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Reviews for Seraphim Beneath The Christmas Tree

By : starstruck86
  • From ANON - natwest on September 28, 2009
    Great story. I am very much a fangirl of Snape/Ron now. Never saw the pairing but now a fan. My question is Xmas dinner, when Molly saw the rings and how the rest of them react to them.

    Plus Snape 50 birthday what did they do.
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  • From ANON - kai on September 28, 2009
    yay!! george has someone!! XDD
    also the cunning bastard!! MUHAHAHAHAHAHAHA....LOVE!!!

    i really love your snape/ron fics. write more please!!!
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  • From ANON - Sheree on September 28, 2009
    BRAVO!!! BRAVO!!!

    I started out crying from laughing at "nocturnal emissions" and ended up crying over the rings.

    That was beautiful - can't wait to see what you come up with next.

    And Thanks again for the Christmas tree ;)
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  • From evanone on September 28, 2009
    You just made my day. *grin* I loved it.
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  • From abbicee on September 28, 2009
    Whoa! Did Hermione take a cruciatus to the brain or something? Is the alien invasion on and she's really a pod person? What happened to the brightest witch of her age? It must be something about all those dark spells she's been using. You know that's how Voldie started. A dark spell here, a dark spell there and the next thing you know she's buying Visine by the caseload. Thank goodness Ron has Severus to ground him and to make him realize how lousy Hermione was for him. And how much hotter the sex with Severus is. Just one more chapter? How did we get to the end so quickly?
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  • From ANON - hairsprayX12 on September 28, 2009
    take that Herms!!!!!

    What!!! Not Ron and Severus? I'll go through withdrawals!!!!!

    Well I'm sure whatever you do end up writing will be fabulous and will hook me by the first sentence :)

    By the way rereading all the Dream series again, almost peed my pants again with the whole conga line part in The Fairy and the Vampire...lmao
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  • From ANON - Sheree on September 27, 2009
    Thank you for giving Hermione the proverbial slap in the face - although I wouldn't have blame Ron or Severus is they had actually bodily removed her from their home. Egads - what a witch!

    Love Severus' defense - A1!

    And the smut - well when I'm able to solidify my body again - I'll let you know.

    **WAILS TOO - so soon the end
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  • From VenusOfHeaven on September 27, 2009
    See! I told you (well, myself) that Severus did have a backstory with Remus. Not necessarily romantic, but still, Teddy's appearance affected him a lot more than the rest (except Ron).

    And Hermione's dirty little secrets. Ah yes. Is there some phrase in English to say: predicar con el ejemplo (to preach by settling an example)? It is commonly used to say that she is always telling people how to act, what to say, what to think, and how to do things, but, really, she does the same thing she is criticising others for.

    Also, she needs help. And I am not referring only to her fear of commitment and her apparent inability to settle, but also to the fact that she is ruthless to get what she wants, and still paranoid enough about the events of the war (the wards around her house). Her boss (and future husband, if she goes through the wedding at the end) is going to have to deal with it, and it won't be easy.

    And Ron's awe at Severus's defence of him. I had wanted to hug him there.

    And then you killed me with the smut. Dead. Although I died happy.

    Davinci

    PS:Tomorrow's the last chapter? *wails*
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  • From ANON - Jc Black on September 27, 2009
    Love this story it like im in the room with them and i love story like that.
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  • From ANON - kai on September 27, 2009
    OMG! i can't believe hermione! she's such a bad girl!! all those spells and asking for ron back!! OMG!!!

    also that sex scene!! OMG! was that awesome! that was too hot, i loved it a lot.

    ron quitting his job, that doesn't surprise me but what will do now, hmm as they said a lot of possibilities!
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  • From tambrathegreat on September 27, 2009
    Nice. I loved the part with Hermione. It always amazes me when people act like that. (My husband' ex did almost the same thing.) It was really satisfying when Ron told her off.

    And Snape being jealous of Ron's little kiss with Harry. I could see it and the reaction afterwards. Lovely bit of hotness there.

    Great job. I always look forward to reading this story.
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  • From LadyZombie on September 27, 2009
    Double review since I was dragged about a Build-A-Bear by the b/f's daugther and missed the previous chapter.

    I liked the toilet papering of Ron. Lends authenticity to the typical older brothers torturing the youngest brother thing.

    Lucky for Sev that Ron's a great guy. Nasty fight that was. I liked the guy in the bathroom stall eavesdropping and offering to take Ron of Severus' hands.



    LOVE the idea of Severus and Ron huddling with each other watching scary horror flicks.

    And Hermione...sheesh. You know, I like that you've written her as rather unlikeable. Usually she's written as a Sue, all perfect and all knowing. It's refreshing to see her written as kind of a cow.


    And as for the sexy-times scenes...Jaysis! You've got a talent for them!
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  • From SeraphimeRising on September 27, 2009
    Loved the latest chapter. I was so happy to see Hermione get what was coming to her -- though I had expected her fellow to leave her at the alter.
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  • From evanone on September 27, 2009
    Hermione got what she deserved. I feel for her future husband. Happy End is gettig closer...YEAH
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  • From pittwitch on September 27, 2009
    Masterful Snape, oh yeah! Love him. Love them!
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