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Reviews for Delicate

By : soldiersgirl0709
  • From ANON - shadowchsr on September 04, 2009
    You know I think a lot of people who were upset over this story aside from being ignorant were probably intimidated by the mental aspect of the piece. Anyone in the D/s lifestyle would probably agree to a point that the deeper mental aspect is what really drives the relationship. It may not be overly explicit and full of toys and props but true forms of erotic control are the binds we put on ourselves through thought and action and I think that can scare a lot of people. Even if it's not what you normally put out I feel that it is still you as you've touched this material a few times before just not as emotionally deeply as you did this time around. Anyone can go to a novelty store and buy a blindfold, fuzzy handcuffs and crop and play games once or twice a month but to live it and breath it and to trust and give the trust and control that Severus and Herminone did with each other in this story is disturbing for people who don't fully understand or refuse to. Please don't ever give up writing such introspective pieces. I think it will help you evolve and grow as a writer and from the reviews I've read here, everone on this site loves your work. I know I said it in my last review but remember those who know the least, tend to know it the loudest. I wouldn't be me if I let others guide what they thought was me or what was acceptable for me to do or say or think or feel or express. Please don't let negative reviews ever get you down.
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  • From ANON - Olwen on September 04, 2009
    This was a wonderful story and a very good depiction of two people working out a fairly healthy D/s relationship. Everybody has their baggage. Sev has a full set of steamer trunks, but you gave him depth without being maudlin. Whoever gave you grief about this story probably had trouble with your subject matter more than your treatment of it. Keep writing. You have been one of my bookmarked authors for a while. I'll check back to see what you're working on again soon.
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  • From smmz79 on September 04, 2009
    oh yeahh i loved the ending and while i would LOVE for more i like the way you ended it.... i hate that you have such negative feelings for this fic and as a result in the whole ss/hg world i LOVE the way you write this pairing an hope that you will come back to it again that phantom idea sounded very cool.... maybe play with your other men for a bit that may help so the remus is done and is 10 chaps wow i can not wait and the hg/dm fic is humorous as well as scary great so i will be laughing while i hide under my blanket... :-) oh and of course lucy has to have his moments in the spotlight and notice i said momentS he is never satisfied with just one fic is he... oh btw loved the one shot very freaking hot!!!!!
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  • From ANON - bbgirl on September 03, 2009
    omg, what in the hell is this? I mean woah, everything was fine and cute until chapter 7 and I saw all this domination BS and was like WOAH....

    I'm sorry but this story is definitely not my style, the whole submission thing and kinky sex crap isnt my thing, it scares the hell out of me. :S anyways, had to let you know how creepy and just fucked up I think this story is..delete my review if you want, get mad all you want...I'm not reading it anymore...*creeped out*
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  • From ANON - Liz on September 03, 2009
    Thank you for writing this. I have enjoyed checking in daily for updates and reading it as it was posted. I admit I don't review very frequently, but it saddened me to see you mention that some reviews for this story weren't so complimentary, so I thought I would post one that was. D/s relationships fascinate me, and this one was written out so well -- it was so much more than just kink, it was about a real emotional relationship between two people (which, I know, was one of the primary goals of this story). Hermione seemed a bit OOC, but that hardly bothers me, as the character was still very well written for this story. So, anyway, thank you again for writing and posting the story to completion. :)
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  • From shelagh on September 03, 2009
    A wonderful job!!! Well done. Why did you seem to have trouble with this one? From this end of the process you would never realize you were having issues.
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  • From ANON - Anon on September 03, 2009
    Good story... great ending. Thanks!
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  • From ANON - Aundree'a on September 03, 2009
    I must admit... the ending does feel a little empty... but it was a good way to end it. I loved this fic. It was a great read. One of my favorites from you. Don't let the tough reviews on this one get you down. I LOVED IT! Can't wait to see what you have in store for us with Remus and Draco, and I'm keeping my fingers crossed that you make a sequel!
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  • From serinblackmoon on September 03, 2009
    I love the ending! It's awesome, closure and yet a way to know that we can imagine how their affection can grow. Delicate is my fave story so far!!!! I can't wait to read more of your tales. Actually I am right now lol. I can't see why this one story would put people off from you. I've read some of your older ones and this one is along the same lines with less humor. I still love all you've written I do look forward to reading more as you grow as an author.

    Lady Serin
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  • From ANON - Jenn on September 03, 2009
    Well I loved this story! It was great :) I'd definately read a sequel if you were to write it. Not sure why you were getting weird reviews, I like all your stories and this one is no different! Keep up the good work and don't let them get you down!
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  • From Tenar10r on September 03, 2009
    Great chapter!
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  • From ANON - RebelRose on September 03, 2009
    Once again, another beautifully crafted work about one of my favorite couples. I am rather surprised that some people had issue with this tale. I was glad to see someone explore this side of a D/s relationship. It is something that is often overlooked, and please let me add (from my own experience) you did a beautiful job of capturing this side of it. I await your next tale with much anticipation.
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  • From ANON - shadowchsr on September 03, 2009
    I must say that I am sad to see this story end and I hope that over time you do feel both the desire and inspiration to write at least an epilogue if not a sequel. I'd personally prefer a sequel but we can't always get what we want. I must admit that I was a bit confused at your comment in the final notes of "Ive become a bit jaded with this story and the reactions it garnered that I STILL don
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  • From ANON - Tara on September 03, 2009
    Finally Severus got his head out of his ass lol about time! As for people who gave you a hard time about the story... well you know what they say about closed minded people lol. Chin up the rest of us love ya!!!!
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  • From tambrathegreat on September 03, 2009
    I loved the relationship you described that Severus wanted with Hermione. I don't understand how anyone could find fault with it. Lovely work, and the ending was perfect. Thanks for sharing.

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