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  • From ginnylovesharry07 on August 14, 2009
    this is already sooooooooooo hot and it is only started. totally enjoying the story
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  • From ANON - Tara on August 14, 2009
    That was the best lesson ever lol!!!
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  • From sophiebelle on August 14, 2009
    Wow, just wow. This scene was very well done. Your imagery is fantastic.
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  • From on August 14, 2009
    *blinks rapidly* I think I may have blacked out there... Damn!!!!! That was HOT HOT HOT!!! You just improved my mood with some serious hotness! If it's this intense without touching, I can't wait to see what happens to her when there is some touching!!!
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  • From ANON - VoraciousReader on August 14, 2009
    I think that for too many inexperienced readers and writers, as well as the merely salaciously interested, they see the acoutrements, the leather and the whips, without knowing the sensuality that spreads throughout like ink through water. My own experience is not so wide, but there must be more to it than mere torture or it would only be practiced in the most deranged fashion by those who really need psychiatric care. Only true affection and the most diligent care would enable the participants to explore their widest boundaries. You seem to be protraying those elements well in this story. Bravo.
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  • From KellyJCR on August 14, 2009
    It very hard to have a cohearent thought after that chapter but, here it goes. I'm not well versed in the world of sub/dom relationships but from what I think I know insn't the subs role is to respect and completely give up all possible control in every aspect? I just thought the fact that she called Sev "infuriating" pushes the boundries a bit. I thought that lack of respect and name calling was a no no in these type of relationshps. However you have stated that there are different types of sub/dom pairs and maybe it is implyed that they have their own rules. You did say that Sev was looking for a trust he never recieved so this indescretion is acceptable to this particular experience. I think I'm bringing a one sided knowledge into a story that is more completely rounded to the genre. (Its clear that I've lost my mind.) Your line "You have the prettiest pussy I have ever seen." is completely to blame for that. Can't wait for more. You are doing an incredible job with this one. Well done!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - scarlet quill on August 14, 2009
    Heeelllllll yes! lol awesome kick start to my weekend lol, I'm gutted i have to go driving now, have to get a head on my shoulders instead of recollecting your chapter, my tutor is a balding middle aged old man lol, nothing like our severus. Never a disappointment cant wait till your next installment keep em' coming lol. Love your work cant wait to see what happens next!!!! Quick question before i head out, is Severus and Hermiones relationship going to constant slave dom? Or will they keep their friendship in there too? It seems a shame to let sex dismiss it. (Sex with severus?? Am I stupid lmao) Uk fan
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  • From diamondhelen on August 14, 2009
    The intensity you get into your writing is incredible. wow.
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  • From ANON - Serin Blackmoon on August 13, 2009
    I find this story addictive. The fact that you are exploring such a misunderstood sexual aspect with such dynamic characters is amazing. Please keep up the good work!!!
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  • From on August 13, 2009
    I'd wear a corset & skirt for him every minute! What a wonderful way to eat breakfast too - lucky girl! I felt frustrated at the beginning w/ the slow build, but now it's almost comforting. He's easing himself and Hermione into this & I can see how his past relationships are impacting this one. Hopefully, he doesn't give up on her. If he does, then I'll be the one growling :)
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  • From on August 13, 2009
    Whew! Back to school week is even worse - I missed two updates :( Oh well, more to read now. So *catches breath* what an update indeed! I had no idea reading a book could be so erotic. Good god that man is hot!!! I can't think of more to say, because all I can actually think is 'read the next chapter... NOW!'
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  • From ANON - Aundree'a on August 12, 2009
    Goodness! That whole encounter! Its was just the beginning for them, but its already starting to get steamy! Breakfast on his lap!! I know that would be something I would look forward to each and every morning!! Being the controlling and bossy person I am, I know following rules would be hard for me, but please believe I would definitely be willing to turn over a new leaf for him!
    Can't wait to read more!!
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  • From ANON - Tara on August 12, 2009
    Another great chapter! I couldn't help but to feel a tiny bit of Hermiones unease as she realized there was much more to it than what she had read in her books. Well its a good thing she has got a great teacher!!
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  • From LadyofClunn on August 12, 2009
    Great chapter!

    Laying ground rules is really important and Severus has made it very clear that he wants a relationship that goes beyond simply having kinky sex.

    Most people think of punishment in a D/s relationship in terms of pain and/or humiliation. Problem there is, that many people - given the nature of the relationship we are talking about here - actually enjoy pain and/or humiliation and it is already part of their live without necessarily being a punishment. It kind of hard to punish someone if that person gets off on the punishment. So, the worst punishments ever can be things you would never dream of.

    Take me. I hate gardening. I swear, I kill green things with my mere presence. Threaten me with two hours of gardening and I will be a VERY good girl.

    I hope Severus is a creative Dom. ;)
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  • From smmz79 on August 12, 2009
    great chap.... i am really looking forward to this story.. i think that it is very unique among your other ss/hg.. i mean severus has always been slightly dominating but this is a diff area..... i love your blog... and especially that you are keeping us updated with your dramione fic... so your second child has started school how exciting 2 down one more to go... :-)
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