not know that she also has the right to end their relationship/arrangement ?
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  • From ANON - Narcissas Sister on August 16, 2009
    FIrst let me say that I hope you are feeling better. I know a few people who have delt with kidney stones and they say they are not fun. Now on to Severus, I knew he was holding back. He has learned in the past that love=loss therefore he is fighting within himself to be trusting yet protective towards Hermione in regards to himself. (Does that make any sense?) I find that interesting because with such control he is in a BDSM relationship with himself. Only rewarding himself when he finally has the breakthrough that it is okay to trust her and be vulnerable. That is quite a slippery slope he is on. Kudos to you for knowing your subject. Can't wait for more and please feel better soon. Well done!!!
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  • From on August 16, 2009
    You really made me feel for Severus in this chapter. He's so scared of letting himself be loved & loving in return! I hope Hermione doesn't become too frustrated & give up or hurt him. As always, loving the story :)
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  • From ANON - Aundree'a on August 16, 2009
    Oh no! Kidney stones! I hope you feel better soon!

    It seems like each chapter you give us just gets hotter and more steamy. When we get to the land of juciy lemons, I know you'll probably have us readers combust with all the heat!
    I honestly think the reason why severus hasn't gone further in the relationship is because he might not trust her as well... but only time will tell! Can't wait to read more!!
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 16, 2009
    ooh, I LOVE the UST!!! This is such a great story... and that part where he blindfolded Hermione in the lab... oh my. *fans self* Can't wait for the next chapter.
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