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Reviews for Rivalry

By : starstruck86
  • From tambrathegreat on October 27, 2009
    Nice build up of sexual tension for Snape. I wonder when Ron's going to get a clue about just why they hate each other so much. Severus is on his way.

    Lovely bit with the student. I'm glad Snape decided to do something about it before Ron had to ask him to.

    I am really enjoying this story, but can't write more. I think I have the flu.

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  • From badkittyuno on October 27, 2009
    enjoying the slow build up to the real smutty stuff. that last line was a real tease...
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  • From LadyZombie on October 27, 2009
    Great chappie! That Dunn has got some balls, eh? I had to laugh at Molly showing up to the infirmary. Poor Ron!

    And more custard. You don't fool me, you know. I just KNOW you'll have them do something positively filthy with that particular desert eventually.


    At any rate, it's looking up to be an interesting time now that Severus has caught the Weasley virus.




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  • From ANON - kai on October 27, 2009
    i love that you included the toys but it was interrupted so quickly!! but at least we got a jealous severus. great job as always. can't wait for the next installment!
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  • From ANON - Sheree on October 27, 2009
    I'm in cheap dime store novel heaven. This is great - does he/doesn't he, is he/isn't he, back and forth - Oh don't let this end - keep stretching this until it snaps.

    Can't wait for the next installment.
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  • From ANON - morganabythesea on October 26, 2009
    Loving everything as always!!! :-)
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  • From LadyZombie on October 24, 2009
    Another one!

    *mutters about trying to keep up with prolific authors*


    You're going to have a lot of fun building the tension up on this one, aren't you?

    And Ron should have known that you don't come between a man and his custard. hehehehe

    Can't wait until your weekend break and another new chapter is posted.
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  • From ANON - hairsprayX12 on October 23, 2009
    Aaah...Sev can be a bit of a wanker :P

    I'm really enjoying them trying to get the best of one another, and of course Sev just loves to be such an ass. Ron is so frigging hot when he comes off all smart ass like...heee...

    They really do strike sparks off each other, don't they?

    You know what would be funny, if Ron had a rival for Sev's affection, hee, Ron would get all jealous and poor Severus would be all oblivious

    Once again awesome beginning to what I'm sure will be another equally awesome Ron and Severus fic.
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  • From abbicee on October 23, 2009
    This promises to have some sparks flying around for a bit. I'm looking forward to the fireworks. So will Severus appologize or hold firm?
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  • From tambrathegreat on October 22, 2009
    Wow, what a start. I love that Ron and Snape are so hostile to each other. I know they will be at odds for a while, but wow, the things they say.

    Love this story. I can't wait to read more.
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  • From talley on October 22, 2009
    I like hearing both voices. Like antagonistic Snape. Like how all the professors are rallying around Snape like after hours get togethers and how they feel they can chide him about Ron. I'm excited about this one especially since you say it's going to be more of a build up.
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  • From SeraphimeRising on October 22, 2009
    So wonderful. I love the bitting sarcasm and the tension between the two. I can't wait to see how this develops
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  • From ANON - kai on October 22, 2009
    yay!! a new snape/ron fic. i'm very happy! and another dh compliment, i like this one. snape back as postions master and ron as a quidditch coach, awesome. can't wait to see how their relationship develops.

    also you mentioned ron owning toys?! any chance a chapter of him playing with said toys. MUHAHAHAHAHA...

    I REALLY WANT IT. PLEASE!!!
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  • From ANON - Sheree on October 22, 2009
    I don't even know where to begin - I love the snits and snaps! Not to mention the self flagulation and the spiteful thoughts. This looks delicious and can't wait for more!
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  • From badkittyuno on October 22, 2009
    Great start! Can't wait for more.
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