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Reviews for Free Love

By : CubStyxx
  • From Silverstargirl on May 07, 2011
    I think that sometimes people forget that this is fanfiction and won't necessarily fit 'the real world' exactly. It doesn't have to. This story is great and I am quite enjoying it, so keep up the fabulous work and don't let anyone get you down.
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  • From ANON - revelin on May 06, 2011
    i LOVE the story (please don't walk away from it) and I have no problem with the timelines (must be from reading douglas adams and dan simmons)!

    i did notice a couple of wordplay issues, but i can send that separately if you wish.

    ;) me
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  • From kowens on May 06, 2011
    Just caught up with the story. Thank you for explaining how Harry could have served in the military and still be 18 at this time in the story. To anyone else who may read this review - Remember, Harry is a wizard, people!! Your Severus is not too snarky and not too sentimental - he's juuust right. However, I can't help but think that Harry's actions in the last chapter seem to be the act of someone who is preparing for death, especially a teenager contemplating suicide - giving away his most precious possessions. I am not saying that is what he is doing, just my macabre little brain interpreting the events differently.
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  • From Chrysania on April 28, 2011
    I gotta say that I'm really enjoying the story. Of course, the parts that are most entertaining to me are your very interesting mistakes. Though, I have to agree with everyone having issues with the timeline. Of course, I'm a real stickler about those things. That being said, whenever my head starts to hurt from it not making sense with my vast knowledge of Harry Potter, I simply recite this mantra:

    "Time is not made out of lines, it is made of circles. That is why clocks are round." - Caboose (Red vs. Blue)


    I recommend that all naysayers do that. If you stop focusing on the timeline inconsistencies and, instead, look at the story, it's really good. After all, all 7th years are 19, right?
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  • From ANON - Doodle Penguin on April 27, 2011
    First I just want to say I do like this story. Very much so.... It's just that I've noticed a gap.... Exactly how old is Harry supposed to be in this? At first I thought 17/18 since he's in he's still attending hogwarts with everyone else. But then you have that bit about him serving 2 years in the Queens army... When could that have happened? I'm sure someone would have noticed if he'd just taken off for 2 years. Fighting in a wars not exactly something you can do in secret. So I was just wondering... That's a big gap I'n the middle of no where. Especialy since he's still attending hogwarts. The high school diploma is possible since there are a lot of correspondence schools out there. But the queens army bit... It's confusing.
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  • From dilemmalicious on April 25, 2011
    Well, I was pretty much in the groove with the fic until the latest chapter. Surprise, the United Kingdom is a foreign country. We don't graduate from high school, it's secondary school(and not sure Hogwarts uses). Thus no high school rings. Nothing like that over here. No graduation ceremonies, either. The cap and gown is university only. Military-wise, the UK does allow people 16 1/2 to join (with parental permission), but they aren't allowed to be deployed overseas. (two years in Iraq, and somehow nobody knows?)
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  • From ANON - Elfwyn on April 07, 2011
    Although the story Snarry portion is interesting the rest of it does leave one a bit confused. Just how did Harry get away from the wizarding world long enough to join the military, go through bootcamp, officers training, and then be shipped out of the country to fight, get wounded and discharged, let alone have time to form a what appears to have been a deep friendship with Daniel? This does not even cover his getting his muggle education.

    While yes he could have lied about his age to join the military early (although they do require birth certificates) there was no mention of time turners or a spell that sent him back in order to achieve all of this while still attending Hogwarts, fight Voldemort, and spending summers slaving at his relatives as in canon timeline. FYI, I think this was what the other review was asking.

    Just why does no one ever tell the headmaster to knock before entering a private room? Not that I can't see a gentleman raised during the Victorian era of ever doing something so rude.
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  • From MyaMalfoy on March 30, 2011
    YAY!!! Severus using the L word with Harry... even if it was just him saying you could grow to love him! Thanks so much for the new chapter, can't wait for the next update!

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  • From Jan on March 30, 2011
    15 please
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  • From ANON - wintrer_delight on March 29, 2011
    ok, don't get me wrong, i like the story but....what kind of timeline and age are we talking about for harry for all of this? in chapter 3 he went to gringotts and we know he is at least 18 because lucius said he claimed his in heritance at 18 with out having to do anything. in 6.5. he was going back to hogwarts for his final year (i'm assuming), ok cool that still pretty much falls in line with things. BUT now in the last chapter we find out that harry has a high school diploma and class ring... so when did he go to a muggle high school and graduate if he was at hogwarts as well as defeating voldermort? and he has dogtags from serving in the queens army in iraq for two years to be discharged after an injury??? i know this is fiction and i know it is a story filled with magic etc... but i hope you are going to fill in all these gaps that have been created by this last chapter. i'm not trying to be critical and mean no offense, i just hope that there is clarification as the story goes on.
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  • From ANON - Lumcer on March 24, 2011
    Lol how do you not mean to make a cliffy? *I'm giving you a very dubious stare right now, it's kind of sad you can't see it* anyway I'm liking this story so far I hope there is more soon!

    KCK-Lumcer
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  • From Jan on March 24, 2011

    Please update chapter 14 soon, I really like this story.

    Jan
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  • From soloflamelady on March 15, 2011
    I want to read more of this so bad I love seeing the relationship from both sides, and we should be able to see the relationship grow. Please update soon
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  • From ANON - dominique1 on March 08, 2011
    im think someone used the map because the map gives pass words i hope that its none of the snakes and way love happy to see a update
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  • From ANON - dominique1 on March 08, 2011
    yeah yes love it i do hope that everything works out
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