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By : soldiersgirl0709

From KellyJCR on September 01, 2009
HOW COULD YOU LEAVE IT THERE!!!!!! That was to good. I love it when Severus gets so emotional that he forgets himself. I new Gretchen would point him in the right direction. I am sorry to see this story coming to a close but, I know you promissed tidbits here and there. So woohoo for that. Can't wait for more. Well done!!!!!

I am overjoyed that you have decided not to take this story down. I noticed that after reading your blog that I too have read much worse on this site. If anyone can not see the differences between the emotional complexity of this and others that are D/S only to go a completly different way altogether should NOT be reading adult oriented fiction. Okay I think I've finally said my peace.
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From smmz79 on September 01, 2009
ok where do i begin..... hmmm ok so about your blog... first i have to say i love the pics of sev and i laughed at the one about girly hair... ha ha.... obviously SG you mean a lot to a lot of people and i would just like to say that i am very sorry about your husband i never knew i mean you left hints in some of your AN's but i did not want to pry... i have been through a divorce and it hurt like hell no we did not have kids and i only gave him five years of my life but on some levels i think i can relate although each experience is unique to the people involved just know that if you need to talk you can e-mail me just ask for my e-mail address and i will reply with it... if not i totally understand as well... :-) ok on to the fic ummm what a great chap i love that severus had to bare his soul in front of the potters that was great and fitting i laughed at the transition that harry made one minute he is a fierce protector the next he is a little squicked by severus and hermione... i could not believe she used the phrase and over something emotional i liked that it wasn't only based on sex you are right in wanting to make this more like an everyday relationship and i think you have helped to erase some of the stereotypes that are around about D/s relationships... so i wonder what will happen next with hermione... hmm should be good... ok so the next chap is the last so that means it is timefor me to sound utterly pathetic and ask or whine... sooo how long are we going to be tortured without your next fic??? i mean seriously iam like an addict here i am starting to twitch... :-) oh and thank you for answering my question about the phantom i was curious i 'thought' that maybe that was where you were going but i was not sure and yummy dark remus this should be good and yaahhh scary dr/hg although i will have to make sure i am not in a jumpy mood when i read it i mean the freaking title has me shivering 'the dollhouse' brrrrr ok well that is all darling i hope you are well and as always i sooo cannot wait for the next chap... :-)
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From Forbiddenfantasy on September 01, 2009
Ohh, How Much I Love this story!
How much i love all of your stories,
Well done!!
xxx
Alex
Brilliant chapter by the way, love it..
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From serinblackmoon on September 01, 2009
Another great chapter! I'm late in reading but my BF thought it a good idea to end summer with a bang! Lol He took us up in a plane where he got to pilot an then we let ourselves go wild at Great America lol. I'm pleased that you won't be taking this one down it was quickly become my fave by far. I've been reading your older stories as well and I must say I love them too!!! I can't wait to read more and I can't wait for another chapter. Keep up the great work!!!

Lots of love

Lady Serin
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From ANON - Jade on August 31, 2009
Wonderful chapter
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From HarryGinny4eva on August 31, 2009
I am sorry for all you're going through. Depressions or funks can really exhaust you. I know you don't know me, but I am sending good thoughts your way. :-) As for the story, I will be sorry to see it end, but I trust you'll have another coming soon. ;-) Poor Hermione, she might not survive Severus' issues. He has to open up sooner or later...

Thanks, hon. Feel better,
HG4eva
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From ANON - makaem on August 31, 2009
This is great.
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From ginnyginny on August 30, 2009
I cannot imagine that anyone would suggest you take this fic down, and yet I get the impression that is what has heppened. with all of the other fics out there, and some touching on much more dangerous subjects than this, those that are horrible written, terrible cliche, have no plot, no point what so ever... and this needs to be removed? as if! i'm still not completely comfotable with their relationship, mostly because i can't imagine myself giving another person that much control over me (and to me, personally, it really is control, and not trust, but that is me). i am interested in seeing what happens next with this story as with your others. i wonder if the last 2 stories haven't been you own personal ways of working issues out from your marriage... and i love the way you've written so honestly with these characters. i still don't get them, but i respect it...

i hope you keep up with this story and others, and ignore those who are giving you a bad time. you are a wonderful, creative writer who gives 100% to everything you write.

as for the story, i currently want to kick snape's arse. although he's physically and sexually a man, it seems to me that his emotions are stuck in his teenage years, when he was hurt so terribly by lily. hermione got him right early on by calling him out on this insane obsession with a girl who never loved him, and truly took more than what she gave. he's lost in the past and is about to lose his future if he can't grow-up and take a chance, and let go of a ghost.

can't wait to see what happens next.

mandy aka ginnyginny
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From TriniMinx on August 30, 2009
Wait, I just read the other comments?
Someone is being mean to you?! Why?
That's not nice.

I mean, I didn't agree with "The Affair" or this one, but I don't think I'm being mean. I think you should finish this story for those who really appreciate it.

I'm sorry someone is being mean to you, that's uncalled for.

Where is your blog? I'd like to read it.
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From TriniMinx on August 30, 2009
chpt. 18

ugh, I hate him.
That's it, it's official. Sorry my lovely Snapes Goddess, you know I heart you lots, but I can't read this anymore.
Your stupid Snape is driving me crazy! I don't like, no, no, no. :(
He's mean and mean and extra mean...and it's not sexy. Not to me at least.

I'll wait for your other stories :)

*muah* Good luck finishing this one!
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From ANON - meg on August 30, 2009
Great Job - I love what you're doing. Snape in this light is so....delectable, lol. So willing to torture others to avoid pain himself...and yet still causing himself quite a bit of discomfort. Keep writing :-) Cause I've got to know how it ends!
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From ANON - scarlet quill on August 30, 2009
Oh you do enjoy making trouble for our awesome twosome lol. Miss Sinclair is completely different then from what i had her pumped up to be, a pleasurable surprise, although it does sour the grapes slightly that Hermione is still getting hurt in the mix up. Nvm, I'm sure shell be enlightened soon enough! Thanks for the timely up date, unfortunetly i will have to go a week without your writings as im doing a spot of travelling before the end of the summmer holidays, first stop, Barcelona! Cant wait to read your updates upon my return! Keep up the great writings! UK FAN!
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From KellyJCR on August 30, 2009
I'm not sure why you would have to defend anything you write. If people don't like the tone or story than they shouldn't read, its that simple. I happen to know for a fact that we live in a society were freedom of speech is a right. Screw those who think your story should be taken down. ( Okay I'm off my soapbox now.) Severus is playing a very dangerous game all of a sudden. I think he is getting off on the jelousy Hermione is feeling. He hasn't spoken candidly about Gretchen because he is enloying the power he has over Hermione not to mention the fact that the rules are still in play. (I love the fact that you made Gretchen a lesbian that is a feature I hardly ever see in these stories. He is such a naughty boy!) Well I hope you snap out of your funk soon being overly emotional is never fun. Everyone has there bad days you just have to plow through and wait for the sun to shine again. Well done!!!
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From eileenmilner on August 30, 2009
I don't understand, why should you take the story down? It's very good, has someone upset you? If so, ignore them, your writing is
brill, and I thoroughly enjoy reading all your stories, please do not give up writing and posting, fanfic keeps me and thousand of others going.

Best wishes,

Donavon
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From ANON - VoraciousReader on August 30, 2009
Oh, that was just wicked, right in front of McGonagall? Too funny!
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