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By : soldiersgirl0709
  • From ANON - Sarah-Ayn on August 26, 2009
    ugh, r they ever gonna have sex?!?!
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  • From ANON - ladychrisitnad on August 26, 2009
    Love how Sev is running scared! LOL About time, so few stories have that little bonus. (starts chanting) UPDATE! UPDATE!
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  • From HarryGinny4eva on August 26, 2009
    Lovely and sad. I look forward to him finally opening up to her, either by completing the act or talking to her about his concern. I know he's a stalwart, relatively solo person, but he has to realize soon that it's time to stop punishing her for what Lily did. Besides, he can't hold out much longer. ha ha ha Thanks hon! Off to read "Girl Talk." :-) HG4eva
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  • From KellyJCR on August 26, 2009
    So I see a little proof that Severus is a closet sadomasochist. He knew deep down that he could never have Lily therefore he forces a barrier between himself and Hermione to protect himself. All this does is punish himself for having feelings for anyone. I don't doubt that he was devestated by Lilys loss but to cut oneself off for 20 years does not help or give any sense of closure. He seems so broken and is almost unable to see the love Hermione so openly gives to him. He literaly creates more doubts the closer they become. It would be almost to Hermiones benifit to distance herself a bit to show him that she is for real. By the way loved the BJ on the beach it brings back fond memories. Can't wait for more. Well done!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Tara on August 26, 2009
    Poor Sev can't make up his mind lol
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  • From ANON - wiseone on August 26, 2009
    I love what you write! :) I like the more romantic stories, not the ones that are just "I'm horny lets fuck" :P
    My sister would love this storie! She's obsessed with Severus Snape, and thinks she wants to be a submissive (more information than I wanted to know about my sister, but oh well :P) lol so I'll tell her to read it! :D Well good luck with evrything else you write!
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  • From on August 26, 2009
    Poor Hermione! She's persistent though & has to stay that way... He's so stubborn (and scared)! Can't wait for more :)
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  • From ebonyeyez1 on August 26, 2009
    Another creative feast for the eyes. I am thoroughly enjoying reading this tale. It looks like its going to start getting interesting very soon. Eagerly awaiting the next chapter.
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  • From sirimionefan85 on August 26, 2009
    Great story! Hot too. Update again soon!
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  • From ANON - Aside1016 on August 26, 2009
    Hello. I would like to first say that I love this story. The D/s is so tender, so loving. This is my type of relationship! Also, I know you have said in previous chapters that this is the first time you've written a story like this. I would like to disagree with you. I just got finished with Curiosity and in that story, the D/s is more "dark" as well as you having a threesome in that story. Please ignore the people who think this type of relationship is wrong or dangerous. Love is shown in so many different ways.
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  • From serinblackmoon on August 25, 2009
    Another great chapter! I loved it. Minerva knows or at least suspects, but I think it's wonderful that Severus is ok with people knowing or suspecting. I can't wait to see Hermione's reaction when it all comes out as well as everyone else's when their suspicions are confirmed! Great job! *Two more thumbs way way up!*
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  • From BillsBedroom on August 24, 2009
    I know I am behind a chapter in reviews, so here is Ch 14, can't tell what was hotter. Harry and Ginny (SOOO don't see him that way, even after the pic you sent me =) ) or Hermione and Severus watching! I was soo born in the wrong time, I am thinking it should have been sometime around Caligula, such dirty thoughts running through my head!! If only I had the gift to put them to paper as you do!! Damn it!! Chapter 15, Severus is so bad, that in my mind, is what makes him so GOOD. I have to say that Severus having some fun with Molly and Minerva is tickling my fancy also, What sticks in the mud!! Eagerly waiting for the next chapter. Maybe this next one he MIGHT give in to her??
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  • From ANON - Tara on August 24, 2009
    Hmmm I smell trouble a brewing (no pun intended lol!) I have a feeling that Ms. Gretchen Sinclair is going to cause some problems in the future.
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  • From ANON - Aundree'a on August 24, 2009
    So glad you're feeling better! Kidney stones are no joke!
    Loved the way sev was pulling at her strings while talking to minerva. I suspect she is trying to get him to show that other headmaster around in hopes she lures him away from hermione.
    I can tell that's not gonna happen! Hermione and I share something in common in wait. Im an extremely impatient person myself, and by this time I would have just ripped the the man's clothes off and had my way! Lol.
    What did you think of this weeks past episode of True Blood?
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  • From KellyJCR on August 24, 2009
    Why do I sense a bit of drama coming with this Sinclair woman. I don't think its as simple as Severus let on.

    Ms. Granger is turning into quite a little deviant . I wish I had the moxie to do half the things she does in this story.

    I'm surprised Minerva and Molly don't try and attempt an intervention of some sort.

    I love the fact that Severus will not let on when or where he is finally going to "take" her. Sometimes patience is the best form of foreplay.

    Can't wait for more. Glad to hear you have many more stories coming up. Well done!!!!!!
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