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  • From HarryGinny4eva on August 28, 2009
    Poor both of them. The only word that came to mind was therapy. Severus needs YEARS of it. lol Thanks, hon! HG4eva
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  • From ANON - VoraciousReader on August 28, 2009
    Bastard that he is, he is suffering his own brand of pain fromt he conflict. I really wanted to cry for her, since I have been very much in the same position; nothing will disguise that walk to the nearest exit.
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  • From ANON - makaem on August 28, 2009
    This is great. Gretchen is an interesting character. I hope we see more of her.
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  • From ANON - Aundree'a on August 28, 2009
    Well...This one chapter touched a little close to home. I almost cried...
    Im so glad that Gretchen won't be a problem. I would have had my claws sharpened if I were Hermione! Its good that Gretchen is talking some sense into stubborn Severus! And that last chapter... whew! We're getting closer to the goods, I can tell! Can't wait to read more!
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  • From ANON - Aundree'a on August 28, 2009
    Well...This one chapter touched a little close to home. I almost cried...
    Im so glad that Gretchen won't be a problem. I would have had my claws sharpened if I were Hermione! Its good that Gretchen is talking some sense into stubborn Severus! And that last chapter... whew! We're getting closer to the goods, I can tell! Can't wait to read more!
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  • From ANON - Tara on August 28, 2009
    Severus is being a bad boy again. Poor Hermione so unsure of herself.
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  • From smmz79 on August 28, 2009
    oh wow so it begins i was wondering when severus' insecurities and fears would creep more fully into his relationship.... poor hermione she really did have a bad week and a student asked if she was a cougar or if she wanted to be HA HA HA thats just funny... ok so we see gretchen now and she is beautiful poor hermione severus really threw her for a loop didn't he i think the reason he wanted to hurt her besides wanting to test her was so she would leave him so he would not have ot put his heart on the line again i think that scares him and i am worried that he will use his hurt of her to break off the relationship stating that he is not good for her... anyhoo i sooo cannot wait to see what happens next!!!!
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  • From mageemi on August 28, 2009
    Oh my gosh, Severus is so confused, so conflicted. I think Gretchen is exactly right, he is terrified of opening up his heart to be broken and is trying to hurt Hermione before he himself is hurt. Maybe he'll even drive her away, then he can tell himself he was right all along not to allow her completely into his heart.
    You are an evil author to leave us hanging!! Please update soon.
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  • From ANON - wiseone on August 28, 2009
    *sigh* so good
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  • From BRNCTYPrincess on August 28, 2009
    Chapter 17, how heartbreaking! Great chapter and story though!
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  • From KellyJCR on August 28, 2009
    What reason would he have for hurting Hermione? Its almost like he wants to create his own drama. Now I can see the fact that by hurting her he could see her true feelings. (Albeit a sneaky way of going about it.) What Severus does not realise is that he is causing Hermione to doubt him and that may cause her to push him away and the so on and so on. I was curious to the reason why Severus could trust Gretchen so easily was it because she hardly new him? I like Gretchen I think she might bring about just what Severus needs to finally open up completly to Hermione. Can't wait for more. Well done!!!

    P.S. I didn't know people actually listened to Dolly Parton anymore. I love all music but, Dolly Parton...Really!
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  • From smmz79 on August 27, 2009
    YAAHHHH i know that you are always faithful with your reviews but that does not make me any less excited... love this chap excepr i wish severus would let go of the stuff that has been holding him back... great action though!!! so a little hhen she sounds history on gretchen she sounds so interesting as long as she has NO designs on severus.... :-) ok so i love your pic on your blog how freaking yummy is that.... ok so the dramione is called dool house and it is a scary fic hell the name has ne freaked already... i am a chicken i can not help it... and could you explain what you mean by "phantom" for the next severus/hermione fic??? sorry i have to try to get some hints i am so excited about all of the fics you write!!!!! ok so your remus is almost done yahhhh and another girl talk chap lucius is wayyyyyy to sexy to be ignored!!!! :-)
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  • From serinblackmoon on August 27, 2009
    Great chapter as always. So Severus is running scared eh? I can't wait to see what will happen next time. Perhaps an 'I love you' from Hermione and Severus flips? Lol Just poking fun.I think if Severus really used his mind reading skills he would see she would never hurt him. But hey I can see why he's scared and I totally love how you are playing that up.

    *Two more thumbs way way up!!!*
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  • From AriaDragoncrest on August 26, 2009
    Great chapter
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  • From TriniMinx on August 26, 2009
    Okay, I lied....I'm still reading, lol. Until you freak me out with another whacky chpt. You know I'm addicted to your stories!
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