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By : soldiersgirl0709
  • From BillsBedroom on August 16, 2009
    And what a sweet goodnight it was!! I am beginning to think that you are the D in this story, controlling me in such a manner that I will wait for the next chapter, eager and frustrated as Hermione!! I love it!! Something must be wrong with me, my hubs always told me I am a twisted kind of girl =) I hope you feel better soon, kidney stones are a bitch!!
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  • From ANON - sevibaby on August 16, 2009
    I like that they are taking it slow and that it is not all about BDSM. He enjoys her mind as well as her body and I think would like a connection to both. I think that she is the one to help him get over his insercurities and the fact that for once in some way books have failed her and he is the one to correct her and help her even when its very frustrating for her. I am reading another Dom/Sub story and it is sort of along the same lines only she is still a student in her 7th year. Very A/U I think you would in enjoy it if you haven't read it already. For the Potion Masters Amusement by snape_submiss.
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  • From bournespeed on August 16, 2009
    Moving on well here, poor Hermione so frustrated, know exactly how she feels :o( Really enjoying this, even though a different take for you, as always it is very well written.

    Lu
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  • From voraciousreader on August 16, 2009
    I don't think she understands that what he wants from her is far more encompassing than mere bondage would ever be. I am absolutely enthralled. More, please, when you are ready.
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  • From BillsBedroom on August 15, 2009
    The anticipation is KILLING ME!! My GOD that was a HOT chapter. The urge to not give in, by Severus, is blowing my mind. What willpower!! I assume that it will be that much hotter when he finally does, at least if you are writing it, it will!! :>)
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  • From wudelfin on August 15, 2009
    I think this may be you best yet. The slow build up is intoxicating instead of annoying. The words chosen are very precise and the imagery draws the reader to believe the actions btw the characters. Hope to see more.
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  • From ANON - Kade on August 15, 2009
    Damn...WOW...
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  • From HarryGinny4eva on August 14, 2009
    Chapter 9 - Oh, honey, I trust you. :-) No worries. And, I loved your explanation of this type of relationship. I, like Hermione, apparently have a lot to learn. lol The basis of all of it is respect and love, which makes it beautiful in its balance. Perfectly lovely... onto chapter 10...

    Chapter 10 - That was sensuality at its best. His control (and I mean that in a good way) of himself and her is amazing to read. It's almost tantric. It makes me sad for him that he feels he must test her and prove himself to her so much. It shows how much he's been hurt, poor man. Last, I hope she gets used to that unbalanced feeling, since I think she will be feeling it often. lol

    Thanks, as always,
    HG4eva
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  • From lilashannah on August 14, 2009
    great chappy.i can understand why his is going slow.however if it driving me nuts then poor hermione must be going out of her mind.
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  • From WilliamSpike on August 14, 2009
    I really like this story. I am also reading Mad Snorkacks and Englishmen right now; it is not bad, but the discipline is harsh and violent. I much prefer this gentle, cerebral approach.
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  • From ANON - Aundree'a on August 14, 2009
    Where can I find moon orchid!! I would be totally willing to pay for that lovely... flower? Lol. I love how Severus as able to to turn it on, and then with a snap of his fingers, go back to being stern and in control, leaving Hermione confused once again. The man certainly knows what he's doing!
    But he is afraid that he will let her down? In what manner? I know he's been warding her off him, but this is something he soooo needs. Im keeping my fingers crossed for a HEA with a twist!
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  • From smmz79 on August 14, 2009
    wow what a fabulous chap... i love how you can set the chap on fire without having to have any sex in it.. well there is sex but not the conventional kind you know the whole act but you make it all sex the way severus talks and the things he says to hermione... her responses and the reaction that they get from severus... the light caresses... fab job... i think that they have what the other needs and once they get into a serious relationship i think they will be really happy... hermione needs someone to take control in all of her life she has been the one in control you know making harry and ron study always having the right answer to get them out of a sticky situation and i think severus has always needed someone to need him not for what he could do for him but just bc he is him... the only hook in this whole thing, i think anyway, is severus what happens when he realizes how much he actually needs her i think he will clam up a little bit?? anyhoo wonderful job and i do sooo love your blog i think i will really like it when you are between stories...
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  • From LadyofClunn on August 14, 2009
    Severus is keeping her on her toes! Hermione must be going insane since he always seems to do just what she doesn't expect.

    Perfect. *evil grin*

    I loved the grip-the-seat-command. I find a simple command to maintain a position on my own much harder to accomplish, since one can get easily distracted and forget about minor things like hands and such, yet such a command is so much more - I don't know whether that makes any sense at all - 'binding' than loads and loads of rope. Who has the space for fully equipped dungeons anyhow? Well. Besides people living in Manors with dungeons. Or teachers in castle boarding schools, who live in the dungeons anyhow. Never mind me, there goes the overactive imagination of mine.

    Love the story! :)
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  • From ANON - Sucker on August 14, 2009
    Dear Gods.... You are insanely good at this. I've already cracked, like, 10 times over.
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  • From ginnylovesharry07 on August 14, 2009
    I love the way she ask her to have breakfast. a bit romantic and erotic at the same time.
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