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Reviews for Atlantis - An Adventure

By : TheLadyMiya
  • From Nerys on February 18, 2010
    "Perhaps he overdid it. He hadn
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  • From Nerys on February 13, 2010
    Wails! All gone!

    And I had so much written.

    Anyway. I loved how you described how Hermione felt like shit. Very vivid and imaginative.

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  • From Nerys on February 13, 2010
    My whole review got eaten!

    *sobs*

    Must be the evil DA conspiracy.
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  • From luvneverfailsu on February 06, 2010
    PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE!!!!!! I'm dying over here I want to find out what happens next. KEEP UP the GREAT WORK!!!! Thank you!!
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  • From Nerys on February 02, 2010
    If I haven't said it already, I'll say it again, this I feel is one of your best stories yet. Your writing always improves so much with every story, it's amazing. And I love the plotidea of this one.

    Hmmm... interesting... the way Snape is acting. I wonder if you're keeping to canon with his "I killed DD on his orders and am really on the side of the Order". "even if she could never forgive him for killing Dumbledore, she found herself not so bothered by him as she had been." - And you make sure Hermione doesn't just overlook that he killed the Headmaster or was never nice to her in Hogwarts, but give her a reason for not being so bothered by him, now. Kudoos for that.

    "Voldemort there. He was pacing impatiently and when she came down, he grabbed her arm and took her into the library.


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  • From ANON - nonentity on January 29, 2010
    I love what an elaborate tale you're weaving. I also like the hints of what may or may not be UST, which is what's likely in this type of scenario. Also, I like how Voldemort isn't overly soft but is very focused on his goals.
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  • From Nerys on January 16, 2010
    Hi,

    Yes, chapter two. I remember it well, it was one of my favs. I liked it so much because you start with Hermione rationally overseeing the situation she is in now and how it fits with the way you describe the room. You no longer just say that there are two chairs, a bed and a nightstand in it; you give the surroundings more descriptions, which gives it more purpose and an athmosphere to the reader. I also like how you gave each character a room that fitted their personality. XD

    I also found it very logical she preferred not to disturb LV and went through Malfoy's room. Though, in hindsight the reverse would probably have been safer. LOL

    And I found it great that you have her worry about how they are going to treat her and how her friends and family will be concerned for her, while she also worried about being judge for liking the idea of doing the research. It's totally fitting with her character.

    Loved the little addition of the dark mark itching when LV is near. Nice little warning sign, too. You'll always know if he's around, so he can't sneak up on you, unless of course he can do something to make it not itch if he wants to. Shoot! He probably can. LOL

    "And, if I may suggest, while Lupin can borrow clothes from anyone of us, they will hardly fit Miss Granger.
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  • From mrequecky on January 10, 2010
    Yay! :D
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  • From TriniMinx on January 10, 2010
    Hey Miya -- great story!
    Love it so far, can't wait to read more.

    Of course, we all know Voldey will marry Hermie in the end...but I like him being all professional and less pyscho for now :)

    Update soon!
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  • From Avivafae on January 10, 2010
    I'm really loving this story. I wish there was a way to make sure to read each chapter as you update. I've always been fascinated with the legend of Atlantis and mixing it with Lord Voldemort, Hermione, Severus, Remus, and Lucius; is just so yummy. ^_^ It was a wonderful surprise to see it on the AFF listing. I do hope you get to update often so it's kept at the top of the story list!
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  • From winter748 on January 06, 2010
    Ok, I'm hooked. Very interesting story idea. Also, your writing is excellent as always.
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  • From Nerys on December 27, 2009
    Forgot to say that I will follow your lead, and read and review the story on this site. I too enjoy the lemons too much to go for the so-called "child appropriated" version on FFnet.


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  • From Nerys on December 26, 2009
    Hi,

    I am so glad you started posting this story. I absolutely enjoyed it and look forward to see where you've taken it in the end, (cough) even if that will be a long, long wait. (stares at last chapter that I read and sighs)
    But this beginning is very intriguing, so beta, beta, beta. sticks out tongue to Ankoku, who has her work cut out for her.
    Thanks and I am very very curious indeed to what will happen after "it". ;)

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  • From francesk15 on December 25, 2009
    ooh loved it, this looks exciting and promising.
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