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Reviews for Delicate

By : soldiersgirl0709
  • From ANON - scarlet quill on August 12, 2009
    sensual torcher is something you and lovely sev have in common lol. Another rivating chapter cant wait till the fun starts, i can tell the next chapter will have a little steam brewing waiting with a bated breath lol :D uk fan
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  • From diamondhelen on August 12, 2009
    There's something really beautiful about your story, much more so than any other D/s story i've read. I think it's the way he seems to want to treasure her, lovely.
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  • From BillsBedroom on August 12, 2009
    If Severus is the one handing out the rules, I would gladly follow EVERYONE of them!!!
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  • From ANON - VoraciousReader on August 12, 2009
    This is a far more in-depth study of a D/s relationship than is usually covered in fan fiction. The constant intertwining of desire and normalcy is very intriguing and makes me want to read more, please.
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  • From KellyJCR on August 12, 2009
    OMG! There are no words. I love how your mind works. Its interesting that Severus asks for the same thing he gives...trust. He didn't have to tell Hermione that he looked through her room yet he did, if not in great detail (the lingere drawer). That leads me to belive that even though this will turn out to be a sub/dom relationship they are more or less equals. I must say that I envy the fact that you can sit through a buisness meeting and still have Severus whispering naughty tidbits in your head. The volume at which my children communicate usually leaves my brain vibrating hours after they have gone to bed. That unfortuantly leaves no room for Rickmans incredible voice. Can't wait for more. Well done!!!!
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  • From LadyofClunn on August 11, 2009
    Oooh! Nice little test!

    I think Severus is underestimating Hermione and Hermione might be surprised that the worst punishments have absolutely nothing to do with paddles or whips or rope.

    I really like this story and I am very curious where you will take this.

    Great Job!
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  • From Crazie4Dan on August 11, 2009
    update everyday =]
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  • From shelagh on August 10, 2009
    Another wonderful start.
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  • From HarryGinny4eva on August 10, 2009
    See, I knew I would enjoy your form of Severus-domination (at least so far...lol). He's gentle and honest, but forceful and direct. I also liked that she's not so intimidated/scared that she can't be open and honest herself. Looking forward to more soon and thank you! HG4eva
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  • From ANON - RebelRose on August 10, 2009
    The tension between the two.....oh so delicious. I can't wait to see what you have in store for these two. Your stories are always worth the wait!
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  • From ANON - Aundree'a on August 10, 2009
    Wow... Serverus is going to make her wait... and knowing him it could be long and drawn out, enough to make Hermione scream! Which, he'll probably do anyway, I have no doubt!
    And you actually met someone like Nigel?? UGH! I hope you gave him a piece of your mind, and then some! I swear, sometimes men are no good...
    Can't wait to read more!
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  • From ANON - Tara on August 10, 2009
    There is not much to say other than THAT WAS HOT!!!!
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  • From chickaboo on August 10, 2009
    Oh man. What torture for Hermione. I feel for her. I really do. I can't wait for more!
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  • From ANON - annie on August 10, 2009
    I LOVE IT!! soooo sooooo hot!! i've read dom-severus and sub- hermione stories before but this one is so different. The others are somewhat harsh in their depictions but with this one i can feel the loving nature of it. i love it!! =] keep it coming!! it's also so very very hot! and i can't wait to read another line!!
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  • From ANON - scarlet quill on August 10, 2009
    ooooohhh you meany, im not impressed with the thick tension you've left your readers with lol. Does Severus really go to bed on his tod? Knowing you have your masterpiece created and finished is a terrible thing to tell me! It means somewhere out their in cyber space is your ending!!! lol i need to know what happens with our favourite pair lol do tell about your other peices in the pipe works can't wait for more to read! :D I'm staying with my fiance this week at his town house, but since he doesnt have internet installed yet, im coming home to check your updates lol sad but true, your an awesome writer keep up the inspiring plots and give us some smut lol. :D uk fan
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