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Reviews for Blood's Magic

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  • From ANON - Setsuna Mitzukai on August 25, 2009
    It was really well written and quite enjoyable, I would love for you to continue this. I will keep an eye out for more chapters.
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  • From lonelyreverance on August 25, 2009
    finally a fic like this that uses logic and a sense of time.... You still have a few kinks i think in one year you mention that harry is 14 and then you mention him the same age the next... to name an example. please write more
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  • From ANON - chineseartist on August 25, 2009
    that was awesome. the letter's were a really good way to set up background without having tons of chapters leading up to the meat of the story. i was wondering if the whole chapter would be that way, but i was glad of the transition towards the end. very good, and i love the topic. abvh X hp rocks. can't wait for more.
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  • From ANON - spaz666 on August 25, 2009
    Wow. You and your friend did a great job at the prologue. It is easy to tell that you both put in a lot of work into this fic. I loved the letter bit. It was ingenius to use them to go through three years that way. Cut down on explaining things we already know. This is going to be a great fic. I can aready tell!
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  • From ANON - Meamz on August 25, 2009
    I have read many Harry Potter/ Anita Blake crossovers, but this is the first one like this. I enjoy reading the story,so far, and can hardly wait to see where you take it.
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  • From Yaoifreak10293 on August 25, 2009
    I like it. It has a different take to the Harry Potter/Anita Blake style...and believe me I've read a lot of them. Well anyway I will be eagerly awaiting and praying that you do continue this story. I like how he is related to the Travler and how he is his animal to call.If I'm right then Anita Blake series it would about Blood Noir. I think(oh well if I'm wrong then I'm wrong)? If you continue the story then will the chapters be as long cause its a really nice change! I wonder how Richard will respond to Harry being in town? Well anyway so far I like the story a lot and am routing that the story continues!
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  • From PSchri87 on August 24, 2009
    Wow wow wow!!! What a great piece of writing! It was a joy to read. Well written, well planned, well done. You drew me in with your rare story telling (not many people are brave enough, or competent enough, to use letters as a way to tell the story).

    Your spin on the characters is believable and intriguing. You show some character development, and made me feel the years as they went by. I liked that Harry managed to save Sirius, though that is a large deviation from canon. Oh well, it's your story.

    While I really liked the length of this, I hope your update won't take as long to write as this chapter did! (though that's your prerogative). I do have a question. I know that for a vampire to make a human servant, it takes four marks. But Balthasar is the Traveler's human servant, so Harry is now his animal to call? Does that also take four marks? I'm not that knowledgeable about the technicalities of the ABVH-verse.

    Thanks for sharing your imagination and writing with us. I look forward to reading more.
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  • From ANON - SanctumSyte on August 24, 2009
    I like this story and I hope you and your best friend do continue this. I would like it if you were to keep it as threesome with Harry/Balthasar/Traveler. Looking forward to your next update.
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  • From meridethkun on August 24, 2009
    Very good beginning. I like how you approached the telling of the back story. The letters felt real, as if they were actually written by the characters. I also like how you used people other than the St. Louis group for the main people, yet you still used them to interest Harry more about the new world he has entered. I look forward to the next update! (Btw, long chapters are my favourite, but only if it doesn't mean that updates are going to be few and far between. When reading a WIP, I'm willing to sacrifice a bit of length - if the plot allows for it - for a speedier update. Too long between updates and I forget what happened before. Sometimes I even stop reading because I can't get back into the story. Just keep that in mind when planning your posts. I know I'm not the only one.)

    Again, great job!
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  • From sanda on August 24, 2009
    good story, I like it
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  • From ANON - aella on August 24, 2009
    Absolutely love the chapter and hey, no complaints from me about the length of it either, I love lengthy chapters! ^.^ Definitely interesting and different from the other Anita Blake x-overs that I have read. Though hopefully you'll stay with it since all my fav. ones look to be abandoned... T.T Anyways, lover the story and hope to see an update soon!
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  • From BabyInACorner on August 24, 2009
    definitely something to look forward to. there are too few good AB/HP xovers.
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  • From ANON - Beth on August 24, 2009
    Wonderful story! I can't wait to see where you take this!
    Please update again soon.
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  • From on August 24, 2009
    i love it
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  • From ANON - cynicalpony on August 24, 2009
    The format of this story is very interesting! Cookies to you both for using letters as a way to tell the story! ^ ^ I also liked that you focused on the Traveler and Balthasar rather than Jean-Claude and Anita Blake whenever people do crossovers. It was interesting that you made Voldemort a vampire (insane, sane, who knows?) since that just adds to the intrigue. Well I hope you guys continue with this story because now I'm hooked into waiting for the next installment.
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