Reviews for Seraphim Beneath The Christmas TreeBy : starstruck86 |
Ohdearlord, I freaking loved this one! It was amazing from start to finish, and I wish there was more, but I aslo really love how you ended it. T_T
Besides a few grammar or spelling errors, it was written really well, and I loved how you portrayed the pair of them. I also really liked your rendition of post-fred George. Also, loved the way that until the moment George said there was nothing dodgy going on between them, how there were twincest undertones to add a bit of underlying humor and intrigue.
I really love their tradition of lying under the tree and staring up. I've never heard of anything like it, and it's facinating. I also had to look up a few of the food and drinks you mentioned, and it made me really hungry while reading, so thanks for that, too. Everything in this was warm and fuzzy interpersed with the proper amount sof tension and angst. <3
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