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Reviews for Delicate

By : soldiersgirl0709
  • From KellyJCR on August 10, 2009
    "You are willing to submit your body to me, any way I ask of you?" With that line alone you made me choke on my toast at 6 this morning. (Is it wrong that I read fanfiction instead of the newspaper everyday?) That was the most erotic thing I have ever read. It seems like Severus is not "all in" as they say. He still seems hesitant even though he has openly spoken to Hermione about who he is and what he expects. Hermione has not made any move to give him any clue that his actions are not wanted. This begs to ask the question...Why? Why is he so unsure of himself with her? Is he afraid that it means more to her than it will to him? I know you'll clear it up soon enough but as you know I can't stop speculating. Can't wait for more. Well done!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - bdh_girl on August 10, 2009
    I've never reviewed on this site before but I wanted you to know how much I love this story and all of your stories. I've read everything you've written at least once. They help when I'm depressed. Thank you!
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  • From LadyMalfoy on August 10, 2009
    Severus saying he was only going to keep the puppy for the night and then ending up keeping him for longer reminds me of my stepdad. My family brought home a kitten that had been living under an abandoned home and my stepdad told us we were just going to keep him for the night and then we were going to find someone to take him. Seven years later.. he still lives with my mom. :]

    But back to your story.. I love it. It's not at all hard to imagine Severus being dominant. He's so hot. :]
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  • From MariaTeresaQuintanar on August 10, 2009
    I love the new chapter! Great work. I do believe the next song should be "Anticipation" by Carly Simon. I would tell you I'm on the edge of my seat, but given what you just wrote you might take it the wrong way! LOL! Update soon!!!
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  • From ANON - Sevibaby on August 10, 2009
    What I ment was the too often writers will use the student / teacher role playing card. You know like they both have had a fantasy about them having sex while she was still a student. I prefer a much more adult Hermione. Good chapter by the way. Can't wait for the next one.
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  • From sophiebelle on August 10, 2009
    I love sev in teacher mode. Yummy.
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  • From ANON - suckerforsnape on August 10, 2009
    I wouldn't have lasted, I'm not that strong. Wow
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  • From ANON - VoraciousReader on August 10, 2009
    Ah, we all know how much she hates to fail a test, and he's obviously going to drive her (and us) mad before he decides she's passed, LOL. Made a nice change from just jumping on her and shagging her into conniptions.
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  • From smmz79 on August 10, 2009
    wow that was hot, i mean sitting there all exposedc for severus to do what he wanted and not knowing what he was going to do at the same time that was great... i bet hermione really is confused i am sure not many of the books that she has read told of this type of situations probably way more of the sexual side of dominance... so severus thinks that he can scare her away well i doubt that is going to happen but it will be interesting to see him try and not suceed how frustrating for both of them... i bet it will be hard for her to not get herself off after that but i wonder what will happen if she does hmmm????
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  • From BillsBedroom on August 10, 2009
    Well considering "Bill's Bedroom" is where I would love to be (with Stephen Moyer AKA Bill) I thought the name was appropriate!! Love True Blood!! Back to this story, the anticipation of this chapter is killing me. You certainly know how to keep a gal on the edge of her seat! Damn, a commanding Severus is so delicious!
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  • From ANON - cheryl123sing on August 09, 2009
    I've never posted a review here before, but I wanted to tell you how absolutly thrilled I am to see a new Snape story from you! I've been a great fan of your Snape fics for ages, and I check back often for new ones.

    Unfortunatly, as much as I adore Lucius, Draco and Lupin, I can't read stories about them. I love Severus far too much, and reading about other men would feel like cheating on him, lol.

    Great start to the story, can't wait to read more!
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  • From ginnylovesharry07 on August 09, 2009
    totally awosme chapter, love how he went into her mind showing such tnederness to not let her know, I feel that he wants to be with her, but he is fighting himself. so glad I get to see the next chapter all ready.
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  • From Amethystique on August 09, 2009
    Yippee! I've had a week away on holiday, all depressed about coming back home and guess what? I spent a lovely time reading this gem. Snapes Goddess has produced the goods once more. The tension that has developed is really intense and I've trulky enjoyed reading it. I look forward to further chapters!!
    Blessings & sugar quills
    Amthystique xx
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  • From catysmom1028 on August 09, 2009
    I like it. Please update soon.

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  • From ANON - VoraciousReader on August 09, 2009
    Lovely chapter; I just got back from three days camping and it was a nice 'welcom e home' to find it. And yes, we all hate 'not you, it's me' line.
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