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Reviews for You took my wings away

By : Tenshinhan
  • From ANON - M on January 18, 2013
    Unusual tale, I'm very interested to see where it would lead?
    I enjoyed the contrasts, I hope to learn more when you continue, if you would?
    M
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  • From Danyealle on January 05, 2011
    Upon review of your story, it was noticed that you cite/quote from another source, but that it is not properly cited.

    Please read the below listed FAQ, for the format that is needed.
    http://www2.adultfanfiction.net/forum/index.php?showtopic=15097

    Should you, the author use extensive quotations and references, footnoting would be best in that for instance.

    Thank you for your cooperation.

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  • From ANON - Sabriel on December 04, 2010
    Great fic, hooks reader really well. Easy to read and leaves me wanting to read more!!!
    Update soon!!
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  • From ANON - NoNameYet on July 27, 2010
    Just love it so far!
    Please continue! This Story has a lot of potential!!!
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  • From StudentofDust on June 12, 2010
    Great chapters! I really hope you continue!
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  • From StudentofDust on June 12, 2010
    Wow... Great story so far. You really express their feelings vividly! I hope you plan to continue this story beyond just the few chapters posted.
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  • From DanniKay on January 17, 2010
    You want a review?
    :) Okay then :P
    I really do like what you've done with your story so far.. I love that you're showing a side of Luna that we never really get to see in the HP books.. I believe that she has a lot of potential if the right person would let her out.. And I think you're doing a wonderful job of showing her inner turmoil.
    I'm not going to write what I've guessed, in case I'm wrong, but also because I want to see what you throw out there instead of what my strange brain comes up with.
    I really hope you continue with it :)
    Cheers,
    Danni
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