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Reviews for Seraphim Beneath The Christmas Tree

By : starstruck86
  • From SeraphimeRising on September 21, 2009
    You capture Ron so well! I love how he is so emotionally fragile but doing his best to hide it. I can't wait for the rest of his 'vacation'
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  • From tambrathegreat on September 21, 2009
    Poor Ron. I think we've all been there at some point. I'm so glad that Severus accepted him and the girls (Rats rule!) This chapter was very powerfully written and I really enjoyed the naughty bits. You have such a talent for writing them.
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  • From ANON - morganabythesea on September 21, 2009
    ...he hasn't run away completely...yet?

    Loved it! The ups the downs, the better understanding of each other, the acceptance, the sex. I hope Severus helps Ron realize that he is wanted, not a failure, etc. The boy needs a boost of confidence, so does Severus for that matter. Come to think of it, don't we all? :-)

    Looking forward to the next installment, I'm already feeling withdrawl symptoms. :-)
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  • From VenusOfHeaven on September 21, 2009
    Ron finally snaps. I knew he was taking so many things more or less in stride, until everything just piles and piles and one has to let it all out
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  • From abbicee on September 21, 2009
    Poor Ron, it just all came together and hit him didn't it? Well at least Severus is there to help him get through it, but I can't blame his family for being worried. After all, they don't know about Severus. If only George had a Severus in his life, Molly might finally be able to relax. I wonder if part of Ron's problem is that he hasn't had complete closure with Hermione. Perhaps he needs to sit and talk to her and ask her just what happened and what was lacking so he can realize it wasn't all his fault, that she has to bear some of the blame too. Well, all things considered maybe he should do that latter rather than sooner. Anyway can't wait for the next chapter to see how he and Severus hold up under long term contact.
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  • From ANON - Sheree on September 21, 2009
    Delightful as ever - everything seems to be getting "tied" together now - LOL
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  • From ANON - kai on September 21, 2009
    whoa, ron some serious issues there. 3 weeks paid time off with severus, awesome, i can't wait to see what they'd do. ^_^
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  • From FuchsiaScreams on September 21, 2009
    WTF, HOW THE BALLS DO YOU HAVE ONLY SIX CHAPTERS, BUT WITH 600 HITS AND 27 REVIEWS? HOW DO YOU DO IT?! I'M CONFUSED. HALP ME.
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  • From ANON - Sheree on September 20, 2009
    LOVE the tussling men!!! And the fighting!!!

    The best slash has all the posturing and head-butting of two rams in battle - AND this one's got them both.

    Keep up the good work and look forwarde to more.
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  • From talley on September 20, 2009
    Nice ride this fic. Slow and steady with our first real bump arising. I love it when characters are sick too. You did a good job of making him sound properly ill. I liked how nervous Snape was even after 7 hours on a train to think it out. The rats as before are an adorable addition. Ron should always have a pet. I'm still on the side that says, "evil hermione." My brother's fiance luckily didn't wait til the wedding but just a month away she suddenly just said no. As far as I know she's not given a real reason. We found out about a year later she was married with twins. It really hurt my brother and turned him off of relationships for years. He still calls the ex "warthog from hell." Hey, you might want to use that. Anyway back to the story, I'm enjoying hearing the pieces we also have missed as the reader of what happened after the battle at Hogwarts. The charity centerfold was a hoot. I am wondering the way Ron mentioned his uncertainity in pleasing Severous while he was sleeping what the heck they've been doing? And for that matter, was the muggle guy the one and only aside from Severus? I've yet to mention George but my heart goes out and unfortunately know about a twin losing his brother yet fortunately not intimately aware. It's devasting. George may need nurturing and a good hug but glad he knows how to dish it out as well. Looking forward to the next chapter.
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  • From abbicee on September 20, 2009
    Well that was nice. It's fun to see a jealous Severus, it's also fun to see a jealous Ron, as long as things don't go too overboard. I was glad to see Severus going to Ron's place and I hope it's not a one time occurance, though there is a bigger chance of Severus being found out. Why does Hermione choose the most inoppertune times to send Ron's things back to him? Is she doing it deliberately? Does she have some reason for wanting to hurt him or is she simply that selfish and clueless?
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  • From ANON - hairsprayX12 on September 20, 2009
    Well son of a goat with no name!!!!!! Jealous Severus is...Squeeee!!!!!!

    Loved the whole chapter, everything about it, from Ron being ill to Severus getting all possessive, wonderful!!!
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  • From tambrathegreat on September 20, 2009
    I have to say that you write Ron and Severus as I see them too. This story is just lovely, and you've struck the correct balance with the tone. Ron isn't the caricature of a gay man that we see in most stories of this ilk. He's himself in all his rough glory. Snape isn't the snarky, sarcastic bitch, he's damaged but still human. I love this story and will be adding it to my profile recommendations. Thanks for sharing.
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  • From ANON - kai on September 20, 2009
    oh god, you're right, she got horrible!
    anyways, i liked that severus went to ron's place but why?
    all needs to be explained soon!!

    also, i wonder if who'll find out that severus is alive, my guesses is it'll be hermione. -_- only because their'll be more angst if it's her. hahahahaha....
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  • From ANON - natwest on September 20, 2009
    This weekend I read all of your stories. The vampire one made me very sad. This one is funny and sad all together. Question? Will Ron become pregent? Both love children it will be fun. Mpreg.
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